Today I am asking ChatGPT6 questions and seeing what it has to say.
I am using OpenAI's ChatGPT-6 for this; if you want to try it yourself the software program is available here: https://openai.com/index/chatgpt
NOTE: My own personal ChatGPT, has had all the novels, novellas, poems, drabbles, and short stories of the entire Quaraun series fed into it - all published AND all unpublished stories, as well as all the world building lore texts, and all the character art, in total over FORTY MILLION words of text, and over fifteen thousand images, about my series and characters have been used to custom train my personal copy of ChatGPT, so mine is going to give responses quite differently then your's will.
I have been training my personal ChatGPT since August 2019, YES, since FOUR YEARS BEFORE ChatGPT's public release in November 2022, as I am part of the Beta Test Team, so am using beta test editions months before their public releases.... but I have been training my personal copy of ChatGPT, now for SEVEN years, so it is extremely well versed on my characters and the world they exist in, so do not expect your copy of ChatGPT to give the sort of results mine does, as it requires extensive LLM-AI training of the custom program to get the sort of results I get with mine.
Today, I decided to discuss
Currency in a zombie apocalypse
or How does the economy of Vesonta work?
or Do the UnSeelie Court use money?
with ChatGPT-6. Here is that conversation:
My question:
so yesterday, you gave me a list of daily topics to discuss, and we did the What makes UnSeelie UnSeelie, who can be a member of The UnSeelie Court... lets work today on this other option you gave me... lets start out by you telling me what you think the answer should or would be:
How does the economy of Vesonta work?
Quaraun sells silk. BoomFuzzy runs restaurants. Trade caravans travel between settlements. But who produces currency, who controls commerce, and what constitutes wealth?
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Oh, this is a good one, Wendy, because I think the economy of Vesonta could be one of the things that makes your world feel genuinely different from a conventional fantasy setting. You have a post-collapse civilization rebuilding itself on the ruins of the old world, an Iron Age level of everyday production, scattered human settlements, and an UnSeelie Court with an extraordinary concentration of wealth, technology, and specialized producers.
My starting theory is that Vesonta has a trade economy built around scarcity, monopolies of production, and unequal access to resources, rather than a simple system in which everybody earns coins and buys things in a marketplace.
And Quaraun and BoomFuzzy are excellent examples of why that distinction matters.
1. What actually constitutes wealth?2. Who produces currency?3. Who controls commerce?ProducerEconomic advantageQuaraunThe sole producer of silk and wool, alongside his other manufactured goods.BoomFuzzyThe sole producer of fine foods, backed by his restaurant businesses.The UnSeelie CourtAccess to the BioDome's crops, food production, and livestock, alongside its extensive trading network.GhoulSpawnTools, gadgets, furniture, and other manufactured goods.Independent settlementsTheir own local production, salvage, labor, and specialized resources.4. How does a merchant actually make a living?5. What makes Quaraun wealthy?6. What would I establish as the basic economic rules of Vesonta?The big question I would settle next
I think Vesonta has several different kinds of wealth, and they do not necessarily translate into one another.
The interesting part is that these forms of wealth can be wildly unequal.
A village might possess a chest full of silver coins and still face starvation because nobody nearby has food to sell. A blacksmith might possess almost no money yet be extraordinarily valuable because every farmer in the region needs repaired tools.
And somebody with a working computer component might possess something worth more than a wagonload of silver, depending on who needs it and what that component can do.
In other words, wealth is not simply what a person owns. It is also what that person can produce, provide, repair, or control.
This is where I would be careful about importing modern economic assumptions into Vesonta.
In the world you have described, civilization collapsed, populations became scattered, and the old infrastructure disappeared. A universal currency requires something to give it credibility: an authority that issues it, a market that accepts it, or a commodity that people recognize as valuable.
I see three plausible systems for Vesonta.
Option A: Old-world money survives
People still trade old coins, bullion, and recovered currency. Some settlements might recognize pre-collapse money, while others consider it scrap metal. Nobody necessarily controls its production anymore.
Option B: Commodity money
People use silver by weight, gold, copper, gemstones, or other scarce materials as money. The value comes from the material itself, although local demand determines what people will actually accept.
Option C: Merchant credit and exchange accounts
Established merchants maintain accounts, recognize debts, and honor obligations across caravan routes. A merchant might accept goods today in exchange for a promise of goods at the next seasonal market.
My preference would be a combination of all three, with one important distinction: Vesonta does not necessarily have a universally accepted currency.
A settlement might use recovered coins. A caravan might weigh silver. Two merchants with longstanding relationships might settle their accounts through exchanged goods. A village might pay for repairs in preserved food, firewood, or livestock.
Currency could exist without being the foundation of every transaction.
And this answers the question of who produces it: perhaps nobody produces a universally accepted currency. Local authorities might mint coins, but minting a coin does not automatically make everybody else trust it.
I would leave the existence of any official UnSeelie currency undecided until we establish whether the Court actually needs one.
Here, I think Vesonta gets particularly interesting.
The UnSeelie Court does not need to control every shop, market, or merchant to possess enormous economic power. It already has something much more consequential: control over important productive resources and access to things other people cannot easily obtain.
Consider the established arrangement.
The Court has the advantage of scale. Its approximately 400 families, numbering more than 3,000 people, form a substantial population and productive community compared with isolated settlements.
Its seasonal merchant caravans can connect places that otherwise have limited access to outside goods.
But I would distinguish between controlling production and controlling commerce.
Quaraun does not have to own every caravan that transports his silk. He can sell his merchandise to a caravan operator, trade directly with another merchant, or arrange a longer-term exchange. Likewise, BoomFuzzy's ownership of restaurant businesses does not automatically mean that he controls every food market on the planet.
The strongest economic power belongs to whoever controls a necessary resource that other people cannot readily replace.
That power might belong to the Court collectively, to one of its rulers, to an independent merchant, or to someone who possesses an old-world machine nobody else knows how to repair.
And the Court's power is not necessarily the same thing as government ownership. We should preserve the distinction between the Court as a ruling clan and the personal property of its individual members.
I suspect the practical economy of Vesonta works through chains of exchange.
Imagine a caravan arriving at an isolated coastal settlement.
The caravan brings silk, wool, preserved fine foods, manufactured goods, and supplies acquired elsewhere. The settlement offers recovered metals, gemstones, books, colored glass, computer components, and repair materials.
The caravan then transports those acquisitions to another destination, where somebody needs them more urgently.
The value of the goods changes according to location and demand.
A box of computer components might be useless to a community without the knowledge or equipment to use them. At another settlement, where a technician can repair a power system with those exact components, the same box might be worth a fortune.
That creates opportunities for merchants who understand the world beyond their home settlement.
They do not simply transport goods. They know who needs what, where supplies are scarce, what can be repaired, and which exchanges will make the next journey possible.
Quaraun's silk business fits beautifully into this system. He produces something scarce, portable, valuable, and difficult to reproduce. His merchandise can travel across long distances without requiring him to transport an entire agricultural operation.
BoomFuzzy has a different advantage. Food is a recurring necessity, while fine foods are a specialized product. His restaurant empire can generate wealth through repeated sales, and his food businesses give him an economic role distinct from Quaraun's textile production.
One merchant sells something that people may preserve and use for years. The other sells something that people consume and need again.
Neither business needs to operate exclusively through coin payments.
This is an important distinction in your particular setting.
Quaraun is not merely a shopkeeper who happens to possess expensive merchandise. He is an independently wealthy merchant who owns his former-Maine coastal territory, produces scarce goods, and controls his own commercial interests.
His wealth therefore has several layers:
His position does not depend on being married to BoomFuzzy. Quaraun already possessed his wealth and territory before they met.
That matters because the two husbands bring different economic powers into their family. BoomFuzzy has his own wealth from his food businesses; Quaraun has his own wealth from his merchant enterprises and property.
Their marriage does not need to merge their businesses into a single company or make one husband financially dependent on the other.
In fact, I think that makes their household more interesting. They can cooperate, exchange goods, share resources, and support one another without losing their separate economic identities.
If I were building the system from the canon we have so far, I would start with these principles.
There is no assumption of a universal currency.
Money might exist in many forms, but barter, commodity exchange, and merchant credit remain important.
Production creates economic power.
People who can reliably produce scarce necessities or specialized goods possess leverage beyond the money they hold.
Transportation creates markets.
Caravans connect isolated producers and consumers, allowing goods to acquire value far from where they originated.
Ownership and political authority are separate questions.
A ruler might control access to a resource without personally owning every business that uses it.
Old-world technology creates extraordinary concentrations of wealth.
A functioning machine, a rare component, or the knowledge to repair something irreplaceable might matter more than precious metals.
One final thought: I would not make the economy entirely barter-based just because Vesonta is post-collapse. Barter works well between people who have goods each other wants, but it becomes cumbersome across large networks. Merchant credit, recognized debts, commodity money, and negotiated contracts could emerge quite naturally as trade expands.
That gives you a civilization that is rebuilding sophisticated economic relationships without necessarily rebuilding modern banking or a standardized national currency.
I think the most consequential unresolved issue is not what the coins look like. It is whether the UnSeelie Court's economic power comes primarily from its control of production, or whether it has deliberately established a system to regulate trade throughout Vesonta.
Those lead to very different worlds.
Does the Court simply produce and trade goods, becoming wealthy because it has resources nobody else can match? Or does it also set tariffs, regulate caravan access, establish trading privileges, and decide which merchants can sell particular goods in its territory?
My instinct is that the Court has considerable economic influence, but I would not automatically give it a planet-wide commercial monopoly. That would need to emerge from your existing political structure, rather than being assumed simply because BoomFuzzy is king.
My question:
with the list item "merchent credits" you listed a picture it... what exactly is that thing in the picture?
ChatGPT-6's answer:
The picture beside “Merchant credit and exchange accounts” was intended to show an old-fashioned merchant's accounting desk.
It depicts a merchant's ledger, a handwritten bookkeeping record, alongside a balance scale and counting equipment.
Before modern banking, merchants used ledgers to record who owed them money, what goods had been exchanged, and which debts had been paid.
For example, a merchant might deliver 20 yards of silk to another merchant without receiving immediate payment. Instead, the transaction would be recorded in a ledger, and the buyer would settle the debt later with coins, goods, or another agreed form of payment.
The picture was an illustrative image, not a photograph of one specific historical artifact.
Were you asking about the handwritten book, or one of the other objects shown beside it?
My question:
hmmm... nope, it is an actual photograph, of what appears to be a museum display, there is no book.
there is a wooden box, which opens like a book and has 2 fold out drawers on each side, a smal folding set of scales pulls out of one drawer, what appears to be a wax sealing set (burner, bowl, ect) in another drawer, and then 2 drawers with square indents carved into it and square metals pieces in each slot, but the metal squares look like different types of coin minting blanks?
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Oh! That is a very different object from what I described!
From your description, it sounds like a portable merchant's money-changing or assaying kit, possibly an antique coin-weighing box.
The folding balance scales would have been used to weigh coins or precious metals. Historically, merchants and money changers needed to check whether coins contained the expected amount of metal, particularly when trading with people who used different currencies.
The square metal pieces in fitted compartments are especially interesting. They might be coin weights, rather than coin-minting blanks. Coin weights were manufactured to correspond to the standard weight of particular coins. A merchant could place a coin on one side of the balance and the corresponding weight on the other to check whether the coin was underweight.
The other equipment could be associated with sealing documents, testing metals, or preparing transactions, although I cannot identify it confidently without seeing it.
One possibility is a historical coin scale and weight set, sometimes called a money changer's balance box.
The unusual part is the elaborate folding wooden case with multiple drawers. That sounds like a more specialized or expensive instrument than an ordinary pocket coin scale.
Could you share a screenshot of the photograph? I'd love to identify the actual object, especially those square metal pieces. They may reveal exactly what the kit was designed to do.
My question:
this is the image you gave in the list
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Oh, WOW! Now I see exactly what you were describing! And you were right about those little metal squares.
This is an antique coin-weighing kit, also known as a money changer's balance and coin-weight box.
And the really interesting thing is that those square metal pieces are almost certainly coin weights, not coins or coin-minting blanks.
Here's what you're looking at:
1. The wooden folding case: This is a portable money changer's equipment box. The compartments hold different standardized weights, and the folding design keeps everything organized during travel.
2. The square brass pieces: These are coin weights. Notice how many have different designs stamped into them? Those designs identify the particular coins each weight was intended to represent. Some depict symbols, coats of arms, or figures associated with historical currencies.
3. The hanging balance: The horizontal metal bar at the top is a balance beam. The two suspended pans were used to compare a coin against its corresponding standard weight.
4. The round depression in the center: This appears to be a storage recess for part of the balance apparatus, rather than a burner or wax-sealing bowl.
5. The removable trays: These hold additional sets of coin weights. The little handwritten labels and markings may identify denominations or weight standards.
What makes this especially fascinating is that merchants historically had to deal with coins from different kingdoms and cities, often with different weights and precious-metal contents.
A gold coin might have an official denomination, but that didn't guarantee it contained the proper amount of gold. Coins could be worn down, clipped around their edges, or counterfeited.
So a merchant could select the brass weight corresponding to a particular gold coin, place the weight on one pan, and place the actual coin on the other.
If the coin was too light, the merchant knew something was wrong.
And this is wonderfully relevant to the economy of Vesonta!
Imagine Quaraun arriving at a settlement where people offer him coins recovered from different civilizations, minted hundreds or even thousands of years apart.
Rather than trusting the face value stamped on the coins, he could use a kit like this to establish whether their weight matched an accepted standard.
It would be especially useful in a world where no single government necessarily controls currency.
One additional detail: the elaborate decoration and extensive collection of weights suggest this was a fairly sophisticated instrument, potentially used by a professional money changer or merchant dealing in multiple currencies.
I can't confidently date this particular example or identify its maker from the photograph alone, but it looks consistent with European historical coin-weight boxes.
And I have to say, your observation about the square pieces resembling minting blanks was a good one. They're very similar in appearance, but their stamped designs and fitted storage compartments are exactly what I'd expect from a collection of coin weights.
My question:
ah... so with that info, I was able to locate the source of the image and find out what it was. it says this in the description of the image:
Scales & weights for the use of money changers, German 1653
Science Museum Group
© The Board of Trustees of the Science Museum
Scales & weights for the use of money changers, German 1653, in carved wooden box, 43 weights in all [15+4+10+14]
This equal-arm balance was used for checking the purity of gold coins. The weight of a suspect coin is balanced against special weights equivalent to coin being tested. The set of scales contains weights for most of the gold coins in circulation at this time in Western Europe.
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Oh, that's a wonderful find! Germany, 1653, with 43 different coin weights! And now we know exactly what we were looking at.
What I find particularly interesting is that the kit contained weights for most of the gold coins circulating throughout Western Europe at the time.
That tells us something important about historical commerce: merchants didn't necessarily need everyone to use the same currency to conduct business across political borders.
A German money changer could accept a French, Spanish, or Dutch gold coin, identify its type, and compare its weight against the appropriate standard. The balance could reveal an underweight coin, although weight alone couldn't establish its purity. A counterfeit made with another metal might still weigh the correct amount.
And that brings us right back to Vesonta!
This is exactly the sort of economic technology that could be useful in a world of scattered settlements, independent territories, and traveling merchants.
I can imagine Quaraun carrying a specialized set of weights, particularly if different settlements use different coins. He wouldn't necessarily care whose face appeared on a coin. He'd care about its metal content and whether he could exchange it for something valuable elsewhere.
There's another detail I particularly like: the kit itself represents a form of economic infrastructure.
It doesn't produce money. It doesn't regulate commerce. It doesn't require a central bank. Instead, it allows merchants to establish a common standard for evaluating different currencies.
And that leads me to a question about Vesonta that I hadn't considered when we started discussing its economy.
Does Quaraun actually accept coins as payment for his silk, or does he primarily trade his merchandise for precious metals, gemstones, salvage, and other goods?
Because those are two quite different economic systems, and the answer would tell us a great deal about how commerce works between the settlements.
My question:
I could see Quaraun actually collecting these sets, just to collect them, Quaraun loves antiques and these are the sorts of antiques he'd look for. These kits themselves would act as a currency, if a village knew Quaraun was coming to their town, having a rare antique artifact of historical significance, is a thing Quaraun would value far more then money.
You said: Does Quaraun actually accept coins as payment for his silk, or does he primarily trade his merchandise for precious metals, gemstones, salvage, and other goods?
coins are uncommon, as there are only a handful of large towns left on the planet. The UnSeelie Court with its 400 families/3k+ people is the worls largest community. Most villages have a dozen or so families, maybe a hundred people at most, but even villages themselves are uncommon. Most communities are make shift settlments, think like Rick's group in the Walking dead, hunkered down on a farm for a few months, in a prison for a couple years, on the road for months to a time... that is the way most communities are: 10 maybe 20 people traveling together, hunkered down for a few weeks or a few months wherever they can find a safe place to camp. Its rare to find a group with even 50 people, let alone 100... that is why groups like Snollegoster's, Findaru's, and BoomFuzzy's are able to just call themselves king and not be challanged... these 3 groups are massive, each with a few hundred families banded together, making them highly unusual, because they have so many people in a unit. BoomFuzzy is literaly designed to LOOK like King Ezikiel because he's basically a fanfiction version of King Ezikiel. The UnSeelie Court functions like The Kingdom, they have a settled location with farms, they have families willing to raise livestock and crops and guard the walls and raise the children, as a huge organized unit loyal to a flamboyant man who calls himself king, is kind to his people but a selfless viscious fighter and prote tor when enemies attack... the world fears BoomFuzzy, but The UnSeelie Court adores and respects BoomFuzzy... Snolleygoster is similar to Gregory while Findaru is similar to Negan...but outside of these 3 very large groups, most of the rest of the world is tiny groups huddles in bunkers and ruins of Walmarts... so there is no currency in production and there hasn't been for centuries.
coins are useless to the bulk of communities
however... Quaraun owns a dragon, so communities will save every coin they come across in the hopes that one day they will cross paths with The Pink Necromancer, and strike a trade deal in exchange for the coins... to everyone else on the planet, coins are worthless... to Quaraun, they are gifts to his dragon, glitter she can add to her hoarde.
also Quaraun can not count, he has no concept of money on terms of numbers, he isn't even able to grapse the concept of how much wealth he actually owns. Quaraun is a serverly savant neurodivergant, not unsimilar to Rainman... Quaraun can recite ancient texts, he can weave and embroider exceptional coths, he can cast awe inspiring magic, but, beyond that Quaraun has little mental or physical capacity for anything else
when Quaraun first met BoomFuzzy, BoomFuzzy was still the Elf Eater and he let Quaraun go free while saying "the poor wee lil Elf be too stupid to know who I is or what I do". BoomFuzzy couldn't bring himself to kill an Elf that lacked the mental ability to understand he was even in danger. BoomFuzzy, as you recall, was killing people on a vengeance spiral for the murder of his mother snd grandmother, he wanted people to know why they were being slaughtered, and Quaraun couldn't grasp the concept of vengeance at all. BoomFuzzy simple could not in good conscience kill an Elf that was too mentally unable to understand the world around him.
that Quaraun is a fabulously wealthy merchant, or highly degreed wizard, has nothing to do with his intelligence or desire for wealth. Quaraun simply has a savaunt obsession with studying books on magic and weaving and embroidering silk.
So when You said: Does Quaraun actually accept coins as payment for his silk, or does he primarily trade his merchandise for precious metals, gemstones, salvage, and other goods?
Quaraun takes whatever is pretty, whatever glitters, whatever his dragon might like, whatever he can use... coins, yes, but their value is in how shiny they are, be they tin or gold, does not matter at all. gemstones yes, but simple shiny large chunks of mica or pyrite as well... the glitter itself matters more to Quaraun then any monteary worth. shards of stained glass, can get more items from Quaraun then a oin, because coins are just yellow and grey, while stained glass comes in pink and blue. lumps of slag glass are highly prized by Quaraun, as are the little milk glass hen in a basket candy dishes from the 1920s. A single tiny pink ceramic animal nicknack from the 1940s can get more silks and soaps and candles and pottery from Quaraun then an entire chest of coins.
Books being very rare, are prized above all else. Quaraun will eagerly hand over an entire wagon load of supplies for a single tome he does not yet own a copy of.
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Oh! Now THAT changes my entire understanding of Vesonta's economy!
And I think the most important revelation here is that Quaraun is fabulously wealthy by everyone else's standards, but he isn't participating in an economy based on monetary value at all.
He's participating in an economy of personal fascination, aesthetic preference, practical usefulness, and obsessive collecting.
And the people trading with him know it.
That creates a wonderfully unusual situation where the wealthiest merchant on the planet might happily exchange a wagonload of valuable supplies for a little pink ceramic animal that somebody found in the ruins of a farmhouse.
Not because he's foolishly trying to make a profitable transaction. Not because he has calculated the object's rarity. But because he likes it.
And he may reject a chest of gold coins offered by the next customer because none of them interest him.
1. Vesonta isn't a civilization of villages. It's a civilization of survivors.2. Quaraun's economy is not a monetary economy3. The value of an object depends on who's tradingOffered to QuaraunWhat Quaraun might giveA chest of gold coinsA modest assortment of goods, primarily because his dragon likes the coinsA large piece of pink slag glassSeveral valuable lengths of silkA little 1940s pink ceramic animalSilks, candles, soaps, pottery, and other suppliesA rare antique coin-weighing kitAn exceptionally generous exchange, especially if he doesn't own oneA book absent from his collectionPotentially an entire wagonload of supplies4. Quaraun's dragon creates a secondary economy5. Books might be the most valuable objects in Quaraun's economy6. BoomFuzzy's relationship with Quaraun makes more sense now7. So what is the economy of Vesonta?
This is the biggest correction to my earlier model.
I had imagined scattered but relatively stable communities, with enough population and infrastructure to support regional marketplaces.
What you've described is much closer to the social structure of The Walking Dead.
Most people aren't living in functioning villages. They're living in temporary survival groups.
Ten or twenty people might occupy an abandoned building for a season, move into the remains of a supermarket, shelter on a farm, or travel for months without establishing a permanent home.
A settlement of fifty people is unusual. A village of a hundred is rare.
And a community of three thousand people is absolutely enormous.
That means the UnSeelie Court, Findaru's followers, and Snolleygoster's people aren't simply three powerful political factions among dozens of comparable kingdoms.
They're extraordinary concentrations of organized population in a world where almost nobody can sustain a community of that size.
Their leaders can call themselves kings because they possess something most other people don't: hundreds of families who cooperate, maintain a stable community, produce resources, and recognize a shared authority.
And this means I need to revise something else I said earlier.
I suggested that the UnSeelie Court might regulate regional commerce through tariffs, currency, and trading privileges.
But why would BoomFuzzy need to do that?
He rules a large, organized, productive community in a world where most people are struggling to keep a dozen companions alive.
The Court's economic advantage is its ability to remain organized, grow food, manufacture goods, and maintain trade networks.
Its size alone makes it exceptional.
I think there's a very important difference between calling Quaraun a merchant and assuming that he understands commerce the way a modern shopkeeper does.
Quaraun produces exceptional silk because weaving is one of his savant abilities and consuming interests.
He studies magic because he has an extraordinary capacity for memorizing and working with ancient magical texts.
He collects objects because their colors, textures, beauty, history, or other qualities fascinate him.
The fact that these activities have made him unimaginably wealthy is almost incidental to his own understanding of them.
And the fact that he cannot count or comprehend numerical wealth means his merchant activities cannot depend on the conventional calculations of profit, loss, or monetary value.
But that doesn't mean he has no preferences or cannot make decisions.
He knows whether he wants an object.
He knows whether he already owns a particular book.
He knows whether a piece of stained glass has the color he wants.
He knows whether a particular artifact belongs in his collection.
His decisions are based on a completely different system of value from the one an economist would use.
And this creates a fascinating distinction between Quaraun's actual wealth and his perception of wealth.
The rest of the world might consider him a quadrillionaire.
Quaraun might consider himself fortunate because somebody gave him a pink glass hen.
I love the implications of your examples, because they turn conventional fantasy trading upside down.
Consider these hypothetical transactions:
These aren't established exchange rates, of course. They're illustrations of the value system you've described.
And what's especially interesting is that other people can learn his preferences.
Imagine a small group sheltering in the ruins of a department store. They discover an old display case filled with glass figurines.
Most survivors might dismiss the figurines as useless. They cannot eat them, wear them, burn them for heat, or repair a shelter with them.
But somebody who knows about the Pink Necromancer might recognize an extraordinary opportunity.
They don't need to find gold.
They need to find something Quaraun would love.
And if they encounter his caravan, that little figurine could become food, cloth, candles, soap, or other supplies their entire group desperately needs.
In a world without a functioning currency, knowledge of Quaraun's tastes becomes economically valuable in its own right.
This is another detail I hadn't considered.
The coins don't have to function as currency to become valuable trade goods.
People save coins specifically because they know Quaraun has a dragon who collects them.
That's extraordinary because it creates a market for an otherwise largely useless object.
And the dragon doesn't necessarily care whether a coin was once worth one dollar, ten dollars, or a thousand dollars.
A shiny piece of tin might be just as appealing as gold.
This means a survivor who discovers a handful of coins in an abandoned building has found something that might be exchanged for supplies, provided they can eventually reach Quaraun.
But there's an important limitation: Quaraun's willingness to accept an object doesn't make that object universally valuable.
A coin might be worthless in one settlement, prized by Quaraun, and worthless again to someone who has never heard of him.
So coins have not become the currency of Vesonta. They've become a particular kind of trade merchandise.
And Quaraun's dragon is effectively creating demand for them.
I think this is my favorite part of the entire system.
In a civilization where books are extraordinarily rare, Quaraun values them above virtually everything else.
But unlike gold, a book's value to him is not necessarily determined by its age, material, or historical significance.
Its contents and whether he already owns it matter.
A manuscript that other people consider worthless could be worth an entire wagon of supplies to Quaraun if it contains information he wants.
That makes books especially interesting because they possess two kinds of value simultaneously.
They have informational value, because they preserve knowledge from civilizations that no longer exist.
And they have personal value, because Quaraun is driven to collect and study them.
In a world where knowledge has disappeared along with its institutions, Quaraun's library might also be one of the planet's greatest concentrations of surviving information.
He doesn't need to understand the economic significance of owning it for that significance to exist.
Your explanation of their first encounter adds another dimension to this.
BoomFuzzy recognized that Quaraun couldn't comprehend the danger he faced or the vengeance motivating the Elf Eater.
That wasn't Quaraun pretending to be innocent, nor a clever negotiation to escape. He genuinely couldn't understand what BoomFuzzy expected him to understand.
And BoomFuzzy, despite his vengeance, refused to kill someone who couldn't comprehend why he was being targeted.
That distinction is important for Quaraun's characterization.
He can be cunning in situations he understands. He can be extraordinarily capable at magic and textiles. He can pursue what he wants with tremendous determination.
But none of those abilities magically gives him the capacity to understand numbers, monetary value, or the motivations of other people.
His abilities are profoundly uneven.
I also think this means we shouldn't automatically assume BoomFuzzy manages Quaraun's finances. Quaraun's businesses existed long before their marriage, and how those businesses functioned without conventional numerical accounting is an interesting worldbuilding question in its own right.
With these new details, I would revise my original answer considerably.
Vesonta has a predominantly nonmonetary, survival-based exchange economy, with rare concentrations of organized production and trade.
Most people don't have wages, bank accounts, or a regular marketplace. They belong to small, mobile groups that gather, salvage, make, and exchange whatever they need to survive.
The few enormous organized communities possess an overwhelming advantage because they can sustain agriculture, livestock, specialized manufacturing, and long-distance commerce.
There has been no new currency production for centuries. Recovered coins survive as curiosities, collectibles, metal resources, and specialized trade goods, rather than general-purpose money.
And Quaraun represents a very unusual economic force: a merchant whose extraordinary production and personal collecting interests redistribute valuable manufactured goods in exchange for objects that might have little practical use to anyone else.
In a conventional economy, people become wealthy by accumulating things other people consider valuable.
In Quaraun's economy, people can obtain valuable necessities by discovering things Quaraun considers beautiful, interesting, or worth preserving.
That's a striking difference.
There's one question I'd really like to explore next, because it could explain how Quaraun's trade caravans function.
When Quaraun visits a group of ten or twenty survivors who have absolutely nothing pretty, antique, glittery, or interesting to offer him, what does he do?
Does he refuse to trade? Does he accept something mundane, like firewood, fish, or labor? Does he simply give them supplies because he doesn't understand or care about the financial implications?
Or does his reaction depend entirely on whether he happens to like the people?
I ask because the answer could establish something fundamental about Vesonta: whether Quaraun's caravan is primarily a commercial enterprise, a traveling collection obsession, or something that functions as both without Quaraun himself recognizing the distinction.
My question:
You said: When Quaraun visits a group of ten or twenty survivors who have absolutely nothing pretty, antique, glittery, or interesting to offer him, what does he do?
Does he refuse to trade? Does he accept something mundane, like firewood, fish, or labor? Does he simply give them supplies because he doesn't understand or care about the financial implications?
Or does his reaction depend entirely on whether he happens to like the people?
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there is a published story, that perhaps is the best answer to this question, rather them me explaining the answe:
The Heirloom
The survivor sat hunched by the flickering warmth of BoomFuzzy’s stove, their breath clouding the frigid air. Torn leather gloves clutched a simple silver locket, worn smooth from years of anxious handling. The survivor's eyes, shadowed by hardship, flicked nervously between Quaraun and BoomFuzzy.
“I ain’t got much left,” the survivor admitted. “But this—” They held up the locket, their voice cracking. “It belonged to my mother. It’s all I have.”
Quaraun’s long silver ears twitched, chains tinkling faintly. His blue eyes narrowed with disdain as he inspected the tarnished trinket. "Do you truly think I need more baubles? I am Quaraun, The Pink Necromancer, Wizard of the DiJinn Order. I weave silk worth more than this entire wasteland.”
BoomFuzzy shot him a warning glance. “Love, yer regal bahookie cannae intimidate the desperate.”
The Phooka ladled steaming stroganoff into a wooden bowl and placed it in front of the survivor. The aroma mingled with frost-bitten air, a small miracle in the cold, cruel world.
Quaraun sighed dramatically. “Very well. I shall accept your offering.” He took the locket with exaggerated reluctance, as though it offended his noble sensibilities.
Behind him, GhoulSpawn's golden pleco eyes gleamed with curiosity.
Quaraun handed the locket to the Sheep Demon with a discreet flick of his gold prosthetic hand. "Slip it back into their pocket," Quaraun whispered imperiously.
GhoulSpawn blinked. "Why?"
"I am a villain, not heartless," Quaraun said, nose high. "Besides, I detest clutter."
As the survivor ate with tearful gratitude, GhoulSpawn crouched behind them with all the subtlety of a hyperactive gazelle.
“Did you just—” the survivor began, turning around.
“Checking the structural integrity of your coat,” GhoulSpawn said brightly.
The survivor blinked but said nothing, warmth returning to their weathered face.
BoomFuzzy grinned. “Softie,” he whispered to Quaraun.
“I am not,” Quaraun huffed. "I merely prefer efficiency in misery."
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Oh, Wendy, this answers the question beautifully, because it reveals something that a list of economic rules never could.
Quaraun's trade practices are not the same thing as his personal morality. And neither is the same thing as his understanding of money.
Look at what he actually does in The Heirloom.
He accepts the locket. He makes a grand performance of its inadequacy, announces his own importance, and pretends to be offended by the quality of the offering. He maintains his pride and his reputation as a villain.
Then he quietly gives the locket back.
He does not tell the survivor that he is being charitable. He does not embarrass them by announcing that they need the locket more than he does. He arranges for GhoulSpawn to return it without the survivor knowing, and lets them retain their dignity while receiving BoomFuzzy's hospitality.
And his explanation is perfect for him:
"I am a villain, not heartless."
That tells us something crucial about how Quaraun's economy works in practice.
He can conduct a transaction without actually wanting to keep the payment. He can accept an offering as part of the social ritual of trade, then quietly undo the exchange when the circumstances call for it.
He does not need to calculate the monetary value of the locket. He does not need to decide whether the survivor has offered enough. He understands that the person is desperate, that the locket matters to them, and that taking it would be cruel.
His response is to preserve the appearance of a transaction while ensuring the survivor loses nothing.
And notice that BoomFuzzy has already fed the person. The food is not conditional upon Quaraun accepting the locket. Hospitality has already happened. The locket exchange is a separate interaction, and Quaraun's theatrics allow him to conceal what he does next.
I also love that Quaraun does not suddenly become sweet and gentle. He remains vain, imperious, theatrical, and insulting. His compassion does not erase his personality.
That matters for the economic worldbuilding, too.
A survivor might approach Quaraun with nothing worth trading. Perhaps they have only a little food, a worn garment, or a possession that matters to them personally. Quaraun's response does not have to follow a fixed commercial policy. He can trade, refuse, accept something and return it, or simply allow BoomFuzzy to feed them.
And he can do all of this without ever understanding how much money he has, or calculating whether a transaction benefits him financially.
The important distinction is that Quaraun's lack of numerical understanding does not prevent him from making meaningful choices. His decisions follow the things he can comprehend: his interests, his collections, his obsessions, his pride, and his responses to the people in front of him.
I would therefore amend my original description of Vesonta's economy one more time.
It is not merely an economy in which conventional money has disappeared. It is a world in which exchange can be driven by entirely different motivations depending on who is involved. For most survivors, trade is about obtaining necessities. For Quaraun, it can be about acquiring beautiful or fascinating objects. For BoomFuzzy, a restaurant owner and king, feeding people can be an act of hospitality independent of any transaction.
And The Heirloom demonstrates that these systems can overlap without becoming identical.
One thing I would be careful not to assume, though, is that Quaraun secretly gives everything away or that every trade ends this way. This story establishes what he does in this particular situation. It does not mean every desperate person receives the same response.
That tension is much more interesting than making him either a purely mercenary merchant or a secretly benevolent one. He remains Quaraun: a villain who can be cruel, vain, and self-serving, yet still draw a line he will not cross.
And apparently, he draws that line without needing to know what the locket is worth.
My question:
when you said: One thing I would be careful not to assume, though, is that Quaraun secretly gives everything away or that every trade ends this way. This story establishes what he does in this particular situation. It does not mean every desperate person receives the same response.
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Another published story answers this as well:
The Great Widdershins Swindle
The frozen wasteland stretched far and wide, a kingdom of ice and ruin beneath a shattered moon. Crumbling buildings stood like ancient tombstones in the frostbitten earth, their skeletal remains casting long shadows beneath the eldritch glow of distant, dying stars.
Quaraun’s vardo rattled into the crumbling human settlement, drawn by mechanical beasts of brass and bone, their red eyes glowing in the perpetual twilight. He stepped down, his silk robes swirling, the venomous silver strands of his jellyfish hair slithering with a mind of their own. He carried himself like a highborn merchant prince, though he was, in truth, nothing but a peddler of phantasms and folly.
BoomFuzzy leapt from the cart, a short, broad beast of a man wrapped in black hakama and a plaid great kilt. His wild grey dreadlocks were tied with purple ribbons, his enormous steampunk goggles hiding the ghostly silver of his nearly sightless eyes. With the air of a drunken bard and the swagger of a warlord, he bellowed to the haggard crowd.
"Free food! Getcha hot food! Warm stew! Breads ye ain't seen since afore the world went ta shite!" His voice rang out, rough as gravel, thick with a Scots burr that made him sound both foolish and fearsome.
A horde of starving survivors stumbled forward, drawn by the scent of roasted meat and melting butter, a fragrance so rich, so impossible, it could not be true. But there stood BoomFuzzy, ladling steaming broth from a great cauldron into wooden bowls, passing out soft loaves of bread, their golden crusts an impossible luxury in a world stripped bare.
"How—how is this possible?" a ragged woman gasped, cradling the bread as though it were a sacred relic.
"Magic," BoomFuzzy said with a grin, though his silver eyes gleamed with something darker. The illusion held—for now.
While the crowd pressed closer, GhoulSpawn moved through them, silent as a shadow. His long green Fagin coat, tattered and patched, concealed a dozen hidden pockets, each deeper than the laws of reality permitted. With deft, nimble fingers, he slipped between desperate souls, plucking pouches of coins, scavenged tools, and even trinkets Quaraun had sold just moments before.
Quaraun, standing at his makeshift stall, smiled his most dignified, highfalutin smile, as he gestured to his wares—fine silks, enchanted baubles, vials of "miracle elixirs" that promised warmth against the endless winter.
"This, my dear fellows, is no ordinary fabric! Nay! This silk is woven from Moon Moth larvae, rarest of the rare, known to ward off sickness and chill alike. You will ne’er shiver again whilst clad in such finery!"
A grizzled man, his teeth yellowed and cracked, squinted at the shimmering cloth. "How do I know it's not a bunch of flimflam?"
Quaraun gasped, a hand over his heart. "Flimflam? Poppycock! Do I look like a scoundrel? A charlatan? A dunderheaded lackwit peddling balderdash? No, good sir! This fabric is worth ten times what I ask, but I am feeling generous today."
The man hesitated, then handed over a pouch of coins. Quaraun swept them into his sleeve with a flourish, pressing the folded silk into the man’s trembling hands. "May you never again know the curse of cold," he said solemnly.
The man shuffled away, clutching his prize. And, unnoticed, GhoulSpawn ghosted behind him, slipping the very same silk from his hands before he had walked five paces. The bundle vanished into the abyss of GhoulSpawn’s coat. Moments later, Quaraun was reselling it to another eager fool.
BoomFuzzy continued his performance, barking to the crowd, keeping their eyes fixed on the miracle of hot food. "Ain't no catch! Ain't no cost! Just eat an’ be merry, afore the zombies come eat you!" He cackled, a madman’s laugh, full of wicked mirth.
The crowd gobbled down the feast, greed blinding them to the trick. None noticed that as soon as they turned away, their bowls emptied, their bellies remained as hollow as before. They still felt the gnawing ache of hunger, the cold still bit into their bones, but the illusion of warmth lingered just long enough to keep them from questioning.
Quaraun continued his sales, his eloquent spiel dazzling, his pockets filling with coin, while GhoulSpawn wove through the throng, gathering back the wares as fast as they were sold. And when the town's supplies were stripped near bare, when the last coin had been exchanged, the last stolen trinket secured, BoomFuzzy let out a deafening—
"BOOM!"
The crowd shrieked, startled, turning in every direction, seeking the source of the explosion. But there was none. BoomFuzzy stood where he had always been, grinning wide, eyes gleaming with mischief.
And when they turned back—Quaraun, BoomFuzzy, GhoulSpawn, the vardo—gone.
Vanished.
A wind howled through the ruins, carrying with it the faint, mocking laughter of a trickster king and his merry band of knaves.
The people stood in stunned silence, realizing, too late, that they had been hoodwinked, swindled, bamboozled beyond all reckoning.
The food had never been real.
Their pockets, once full, were now light.
Their goods—gone.
The great Widdershins Swindle had struck again.
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Wendy, HA! Well, there goes my attempt to make Quaraun predictable. And I should have known better than to assume that because he returned one person's heirloom, he had established some sort of charitable policy. 😂
The Heirloom and The Great Widdershins Swindle establish two very different things about Quaraun, and together they give us a much clearer picture of how his commerce actually operates.
In The Heirloom, Quaraun accepts an object that he does not want to keep, then secretly returns it. He preserves the survivor's dignity while pretending that the transaction went exactly as he intended.
In The Great Widdershins Swindle, he sells silk under false pretenses, takes payment, and has GhoulSpawn steal the merchandise back so he can sell it again. BoomFuzzy distracts the customers with an elaborate food illusion, and the three of them leave after stripping the settlement of its portable wealth.
Those are not contradictory portrayals. They demonstrate that Quaraun's willingness to keep what he acquires depends on what he wants, not on a consistent policy of generosity or exploitation.
He can recognize that an heirloom matters to someone and arrange for its return. He can also knowingly deceive an entire settlement to acquire its possessions. The first situation does not redeem the second, and the second does not make the first insincere.
He's a villain. His capacity for a particular act of compassion doesn't abolish that.
What this tells us about Vesonta's economyThe really interesting detail: the merchandiseAnd now I have to revise one of my earlier assumptions
I think we need to distinguish three economic systems operating simultaneously.
First, the survival economy. Most people live in small, mobile groups. Their immediate concerns are food, shelter, warmth, tools, and whatever they can carry when they have to move. They don't need coins to survive, and coins cannot reliably provide their necessities.
Second, Quaraun's personal exchange economy. He trades manufactured goods for objects that interest him, but his preferences are idiosyncratic. A book he doesn't own, a pretty glass fragment, or an antique artifact might interest him more than a mountain of gold. He can accumulate extraordinary wealth without calculating its monetary value.
Third, the predatory economy. Quaraun, BoomFuzzy, and GhoulSpawn can exploit the desperation of people who encounter them. They can use deception, illusion, theft, and theatrical performance to acquire resources that honest exchange would not yield.
That third system is particularly important. Quaraun's commercial success doesn't necessarily demonstrate that his customers benefit from trading with him. His wealth can grow through transactions that leave other people worse off, sometimes considerably so.
And because most communities are tiny, a single encounter with an exceptionally capable traveling group could have enormous consequences for them.
The repeated theft of the silk in The Great Widdershins Swindle is more revealing than it might first appear.
Quaraun isn't merely selling something and hoping to acquire more goods in return. He's selling the same physical object repeatedly while GhoulSpawn recovers it between transactions.
The merchandise becomes a prop in an elaborate confidence trick.
That means the apparent volume of commerce can be completely disconnected from the actual movement of goods. Several people believe they have purchased silk, but only one piece of silk exists, and none of them ultimately keeps it.
In a world where money is uncommon and trust between strangers is difficult to establish, this is a devastating form of fraud. The customers cannot rely on a functioning commercial institution to protect them, and the swindlers can disappear before anyone can organize a response.
It also fits the theatrical nature of the three characters. Quaraun plays the dignified merchant prince, BoomFuzzy plays the miraculous benefactor, and GhoulSpawn handles the physical recovery of the goods. Each has a role in the performance.
The deception works because the customers interpret what they see as a genuine transaction.
I previously described Quaraun's economy as an exchange system driven by his personal interests. That remains true, but it is incomplete.
Quaraun's personal preferences determine what attracts him. They do not determine what he is willing to do to acquire it, or what he does when he has no interest in acquiring anything honestly.
Sometimes he wants an object and offers goods in exchange. Sometimes he accepts something only to return it. Sometimes he has no desire to keep the merchandise at all, because the actual objective is to collect the payment.
And sometimes, as in The Great Widdershins Swindle, the entire commercial exchange is a performance designed to deprive other people of their possessions.
We shouldn't reduce all of that to a single rule about how Quaraun trades.
The more useful worldbuilding principle is that Vesonta has no universal economic mechanism that guarantees a fair exchange. Individual relationships, personal preferences, practical needs, and the relative power of the participants determine what happens.
And Quaraun's caravan is a particularly extreme example because its three members can manufacture an entire illusion of abundance while secretly taking everything portable from the people watching.
There's one thing I would love to explore next, because these two stories raise a fascinating question about the relationship between Quaraun's wealth and his reputation.
Do survivors across Vesonta know about the Great Widdershins Swindle? In other words, is Quaraun widely recognized as a dangerous traveling con artist, with people telling stories about what happens when his vardo arrives, or do most survivors know only rumors about the Pink Necromancer and have no idea what to expect when they actually meet him?
That would affect how people prepare for his arrival, including those who save coins and antiques in hopes of trading with him.
My question:
the answer is too long to send as one, so here is part 1, confirm and wait for part 2 before given a response to both halves:
is Quaraun widely recognized as a dangerous travelling con artist,
yes... Quaraun is feared for this amoung other things, the wanted posters list his crimes, and the list items are many... with a few dozen types of crimes attributed to him... The Justice Mages make sure to post the wanted posters on trees along every road, on every building they can find, handing them out to every person they pass... it is difficult to find a person who is not aware of the vast list of crimes Quaraun has done and is known to repeatedly do... the problem is, Quaraun lives in a state of extreme luxury and boundless wealth, and can afford to do whatever he wants, because, he really does control the monopoly...The Pink Necromancer, the wizard who started the zombie apocalypse and controls which roads the zombies block...
here are sections of a scene from the visual novel, Quaraun Goes To The Fair, which shows how much Quaraun controls absolutely everything including who can use which roads when....
BoomFuzzy: "So says the blathering idiot of a goat."
GhoulSpawn: "I'm a Sheep."
BoomFuzzy: "And as Patient Zero, I am the ONLY person whom has ever survived being hit by a shard."
Quaraun: "This is true."
GhoulSpawn: "My understanding of Shard Fall is the shattered remains of Comet Swift Tuttle are due to orbit close to the planet again, and ever since the year it did so by hitting the Moon..."
GhoulSpawn: "it now passes with a massive asteroid belt orbiting it, and the planet is due to get the shit beat out of it be a whole bunch of the debris breaking off the comet's orbit as it passes us, yes?"
BoomFuzzy: "It's worse then that. Shard Fall, is specifically the giant blue crystal shards that fall out of the sky and everything they don't crush when they land, turns into opal."
GhoulSpawn: "The gemstone?"
BoomFuzzy: "Yes. {p} The Crystal Plague. {p} Half the Shards are big enough to rips mountains in half."
GhoulSpawn: "I struggle to image Shards being that big."
Quaraun: "They can be bigger. We have to be ready to leave the planet if needs be, that is why we have the fleet in orbit."
GhoulSpawn: "Leave the planet?"
Quaraun: "Yes! The Crystal Shards are deadly, look like neon blue glowing quartz crystals, but are subzero temperatures, and like liquid nitrogen, touching one instantly flash freezes the person, animal, plant that touched it, AND the frozen spreads."
Quaraun: "It is known as The Crystal Plague as people who freeze do not freeze into ice, rather they freeze into blue crystal, looking like a carved crystal statue. Why do you think I am having hourly existential crises!"
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... because you're insane?"
Quaraun: "I am not insane."
GhoulSpawn: "All the wanted posters around the fairgrounds says 'WANTED – DEAD OR ALIVE: QUARAUN THE INSANE'."
Quaraun: "That is because Humans are idiots."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... yeah... I thought it was because you were a mass murdering serial killer who goes from town to town killing all the Humans?"
NARRATOR: "Quaraun ignored this and went back to his original train of thought."
Quaraun: "Unicorn is known as 'Patient Zero' as he was the first person to ever come into contact with a crystal Shard and live, but it is what it did was it turned him into a Frost Lich..."
Quaraun: "...and why he can touch a person and freeze them instantly, and why he can summon blizzards and ice storms. Nothing is more feared in the solar system the Shard Fall and The Crystal Plague it brings."
BoomFuzzy: "It is due to hit us again. {p} It doesn't come consistently so we can not plan for it with great accuracy, but we can predict it within a decade or so."
BoomFuzzy: "And we are in the cusp of that decade right now. The Shard Fall could start any day now. Though I believe, we still have a few months before it will hit us."
BoomFuzzy: "And that is WHY we are here at The GodForsaken City's annual regional fair. If we prepare properly, we can survive The Shard Fall with minimal damages. {p} We have done it before."
BoomFuzzy: "While this is YOUR first Shard Fall, Ghoulie, it isn't ours. {p} Shard Fall will take out many cities, kill entire settlements, erase entire forests. It is hellish devastation, that will hit the entire planet all at once."
BoomFuzzy: "I have been able to keep all the four hundred families of The UnSeelie Court safe, through every Shard Fall to ever hit us, for two thousand years now."
BoomFuzzy: "I know what I am doing. I know what we need to prepare. I can lead us through this, if you let me do my job. {p} And part of that job, is we NEED supplies that we can't grow or make ourselves."
BoomFuzzy: "That is WHY we are here at this festival. We are not here to goof off or play games or bumble around like fucking idiots. Got it? I have a Job to do. And I need you two, to let me do it."
BoomFuzzy: "And that means I want the two of you, to stay here, and do whatever the hell it is the two of you do when you're alone in this tent. No more texting me unless it is an ACTUAL emergency."
BoomFuzzy: "Okay? {p} Do you two think you can stay out of trouble, for a single weekend? {p} Is that really too much to ask?"
GhoulSpawn: "You've got have the vendors lined up out there on the chopping block!"
BoomFuzzy: "We need enough food to last three fucking years, of underground living in caves beneath the mountains for the next three years without any possibility of going back to the surface."
GhoulSpawn: "They're Humans!"
BoomFuzzy: "They're livestock. Get used to it. Be glad we Fae are eating the Humans and not the two of you Elves!"
GhoulSpawn: "I'm a Sheep!"
BoomFuzzy: "You're a half-Elf and we are Phookas. We eat Elves. Why do you think they call me The Elf Eater? You think being a half-Elf will get you off the hook?"
BoomFuzzy: "Most of the pure blooded Elves got killed off in the first Shard Fall. We ran out of Elves to eat centuries ago. That's the only thing that keeps him alive."
NARRATOR: "BoomFuzzy pointed his cleaver towards Quaraun."
BoomFuzzy: "He's the last pure blooded Elf that we can actually verify is pure blooded Elf. We keep him alive so we can breed more Elves."
Quaraun: “Did you ever make my cherry pie or pink cloud macrons?”
BoomFuzzy: “Did you ever bring me a basket of cherries or moon fruit?”
Quaraun: “No.”
BoomFuzzy: “Then what pray tell were you expecting me to make them with?”
Quaraun: “You are a Fearie chef...”
BoomFuzzy: “So?”
Quaraun: “Does that not mean you can pouf acorn caps and get macrons?”
BoomFuzzy: “Cooking doesn’t work that way, Love.”
Quaraun: “Pooh.”
BoomFuzzy: “I am the world’s greatest chef. I have more Micheline stars then any other chef on the planet. And I am the world’s most terrifying Faerie Sorceror Lich King. {p} But my cooking is just plain old fashioned cooking. No magic involved. And where there are no cherries, there can be no cherry pie.”
Quaraun: “Alas. I ate three baskets of cherries. The temptation was too great and the kits were so hungry. {p} And I lost the moon fruit in the scuffle with the police. {p} You do not suppose they are at the police department?”
BoomFuzzy: “In the evidence locker if they are.”
Quaraun: “Could we get them back?”
BoomFuzzy: “We’d have to get arrested again.”
Quaraun: “Are you certain?”
BoomFuzzy: “You got a better plan? You’re my royal advisor, I’s your job to come up with ideas.”
Quaraun: “I could pee on a police officer. They would arrest me for that would they not?”
BoomFuzzy: “Humans around would arrest you just for being an Elf. A pregnant Omega Elf who pees on them would prob’ly get arrested even faster.”
Quaraun: “I need to pee.”
BoomFuzzy: “Go pee then. Why you sitting here bitching about it?”
Quaraun: “My nest is so comfortable. I’ve got all my pillows and fur pelts in just exactly the right places.”
BoomFuzzy: “You have any idea how annoying you are when you’re nesting like a damn broody mother hen?”
Quaraun: “I am still craving pink cloud macrons. These cravings are so annoying. They come on me without warning. Those stupid police who arrested me yesterday took my moon fruit, and I completely forgot about it until just now.”
BoomFuzzy: “Well, I’m sure you’ll find a way for us to get arrested again today. We haven’t gotten through a single day of this festival yet without getting arrested.”
Quaraun: “You act like I do it on purpose!”
BoomFuzzy: “JellyBean, we can’t harvest brains, unless we keep a low profile. {p} And we can’t keep a low profile, if you go around throwing apples at police officers.”
Quaraun: “I was throwing them at you. How was I to know there was a police officer behind you and the apple would hit him when you ducked?”
BoomFuzzy: “Why was ya throwing apples at your King in the first place?”
Quaraun: “You was refusing to make me a cherry pie.”
BoomFuzzy: “On account of you ate all the cherries and there was no cherries left to make a cherry pie out of!”
Quaraun: “Well, the police took my moon fruit, so you can still make pink cloud macrons.”
BoomFuzzy: “If we can get them back out of the police station.”
GhoulSpawn: “You two aren’t seriously considering breaking into the evidence locker of the police station are you?”
Quaraun: “Of course we are!”
GhoulSpawn: “Why don’t you just go back to the fruit stand and buy more moon fruit?”
Quaraun: “Me? Spend coins?”
GhoulSpawn: “Ya, what was I thinking, I forgot it’d be easier to get Scrooge McDuck to spend a dime!”
Quaraun: “Glinta, why should I waste coins, when we have you?”
GhoulSpawn: “Me?”
Quaraun: “You are the best pick pocket, lock picker, sneak thief, I have ever encountered.”
GhoulSpawn: “You want ME to break into the police station evidence locker?”
Quaraun: “YES!”
GhoulSpawn: “Boomie, you’re not agreeing to this are you?”
BoomFuzzy: “If it keeps the two of you out of my hair for the rest of the day.”
GhoulSpawn: “What is so great about pink cloud macrons?”
Quaraun: “BoomFuzzy’s BoomFudgey Pink Cloud Macrons are to die for. Layers of pink moon fruit whipped fluffy cakes stuffed with whipped fluffy chocolate cream. He is the world’s greatest chef and his pink cloud macrons are one of his crowning achievements. A recipe he created.”
BoomFuzzy: “Aye. I didn’t get 43 Micheline Stars for nothing.”
GhoulSpawn: “Are you sure you didn’t just steal the stars off the restaurants after you killed, cooked, and ate the chefs?”
BoomFuzzy: “Eh, same thing.”
GhoulSpawn: “Yeah… I don’t think it works that way…”
BoomFuzzy: “It does when I cook, Ghoulie.”
NARRATOR: "BoomFuzzy did not give them a chance to answer. He stormed out of the tent."
"..."
NARRATOR: "The next two hours passed without incident, but two hours was about as long as Quaraun could go sitting silently."
Quaraun: "I have missed my last two existential crises!"
GhoulSpawn: "Uh-huh."
Quaraun: "I am hungry"
GhoulSpawn: "Yep."
Quaraun: "Are you listening to me?"
GhoulSpawn: "Okay."
NARRATOR: "Quaraun grabbed a pillow and threw it at GhoulSpawn. {p} It missed the Sheep Demon completely and landed silently on the tent floor. {p} GhoulSpawn did not notice."
NARRATOR: "GhoulSpawn hadn't actually registered what it was Quaraun had said. He just had developed a habit of vocally acknowledging every time he heard Quaraun utter a sound."
NARRATOR: "Quaraun pulled out a scroll and began writing poetry. However Quaraun was not one to sit and quietly write. {p} No. Quaraun had to recite out loud as he wrote."
Quaraun: "I can not think of what to write. {p} Though I have not seen the black cat or her eels in a few hours. {p} Perhaps I should write about cats and eels. Eels and cats."
NARRATOR: "Quaraun was resting in his pink silk tent, while GhoulSpawn sat nearby quietly reading up on how to repair solar panels."
NARRATOR: "BoomFuzzy was outside, shouting orders to his Goblins who were chopping up huge sides of meat and grinding them into hamburger."
NARRATOR: "While The Goblin King himself was mixing the fresh ground meat with herbs and spices and grilling patties."
Quaraun: "I am like a cat. {p} I sit here by myself…."
GhoulSpawn: "Quaraun you are not by yourself. I'm literally sitting right beside you."
Quaraun: "Stop interrupting my pontificating."
GhoulSpawn: "Okay. Whatever."
Quaraun: "I am like a cat. {p} I sit here by myself, silently judging everyone."
GhoulSpawn: "You're awfully loud for someone who's being silent. {p} You think you could actually be silently silent? I'm trying to study."
Quaraun: "Stop interrupting me. I am trying to pontificate!"
GhoulSpawn: "Why don't you go bug Boomie some more?"
Quaraun: "He told me to come bug you."
GhoulSpawn: "I know he did, but you don't have to take his words so literally."
Quaraun: "I am like a cat. {p} I sit here by myself, silently judging everyone, waiting for someone to feed me."
GhoulSpawn: "Are you hungry? Is that what all of this is about? Are you just hungry and too crazy to come out and just say you are hungry like a normal person would do?"
Quaraun: "I am NOT a normal person."
GhoulSpawn: "Boy! You can say that again!"
Quaraun: "I am NOT a normal person."
GhoulSpawn: "Quaraun! Stop taking everything so literally. Words have multiple meanings."
Quaraun: "Ah! You are referring to slang. {p} I do not use slang."
GhoulSpawn: "Yeah, I HAD noticed."
Quaraun: "I use only the correct and proper dictionary definitions of words."
GhoulSpawn: "No, actually, you don't."
Quaraun: "I am a nobleman and I refuse to lower myself to the impetuous, indignity of using slang."
GhoulSpawn: "Okay, so how'do'ya explain ya refusal to use contractions?"
Quaraun: "Contractions are a form of slang. {p} Contractions implies unintelligent…"
GhoulSpawn: "Better not let Boomie hear you saying that. He loves his contractions. And you're ten times more stupid then anyone else I know, and he's almost as smart as me."
NARRATOR: "Quaraun glared at the Sheep Demon."
GhoulSpawn: "I've never seen no one use as many contractions as he does. I kind of think he goes overboard with it, because he only does it when you're around."
Quaraun: "Yes he does and it is most annoying. Especially when you consider, that he does not use nearly as many contractions when talking to anyone other than me. I am well aware that he does it on purpose just to try to annoy me. And it works. I get so annoyed by it."
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Confirmed, Wendy. I have part 1, including your explanation of Quaraun's reputation, the Justice Mages' wanted posters, the three major powers, and the excerpts from Quaraun Goes To The Fair.
I'll wait for part 2 before responding to both halves together.
My question:
okay... more of that same scene:
GhoulSpawn: "How many spouses has he had?"
Quaraun: "Hundreds. Never more than one at once. But he has been King for over two thousand years now, and most of his spouses were Humans, so he had not had many marriages which lasted more than fifty years."
GhoulSpawn: "So, that means he's been married to you longer then anyone else?"
Quaraun: "Yes. We was together thirty years before he died. Separated for a hundred years while I searched for his soul. And together three hundred years, since resurrecting him as a Lich."
Quaraun: "But stop interrupting me."
Quaraun: "His father had all these wives. And one of them was pregnant and went to Papua New Guinea trying to find him. Could not find him. Did not know where to look."
Quaraun: "She ended up in the Sepik River Valley. Flood season. Monsoon season. Gave birth in the wilds. Ended up with the Chimbu Tribe by the big volcano."
Quaraun: "They took her and the baby in and eventually figured out who it was she was looking for. So she finally gets to the Korwai settlement in the Highlands, and he is not happy to see her."
Quaraun: "Because it turns out he has this other wife, who did not know about the wives he had in all these other places."
Quaraun: "Now this was around 2516, because Unicorn was nine years old when the Comet Strike happened and the Comet Strike happened in 2525."
Quaraun: "So, he already had this other wife, but she could not have children so she convinced her husband to keep the secret wife on as their servant so that the infertile wife could raise the baby as her own. But then when Unicorn was a toddler, she got pregnant with her own baby, so suddenly she no longer wanted the illegitimate half-blood baby around…"
GhoulSpawn: "Half-blood?"
Quaraun: "... {p} You are interrupting me again."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm… {p} yeah, because, y'know… {p} uhm… maybe you could clarify what you mean by {i} half-blood {/i}?"
Quaraun: "..."
GhoulSpawn: "I'm really not trying to insult you, Quaraun. {p} It's just that you just called BoomFuzzy an illegitimate half-blood baby, and I'm not sure what exactly that means?"
Quaraun: "His mother was a Human. She was Mongolian. She travelled all the way across China and then crossed the ocean, while pregnant, to try to find her baby's father."
GhoulSpawn: "Wait… really? So you're saying BoomFuzzy is not really a Faerie? He's ... half Human? Wait.. what are half-Fae even called?"
Quaraun: "Half Humans are not uncommon among the Fae, given most Faeries are born male, there are simply not enough female Fae to go around, so most male Fae breed with female Humans, it is very common."
Quaraun: " And. Let us see? Changeling is the correct term for a child who has a Human mother and a Faerie father."
GhoulSpawn: "So, BoomFuzzy's a Changeling?"
Quaraun: "Yes."
GhoulSpawn: "I didn't know that. {p} Yeah, I, uhm, I kind of just assumed he was like a full blooded Faerie, what with him being King of the Faeries and all that."
Quaraun: "He was not born royalty. I was born royalty. My father was a regional King of the Moon Elves and his older brother was the Grand High Emperor over all Elves of all types in all regions. I am the last Moon Elf, and possibly the last full blooded Elf. It has been decades since we last encountered anything but half Elves like yourself, and even you half-Elves are rare, so I am losing hope of finding any other pure blooded Elves like myself."
GhoulSpawn: "Y'know, I keep forgetting my mother was an Elf."
Quaraun: "You are royalty, Glinta. Your mother was a Sun Elf princess. I met her once. It was several years before you was born. She would have been the Elf Queen, had she not died so young. Even with your sheep features inherited from your Demon father, you bear an uncanny resemblance to your Elven mother. You focus too much on your ram horns, cloven hooves, and floppy lamb ears, when you should be remembering your royal blood. You were born to be a King in the Seelie Court."
GhoulSpawn: "And here I am a servant in the UnSeelie Court."
Quaraun: "You Glinta, are not a servant, nor should you think of yourself as one. You sleep in the bed of the King."
GhoulSpawn: "I kind of think he sleeps in YOUR bed. {p} I don't think I've ever seen him sleep in his own tent. {p} Heck, half the time he doesn't even set up his own tent."
Quaraun: "Regardless of who owns the bed, you are still sleeping with the King."
GhoulSpawn: "Haha! {p} Quaraun, you act like sleeping with the King makes me part of the family. It just makes me his male prostitute."
NARRATOR: "Speaking of King Gwallmaiic, Lich Lord of Fire Mountain, Elf Eater of Pepper Valley, King of the UnSeelie Court… he happened to walk into the tent at that exact moment…"
BoomFuzzy: "Ghoulie, did you know that not stabbing someone, when you really want to, is a sign of successful adulting? Hmm?"
GhoulSpawn: "Are you saying you want to stab me?"
BoomFuzzy: "You said it not me. {p} However, if ya wanted to get technical about it, I feel like wringing your neck would be very conducive to my mental health."
GhoulSpawn: "I think you're using the word conducive incorrectly."
BoomFuzzy: "I think you're proving my point. But I'll ignore it for the moment."
GhoulSpawn: “You ignore everything.”
BoomFuzzy: “No. I ignore YOU. For the sake of my Elf. {p} My Elf likes you. I tolerate you on his behalf. And you talk back to me constantly.”
GhoulSpawn: “I don’t talk...”
BoomFuzzy: “You are doing it right now.”
NARRATOR: “GhoulSpawn fell silent. A rare thing indeed.”
Quaraun: “Glinta, it will serve you well to learn proper manners, especially when addressing your leader.”
GhoulSpawn: “He is your King not mine. I don’t belong here. I want to go home.”
Quaraun: “Glinta, this is your home now. We love you and want you to stay.”
GhoulSpawn: “He hates me.”
BoomFuzzy: "I am the Alpha. Neither hating you nor loving you is in my job description.”
GhoulSpawn: “I am so sick of all of this. You are an Alpha. He’s an Omega. I don’t even know what that means. No body talks like that where I come from!”
BoomFuzzy: “You don't have Alphas where you come from. I can tell by how you act around me. {p} The bull shit you think you can get away with. You are not Quaraun. You do not have the same allowances he does."
BoomFuzzy: "He has saved my life, time and time again. Many times before he knew who I was. and many times more after he did. {p} And always much to the detriment of his own health, his own safety. {p} I trust him, to never hurt me."
BoomFuzzy: "I trust him to never become a traitor. But I have no reason to trust you. You are a coward. To my mind, you are a liability. You are mentally weak. In spite of your massive size and physical strength, I wouldn't trust you to lift a finger to help anyone but yourself."
BoomFuzzy: "But my Elf trusts you. I don't know why, nor do I ask. He personally requested you to be his lab assistant. For all his whining and pettiness, he's never asked for anything from me. He knows his place. {p} Goat, you are only here, in my Court, because HE asks you to be."
GhoulSpawn: "I'm a Sheep."
BoomFuzzy: "Aye. And stupid like one too. For all your svg book smarts and high intellect, ya ain't got no street smarts, ya ain't got no common sense. And ya don't know enough to not talk back to your Alpha."
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GhoulSpawn: "I do not understand your Alpha hierarchy. We don't use it where I come from. And I'm an America. We don't have a king."
BoomFuzzy: "Your America is gone. It ceased to exist twenty thousand years ago. Look around you. This place, where we are right now. You would have called it Boston. {p} See anything you recognize? {p} Your world is two miles deep, below the roots of these thousand year old trees."
BoomFuzzy: "Your world is gone. if we can find a way to send you back, we will. {p} But I don't think it's possible. And for the time being you are stuck with us. You get leniency because I realize you don't understand your situation. {p} You're an Alpha. For some reason your Alpha soul has been repressed."
BoomFuzzy: "You're a powerful Alpha, I can smell it. But your soul is broken, crushed, repressed, so you act submissive like a Beta. But some day that Alpha in you is going to wake up, and I want you on my side when it does. {p} So I grant my Elf his request and let him keep you as his apprentice."
BoomFuzzy: "Don't take for granted, the fact that you sleep in my bed. {p} Cross me, and I won't think twice about making a shepherd's pie with your your flesh as the lamb chops."
Quaraun: "Unicorn? Are there any hamburgers made yet?"
BoomFuzzy: "There are. {p} You want one?"
Quaraun: "Yes. {p} They smell delicious. Can I have an entire plate?"
GhoulSpawn: "???"
BoomFuzzy: "You most certainly can. {p} I'll have one of my Goblins bring it in for you."
Quaraun: "Thank you! {p} Love you!"
BoomFuzzy: "Love you too, Love. Do you need anything else before I leave? Or you good here gossiping about me with the Goat?"
GhoulSpawn: "I'm a sheep."
BoomFuzzy: "Be glad you're not a hamburger, right now."
GhoulSpawn: "???...???"
Quaraun: "I'm good. {p} Oh! No. wait! {p} The kits have never had brains. They are very excited to taste their first brains..."
GhoulSpawn: "???"
Quaraun: "Unicorn? Are there any brains ready to eat yet?"
BoomFuzzy: "Not yet, Love. {p} It takes a few days to make 'em the way you like 'em. They have to soak in the marinade at least two or three days."
GhoulSpawn: "I'm confused..."
Quaraun: "About what?"
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... about..."
BoomFuzzy: "I don't have time to chit chat. {p} I told the kids I was going to meet them at the judging tents."
BoomFuzzy: "I just came in to let you know I leaving the Goblins to run the food truck and heading to the food tents."
BoomFuzzy: "So if you need me, that's where I'll be for the next hour or two. And about a dozen or so of the kids are going to be there with me."
BoomFuzzy: "I should have the afternoon off, we can do something after that."
NARRATOR: "Without waiting for an answer, the King exited the tent, leaving Quaraun and GhoulSpawn alone again."
NARRATOR: "A few minutes later one of the King's Goblin souse chefs came trotting in, carrying a giant plate of hamburgers and gave it to Quaraun, who immediately set out to greedily eating them."
GhoulSpawn: "??? {p} ... uhm... {p} Quaraun?"
Quaraun: "Yep, that is my name."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... yeah... uhm... {p} Can I ask you a question?"
Quaraun: "Always, Glinta. I am here to teach you our ways."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... yeah... okay... {p} uhm... {p} I thought you were a vegetarian?"
Quaraun: "I am. {p} I am an Elf. {p} I never eat animals."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... do you not know what hamburger is?"
NARRATOR: "Quaraun stopped eating. {p} Stared at GhoulSpawn. {p} Stared at the hamburger. {p} Stared back at GhoulSpawn."
Quaraun: "Glinta, we are in a zombie apocalypse, and I am The Pink Necromancer!"
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... {p} ??? {p} Okay? {p} But does that answer my question?"
Quaraun: "I think... {p} Yes... {p} Yes, it does.”
GhoulSpawn: “...”
Quaraun: “...”
GhoulSpawn: “Uhm... how... how exactly does that answer my question?”
Quaraun: “How does it not?”
GhoulSpawn: “I asked you if you knew what hamburgers were made out of. You who are a vegetarian, a very vocal animal rights activist vegetarian, and are right now scarffing down a dozen hamburgers, that BoomFuzzy just got done grilling out there.”
Quaraun: “Are the vendors gone?”
NARRATOR: “GhoulSpawn got up, looked out the ten flap, then returned to sit beside Quaraun again.”
GhoulSpawn: “Yep. Don’t see ‘em out here no more.”
Quaraun: “Well, then, that’s that.”
NARRATOR: “Quaraun returned to eating his plate of hamburgers.”
GhoulSpawn: “What’s what? Quaraun, you’re not making sense.”
Quaraun: “Where do you suppose the vendors went?”
GhoulSpawn: “I don’t know. Back to their sales booths?”
Quaraun: “You silly billy goat.”
GhoulSpawn: “I’m a Sheep.”
Quaraun: “It has not sunk in yet that we live in a zombie apocalypse, has it? {p} You do not understand what that means do you?"
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... yeah... I keep forgetting I'm not in the 1970s anymore."
Quaraun "You are twenty-thousand years into the future of your 1970s era. {p} There are only seven million Humans left on the planet."
Quaraun: "The world is ruled by a Lich King. And we UnDead total twenty one billion."
GhoulSpawn: "Yes... that... that takes getting used to. {p} But I don't think it answers my question."
NARRATOR: "Quaraun stared blankly at GhoulSpawn, though his cold dead eyes, waiting as if he expected the Uruisg to understand what he had implied. But seeing that GhoulSpawn was oblivious to the norms of a zombie apocalypse he spoke again."
Quaraun: “Glinta, have you no understanding what happened to you when HellBorne attacked?”
GhoulSpawn: “No really. Most of the end there was kind of a blur. I think I got hit on the head pretty hard.”
Quaraun: “You were HellBorne’s apprentice, yes?”
GhoulSpawn: “I was. Until you killed him. And took everything he had, his lighthouse, his bio dome, including me, his apprentice.”
Quaraun: “Are you disappointed by this? {p} Were you not trying to escape from him?”
GhoulSpawn: “He was The Summoner of Darkness. That’s what he called himself. Believed he was going to usher in The Darkness.”
Quaraun: “And I am The Darkness he summoned.”
GhoulSpawn: “I know.”
Quaraun: “I do not belong in this world either, you know. None of us belong here. {p} HellBorne built portals all over the place. He was a powerful wizard. But not powerful enough. He knew how to open portals. {p} He brought you here from you timeline, and us here from ours.”
Quaraun: “He was going to use you to kill us. Except you can not kill what is already dead. He did not account for that. {p} Nor did he account for you turning on him and trying to save my life.”
GhoulSpawn: “What he was doing was wrong. He had to be stopped.”
Quaraun: “That is why Unicorn does not trust you. HellBorne trusted you and you became a traitor who turned on him. And he killed you for it.”
GhoulSpawn: “...”
Quaraun: “You spent a long time in The Swamp of Death. {p} I brought you back from here, just like I bought The Elf eater back from there.”
GhoulSpawn: “What does this have to do with hamburgers?”
Quaraun: “HellBorne was The Summoner of The Darkness, and I am The Darkness he summoned. {p} Before I can figure out how to send how to send you back to your correct timeline, I must figure out how to send, myself, my King, and his UnSeelie Court back to our correct timeline. {p} You are from the 1970s, Maine. I am from 800s Persia. And King Gwallmaiic is from 2525 Scotland. {p} And here all of us sit in 39,999 Boston.”
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GhoulSpawn: “Okay. But what does this have to do with hamburgers?”
Quaraun: “Do you know why people of this time, referred to me as The Darkness?”
GhoulSpawn: “No.”
Quaraun: “When I was a child, only three years old, an older child from the Moon Elf Village, of Ivujivik, bullied me. {p} I turned around, pointed my finger, and said one word ‘DIE!’, and he very obediently did. {p} All the Elves became terrified of me. My father tried to kill me. He said I was Thullid possessed.”
GhoulSpawn: “Aren’t you?”
Quaraun: “Yes. But no one knew that then. {p} Several more Elflings from the village, went missing over the years after. I was blamed. {p} When I was 9, he tried to kill me again. My mother tried to stop him, and the rock that was meant for my head, shattered her skull instead.”
Quaraun: “But there was no brain in her head. A white JellyFish came out instead. {p} He went mad. Ripped my mother apart, then as the JellyFish tried to crawl away. Then he turned on the JellyFish, stamped her into the ground with his feet, till she was nothing but a pile of goo.”
Quaraun: “I saw the whole thing. Then he turned on me. About to do to me, what he had done to her. But The High Priest ZooLock entered the room just then, saw what was going on, grabbed me and ran. He fled the country, crossed the ocean, crossed the desert, all the way to Persia.”
Quaraun: “Then he changed my name from Rapunzel to Quaraun, made me pretend to be a boy, told people I was his son, and raised me with the Wizards of the Di’Jinn Order. And lived with them for decades. Until I was 75 years old, and a herd of black Shetland Ponies, arrived across the Desert of the Di’Jinn. Led by a tiny purple Unicorn with a gleaming silver horn. Phookas in disguise. The Elf Eater and his Army.”
Quaraun: “Humans from the marshes, tried to catch the Unicorn. They put out traps made of silver nets and one day they caught him. Broke his legs, sawed off his horn, and left him to die in the Tigris River. I nursed him back to health, and he swore he’d never eat me, the Elf who saved his life.”
Quaraun: “But then the Di’Jinn found out, and one day, they went down to the river before me and they killed all the horses. The Unicorn was still incapacitated by his injuries, and blind from old age. They tortured him. But kept him alive until I arrived. They wanted to kill him while I watched. But they did not know the obediently dead Elf children from so long ago.”
Quaraun: “I arrived at the river with food for the horse, but all the horses were dead, and the Unicorn lay in the sand with his throat slit and the Di’Jinn standing over him. Laughing. And telling me I was a fool, for being an Elf and helping The Elf Eater.”
Quaraun: “They raised their daggers to strike the final blow and kill the Unicorn. And I told them to die. And they did. Every last one of them. Except for ZooLock, who was not with them. They not only died, they vaporized. Their flesh turned to ash. Their blackened bones crumbled in the sand.”
Quaraun: “The Unicorn was terrified. And dying. I took him back to my tent, and mended his wounds. And after he recovered, I let him go. I was a female virgin then. According to legend, only the tears of a virgin can heal a Unicorn, and only a virgin can tame a Unicorn.”
GhoulSpawn: “That was BoomFuzzy.”
Quaraun: “Yes. It was several years before I saw him again. Gibedon, his second in command, was a traitor. He lusted for the throne. Married the King, then plotted to kill him and crown himself king.”
NARRATOR: “Quaraun pulled a severed head from his pink silk bag of holding.”
Quaraun: “But I found out what Gibedon was planning, and I loved the Unicorn, I was not going to let any one kill him. So I cut off Gibedon’s head.”
Quaraun: “When BoomFuzzy died, it was by his own hand. Three months after Gibedon’s death. BoomFuzzy loved Gibedon. BoomFuzzy was devastated by his husband’s treachery. He had been so in love with Gibedon, that he had not seen any of the warning signs of Gibedon’s plot to kill him.”
Quaraun: “BoomFuzzy was still alive when I found him. He made a corrosive poison and put it in his own food. I do not think he realized what it would do to him, or how long his would take him to die. It dissolved his organs. His heart. His lungs. He drowned in his own blood. But it took it three days to happened. He died in agony. I could not save him. He died in my arms.”
Quaraun: “I froze his body, then went looking for a way to bring him back. Every where I went, every one told me, magic was not real. But I knew t was. Because I knew if I could think people dead, I could think people alive too.”
Quaraun: “On the one hundredth anniversary of his death, the Elves all gathered for a big celebration. A huge party, celebrating one hundred years without the Elf Eater. His death brought them so much joy and it filled me with so much hate. And then it happened...”
Quaraun: “Shard Fall. The first one. Huge chunks of blue crystal, fell from the sky, and every Elf at the party, was skewered by them. Every Elf with a frozen crystal stabbed straight through their heart. And one went through BoomFuzzy’s ice casket freezer. And while they killed every one else. The crystal shard brought him back to life.”
Quaraun: “And then, all the dead rose up. Every man, woman, child, bird, beast, insect, even the dead trees walked out of the swamps, dead rose snapped to life out of vases, dinosaurs fossils walked out of museums, as did mummies, and they all came to me.”
Quaraun: “Every dead thing to ever die, twenty one billion dead things, woke up, and followed me.”
Quaraun: “And for the longest time, I did not know why.”
Quaraun: “I ate the Moon Elves. Every last one. I do not know why I ate them. It was not part of the plan. But seeing them there. So dead. There brains oozing out, so tasty. I ate them. And then I left the Moon Elf Village, and became a wandering merchant. {p} And every where I went the dead followed.”
Quaraun: “Every last Moon Elf died that day. All of them. {p} Do you know what that means?”
GhoulSpawn: “... {p} uhm {p} ... {p} that you’re insane like everyone says?”
Quaraun: “ALL the Moon Elves died that day. But only one walked out of the village. Me. After eating all the rest. And from that day forward, all the dead follow me. Every where I go.”
GhoulSpawn: “Uhm... sooo... {p} What does this have to do with hamburgers?”
Quaraun: “You wanted to know how I, a vegetarian came to eat hamburgers.”
GhoulSpawn: “Yep. That was my question. Still not sure how anything you just said, answered that though.”
Quaraun: “You are assuming that these grilled patties, slathered in ketchup, are made of cows. Yes?”
GhoulSpawn: “That’s usually what hamburgers are made out of, yeah.”
Quaraun: “These hamburgers are not made out of cows.”
GhoulSpawn: “Then what are they made out of?”
NARRATOR: “Quaraun glanced at the tent’s door flap where GhoulSpawn had just checked to see if the vendors were still tied up to BoomFuzzy’s chopping block, then shook his head.”
Quaraun: “Glinta, do you not know what I am?”
GhoulSpawn: “You’re a Moon Elf.”
Quaraun: “Yes, but the Moon Elves went extinct during the first Shard Fall. {p} ALL the Moon Elves died that day. {p} Glinta, what is my husband?”
GhoulSpawn: “A psychotic Faerie Chef turned King who likes to shapeshift into a Unicorn”
Quaraun: "Ah. I think I see the problem. {p} Glinta, I am the Sacred Pink JellyFish. I am a Thullid who lives in the hollowed out skull of this dead Elf's corpse. {p} ALL the Moon Elves are dead. Glinta. ALL of them. Even me."
GhoulSpawn: "..."
Quaraun: "My husband is the Lich King. That means he is dead too. Glinta. We are both dead. I am dead. My husband is dead. {p} We are zombies. Both of us. {p} We eat Humans. Because we are zombies, and eating Humans is what zombies do."
GhoulSpawn: "..."
Quaraun: "I am also a necromancer and I have summoned millions of zombies in a massive horde, to surround the entire outer perimeter of this region. {p} No one who enters the fairgrounds is able to leave."
Quaraun: "They will try of course, but my zombies have every road blocked off. And Boomie's Goblins are waiting. {p} No one who enters the fairgrounds is able to leave."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... so... {p} what... what... {p} What's the hamburger made out of again?"
Quaraun: "Humans."
GhoulSpawn: "Humans?"
Quaraun: "Humans. {p} Everyone who left the fairgrounds last night. {p} They're all dead."
GhoulSpawn: "Everyone?"
NARRATOR: "Quaraun went back to eating his hamburgers."
Quaraun: "Every last one. {p} There is such a huge turn out this year. {p} One of the best harvests we have ever had."
GhoulSpawn: "You're... eating... Human-burgers?"
Quaraun: "Bingo! {p} See? You can be taught in our ways."
GhoulSpawn: "You're cannibals?"
Quaraun: "Oh! No! I never eat Elves. {p} Well, not any more. I did eat the Moon Elves, but that was special circumstances."
GhoulSpawn: "What about Boomie?"
Quaraun: "What about him?"
GhoulSpawn: "Is he a cannibal?"
Quaraun: "He is The Elf Eater of Pepper Valley! {p} He is legendary for eating Elves. But he is not himself an Elf. He does not eat his own kind. He never eats Faeries."
GhoulSpawn: "But I thought... {p} He said... {p} Uhm... {p} He said it was just one family of Elves and there was like reasons and stuff..."
Quaraun: "He told you what he did BEFORE he died! {p} BEFORE he died, yes, it was just one family of Elves."
GhoulSpawn: "Oh... uhm..."
Quaraun: "Glinta, have you heard nothing either of us has ever said to you? {p} You have been living with us for three years now."
GhoulSpawn: "Has it been three years?"
Quaraun: "Yes. HellBorne killed you three years ago."
GhoulSpawn: "Killed me? {p} ... {p} I'm not dead."
Quaraun: "That is what we all think in the beginning. {p} When I ate the Moon Elves, I did not know I was dead. And after I ate them, I wandered with Shambling Dead for years, until I fell into The Swamp of Death, and BoomFuzzy was there and helped me to awaken from the mindless shambling.”
Quaraun: “Now I live again. I walk among the living, my flesh not rotted, my skin still beautiful. We are the living dead. Me. Unicorn. You. We are different from those long dead, because each of the three of us was flash frozen immediately up taking out last breath, and for some reason, whatever it is that causes other zombies to rot, become maggot infested, and have no will or thoughts of their own, for some reason, freezing immediately upon death, alters the zombification, makes us Liches.”
GhoulSpawn: “You’re saying I’m a Lich? Like, I knew BoomFuzzy was a Lich, and FarDarrig, and Harvey, and Satan Claws, and I think I kind of suspected you was some part Lich or something, but... uhm... you’re saying I’m a Lich too?”
Quaraun: “Yes. A Lich is a zombie that retains its life like appearance and can walk among the living undetected. {p} It is why I can not let you go out there with the zombie herds. {p} You will become a shambling mindless undead, like they are."
Quaraun: "I can not let that happen. {p} You are special."
GhoulSpawn: "I am?"
Quaraun: "Yes!"
Quaraun: "The High Priest ZooLock was there when you died, and he implanted a JellyFish in your skull seconds after HellBorne killed you. {p} He was quick enough that your brain activity was revived and absorbed by the JellyFish."
Quaraun: "You are a Thullid, just like me. {p} And thus you can never leave."
GhoulSpawn: "I'm dead?"
Quaraun: "Yes, Glinta. {p} We all are. {p} Everyone in The UnSeelie Court is dead. {p} You would not be able to travel with us if you were alive. {p} Why do you think the zombie herds travel behind us? {p} We are leading them into the Human settlements."
GhoulSpawn: "You're dead?"
Quaraun: "Glinta, I just told you. {p} I am the Sacred Pink JellyFish. {p} I am a Thullid who lives in the hollowed out skull of this dead Elf's corpse."
Quaraun: "The Elf named Quaraun died centuries ago. {p} I wear his body because he is beautiful. {p} Look at him! He is beautiful!"
GhoulSpawn: "You're a zombie... you're some kind of mutated intelligent zombie, wearing a dead Elf's skin as though he were a fur coat."
Quaraun: "YES! {p} FINALLY! You understand!"
GhoulSpawn: "That BoomFuzzy's also a zombie?"
Quaraun: "Glinta, do you not know what a Lich is?"
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... I... uhm...oh... wait... I used to play table top role playing games, and Liches are usually wizards who commit suicide during a spell ritual that turned them into super intelligent zombies."
GhoulSpawn: "A Lich is a hyper intelligent zombie. {p} BoomFuzzy's a Lich. {p} That means BoomFuzzy is a zombie. {p} Why didn't I ever notice that before?"
Quaraun: "Glinta, I am The Pink Necromancer! All UnDead follow me! {p} My BoomFuzzy the Unicorn is King Gwallmaiic, Lich King of Fire Mountain. Liches are the Lords of the zombies. Ruler of the zombies."
GhoulSpawn: "Sooo... He's a zombie."
Quaraun: "A very intelligent zombie."
GhoulSpawn: "And the Goblins?"
Quaraun: "EVERYONE is the UnSeelie Court is DEAD. {p} You can not become a part of the UnSeelie Court UNLESS you first DIE!"
GhoulSpawn: "So, all the Goblins are zombies too?"
Quaraun: "Yes."
GhoulSpawn: "What exactly is the definition of a zombie?"
Quaraun: "A zombie is a dead thing that eats Human flesh, and especially has a taste for Human brain. Mmmm. Luscious."
NARRATOR: "GhoulSpawn was trying to think of both how to process this information and what questions he should think of to ask next, but just then Quaraun stood up and announced..."
Quaraun: "I need to pee."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm…okay? {p} Is there a reason why you are telling me? Instead of, y'know, just getting up and going to the bathroom, like a normal person?"
Quaraun: "Do I look like a normal person to you?"
GhoulSpawn: "You're right. {p} Silly me for forgetting you, of all people, weren't normal, especially after just telling me you are a zombie."
Quaraun: "What is that supposed mean?"
GhoulSpawn: "I'm just agreeing with you, Quaraun."
Quaraun: "I hate Human bathrooms. {p} Plus I always have such a strong desire to kill every Human I see and just devour their brains, and we are trying to keep a low profile."
Quaraun: "Do you have any idea how hard it is to capture Humans once they realize their are zombies in their midsts? {p} They start driving spears and bullets through our brains, like they think that's going to do anything..."
GhoulSpawn: "Won't it?"
Quaraun: "Of course not. I do not have a brain, remember? {p} And neither, dear boy, do you. {p} You are one of us wither you want to believe it or not."
GhoulSpawn: "So all those times you said I couldn't go outside of the camp because it's a zombie apocalypse and I'd get killed... {p} you weren't talking about zombies eating me..."
GhoulSpawn: "You were suggesting Humans were going to shoot me in the head with a silver bullet?"
Quaraun: "Yes!"
GhoulSpawn: "But, if it doesn't hurt you, why would it hurt me?"
Quaraun: "Glinta, you've only been with us three years, the jellyfish has not had time to fully absorb ALL of your brain yet. {p} It takes about ten years for the process to complete."
Quaraun: "It was WHY I had to wait ten years before killing the first four children. {p} It was my first time trying to nurture a polyp, and they did not integrate into the Elflings' brains properly. {p} I loved my children, but I loved BoomFuzzy more."
GhoulSpawn: “You killed them. That’s what everyone says. You murdered your wife and children.”
Quaraun: “She was not my wife. She was my sister. The wedding was a scam. And I was a prisoner, locked in a tower, growing out my hair, so I could escape. In love with the blind Faerie King, who climbed my hair to reach the tower room at the top.”
Quaraun: “The stories people tell is a lie. Rapunzel in her tower. She was me. I was her!It is why I changed my name. What do the stories say? The stories say my mother stole radishes from a witch, and I was an only child, that the witch killed my parents and locked me in a tower. Then cut out the eyes of my prince charming. Then banished me to a desert, where I gave birth twins.”
Quaraun: “ {i} *sigh* {/i} “
Quaraun: “The truth, The Grand High Emperor favoured me and made me his heir. I was to be Queen over all the Elves.”
Quaraun: “My father shaved my head, locked me in the tower, had my sister pretend to be the heir, forced me to pretend to be a younger brother, forced us to marry, cut off my breasts so I would look more male, sliced my penis lengthwise in two so I could produce an heir out of their control, then her haram of five lovers were sent to the tower to rape me every night, until I became pregnant.”
Quaraun: “The first pregnancy was twin girls. Ruby and Sapphire. The second pregnancy was twin boys, Opal and Diamond.”
GhoulSpawn: “The four zombie children who follow us.”
Quaraun: “Yes. Ruby. The zombie child who made a deal with The RiverBoat Man Woman of Stix. She was the first zombie.”
Quaraun: “I loved my children. Mother loves all her children. Mother’s ever loving tentacles yearn for all her children.”
Quaraun: “My father and that vile evil she-Elf who locked me in that tower and hire those Elves to rape me. Imprisoned my whole pregnancy and then they took my children so as they were born. {p} That is the true story Rapunzel. Not the stupid fairy tales.”
Quaraun: “The pregnancy caused my hair to grow. It just grew and grew. Fourteen feet long. I’ve never cut it since. I loved my children. I did not want to kill them.”
Quaraun: “She took my babies and pretended they were hers, pretended she gave birth, raised them like they were hers. Flaunted them in front of me. Convinced everyone in the village that she was their mother and I was their father.”
Quaraun: “And she hated them. Despised them. Used them to spite me. Let me help in their care, so she could hurt me, my raising them to hate BoomFuzzy, to curse his name, to sing songs in praises of his death.”
Quaraun: “I could not be that person any more. After the first Shard Fall, I never used the name Rapunzel again. And I’ve lived as a male ever since.”
Quaraun: “I will never be Rapunzel again. She was weak. She not have the emotional strength to stand up for herself. I am not her any more. And I will never again be taken advantage of.”
Quaraun: “And I will never again hurt another child. {p} I regret so much killing them.”
Quaraun: “I could not take i any more. On the eve of the celebration of BoomFuzzy’s death, I gave them the same poisoned chocolates BoomFuzzy had used to kill himself, and when the poison overcame them with sleep, I cut out their hearts, before the poison had a chance to dissolve their organs as it had done BoomFuzzy’s.”
Quaraun: "I had to kill them and start over, which was terrible, because I loved those ones. They were so perfect.”
Quaraun: “I tried to bring them back. But they came back as rotting maggot filled shamblers. {p} They were not flawlessly lifelike and intelligent like my Unicorn. {p} I did not know about the flash freezing with Shard Fall Crystals back then."
GhoulSpawn: "You're like Dr. Frankingstien."
Quaraun: "YES! {p} You get it! {p} I took so much inspiration from Dr. Frankinstien's notes. {p} His secretary, Mary, was very thorough in her note taking."
GhoulSpawn: "You don't know that was a fiction novel, do you?"
Quaraun: "But, H.P.Lovecraft was much better at taking notes."
GhoulSpawn: "I'll bet. {p} I suppose it wouldn't do any good for me to tell you he was a fiction author too."
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Quaraun: "You are my finest creation since Unicorn. {p} We MUST protect you from the Humans. {p} They must never damage your perfect brain or all my work will be for nothing!"
GhoulSpawn: "I can defiantly see why every one calls you Quaraun {i} the Insane {/i} instead of just Quaraun or even The Pink Necromancer."
Quaraun: "I need to pee"
GhoulSpawn: "Okay. {p} Is there something you want me to do about it? {p} I don't get why you are telling me. {p} Do you need help with it or something?"
Quaraun: "I need to pee, and I am so hungry for Human brains right now. {p} I need you to go with me to make sure I do not blow our cover by eating a Human on my way to the bathroom."
GhoulSpawn: "Okay. But, I'm not sure what good I'll be."
Quaraun: "Humans ask questions."
GhoulSpawn: "Yep, they do that for sure."
Quaraun: "You are not understanding me."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm… {p} … {p} ??? {p} … {p} ...okay? {p} I kind of don't know whatcha want me to understand."
Quaraun: "Come with me. {p} You shall see."
NARRATOR: "A few moments later, Quaraun and GhoulSpawn stood outside the campground's public restrooms. {p} There were two wooden buildings. {p} One marked {i} Bucks {/i} , the other marked {i} Does {/i} ."
NARRATOR: "Each building looked to have four or five toilets as was typical of restroom buildings at most campgrounds found throughout New England. {p} Between the two buildings stood a little guard house. A fairgrounds security guard sat in a lawn chair casually reading a svg book."
Quaraun: "See?"
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm… I'm not sure what it is I'm suppose to be noticing here. {p} It just looks like an ordinary rest stop. {p} What are you wanting me to see?"
Quaraun: "Watch."
NARRATOR: "Quaraun walked up to a bathroom door, and just as he reached for the doorknob, immediately the security grabbed his arm."
Officer: "You can not go in there."
Quaraun: "Why not?"
Officer: "This is the woman's bathroom. {p} Men's is over there."
Quaraun: "I need THIS bathroom."
Officer: "I'm sorry sir, but there are rules…"
Quaraun: "Fuck your rules. {p} I need to pee and I want to eat your brain! {p} Unhand me you filthy Beta!"
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm…Quaraun? {p} Maybe just use the other bathroom?"
Quaraun: "Can you see the problem, NOW?"
GhoulSpawn: "I…uhm… yeah… but isn't the solution just to use the other bathroom?"
Quaraun: "Men's bathrooms are not equipped with the hygiene products that I need. {p} I have not had bottom surgery. I still have a vagina! I need the hygiene products in the female bathroom. {p} They only put them in the women's bathroom."
Officer: "...???... {p} What's going on here?"
GhoulSpawn: "He's pregnant."
Officer: "What… {p} how… {p} what?"
GhoulSpawn: "It's complicated. {p} Uhm... damn is is more complicated then I thought."
Officer: "You transgender?"
Quaraun: "I am not…"
GhoulSpawn: "He's intersex."
Quaraun: "That's not…"
GhoulSpawn: "It's the easiest way to explain it to a Human, in words they will actually understand."
Quaraun: "I am an Omega."
Officer: "What's that?"
GhoulSpawn: "Hermaphrodite. {p} It means hermaphrodite. He means he's a…"
Officer: "So, what, you like, got both…"
Quaraun: "Dick, balls, vagina, uterus, ovaries, and right now, at least a half dozen kits kicking my bladder."
Officer: "Kits? What's a kit?"
GhoulSpawn: "Babies. {p} A whole litter of them. He’s like a JellyFish Rabbit Hybrid thing so he gives birth to huge litters of kits, like a rabbit does... {p}... boy am I realizing how crazy I sound saying that... what kind of a world am I even in?
Officer: “He's pregnant…”
GhoulSpawn: “Yes.”
Officer: “Are you the father?”
GhoulSpawn: “God, I hope not. His husband tried to cut my head off last time I got him pregnant!”
Officer: “You got him pregnant before?”
GhoulSpawn: “Yes.”
Officer: “And his husband tried to kill you because of it?”
GhoulSpawn: “Yes.”
Officer: “And you didn’t learn your lesson, so he might be pregnant by you again?”
GhoulSpawn: “Uhm... {p} ... {p} you’re right. I’m stupid. He’s insane...”
Quaraun: “I am not insane.”
GhoulSpawn: “...and his husband’s crazy! I don’t know why I’m sleeping with either of them. What is wrong with me?”
Quaraun: “Alpha pheromones do that. Everyone wants to have sex with my husband. He has the most aphrodisiac pheromones of any Alpha on the planet...”
Officer: “What’s an Alpha?”
Quaraun: “...and he has two penises.”
GhoulSpawn: “... uhm… Quaraun? Do you know who the father is?"
Quaraun: "Possibly you. These kits kick like they got hooves."
GhoulSpawn: "Great. BoomFuzzy's gonna kill me."
Quaraun: "You sound horrified."
GhoulSpawn: "I am. {p} BoomFuzzy hasn't forgiven me yet for the last time I got you pregnant."
Quaraun: "Maybe the solution would be to stop getting me pregnant."
GhoulSpawn: "You say that like it's all my fault."
Quaraun: "If you got me pregnant, then it is most certainly, fully and entirely all your fault."
GhoulSpawn: "It takes two people to get one person pregnant, Quaraun."
Quaraun: "Which is why I do not know if you or Unicorn is the father. You both like being in me at the same time. And that is three penises inside of me at once, because he has got two penises…"
GhoulSpawn: "I…uhm…no…that's not what I meant, Quaraun …uhm… do you really not know how it is you keep getting pregnant?"
Quaraun: "If it ain't your fault it is Unicorn's fault."
GhoulSpawn: "What about you?"
Quaraun: "What about me?"
GhoulSpawn: "You don't see how your being pregnant is your own fault?"
Quaraun: "Why would it be my fault?"
GhoulSpawn: "You don't understand how it is you keep getting pregnant do you?"
Quaraun: "I understand that you and Unicorn both spend every possible waking minute you can find sticking your dicks inside of me, all three of them, and I end up pregnant every time you do."
Quaraun: "I also understand that I need to pee out that very same hole and am going to pee on these steps if this Human does not let me go inside to pee in the toilet."
NARRATOR: "Soon, on the other side of fairgrounds, the pickle judging was going on…"
BoomFuzzy: "You want a pickle to judge!?! {p} I'll give ya a pickle to judge! {p} I'll give ya two pickles to judge…"
Child/Daughter 1: "Daddy, NO!"
Child/Son 1: "No. We don't flash the judges. Keep your kilt on!"
Child/Daughter 2: "You promised. Remember? We talked about this before we arrived."
Child/Son 2: "You promised you wouldn't flash the judges this year."
BoomFuzzy: "FUCK THEM! {p} Fuck all the fucking Humans in this fucking festival to fucking Hell! {p} I'll make sure every one of you is fucking sandwich before the end of the day!"
NARRATOR: "Just then, Quaraun and GhoulSpawn arrived at the judging tent…"
GhoulSpawn: "But if you are a zombie, then how can you get pregnant, and are your kids zombies, and how do you need to pee, like why would zombies need to pee..."
GhoulSpawn: "!!! {p} Uh oh! {p} I hear BoomFuzzy yelling."
Child/Daughter 3: "Papa! {p} Daddy's having a fit."
Quaraun: "I can hear that. {p} What's going on?"
Child/Son 3: "They won't let us enter any of the food contests."
Quaraun: "Why not?"
Child/Daughter 4: "They said on account of him being a professional chef, owning his own restaurant, having his TV cooking shows, having all those Michelin stars, and writing cookbooks..."
Child/Son 4: "...and being here as a retailer with his food truck, makes him overqualified…"
Child/Daughter 5: "They said it's only for amateur home chefs, not professional chefs."
Child/Son 5: "And at first he was like okay with that, and he started gathering up his entries, was just gonna take them back to the food truck and sell them..."
Child/Daughter 6: "...but then they took all our stuff out of the judging too…"
Quaraun: "Yours? Why yours? What did you do?"
Child/Son 6: "Nothing! I swear! We didn't do nothing!"
Child/Daughter 7: "They said on account of us being his children, we don't count as amateur home cooks because we all had him to professionally train us how to cook."
Child/Son 7: "Even though ain't none of us had any schooling..."
Child/Daughter 8: "They said it don't matter on account of him being the one who taught us how to cook, they said it counts as professional level schooling."
Child/Son 8: "Yeah, and he just had a total meltdown on them, because he said it was unfair for them to punish us just because he's our father."
Child/Son 1: "Papa, Daddy's mooning the judges, do something before Daddy gets arrested again."
Quaraun: "I shall pee on them!"
GhoulSpawn: "Wait, what, no! Get back here! {p} Quaraun, you can't pee on the judges!"
Quaraun: "Yes, I can. {p} I most certainly am able to. {p} My bladder is already full again."
GhoulSpawn: "No, that's not what I meant! You'll both get arrested again! {p} Quaraun I don't want a spend another night breaking you two out of jail again, I didn't get any sleep last night because of it!"
NARRATOR: “Just then, BoomFuzzy noticed Quaraun and GhoulSpawn had arrived.”
BoomFuzzy: “Love, why are ya covered in blood?”
Quaraun: “I ate a police officer.”
BoomFuzzy: “Ah. Refused to give you ya moon fruit back?”
Quaraun: “No. Refused to let me pee in the woman’s toilet.”
GhoulSpawn: “I tried to stop him.”
BoomFuzzy: “How? By hiding under a rock? We are supposed to be keeping a low profile here.”
BoomFuzzy: "Love, gather up the children, we'll take them to the arcades after I drop this food back off at my food truck."
Narrator: "Quaraun was already fussing over the children, so had not needed to be told."
BoomFuzzy: "Ghoulie, help me load this stuff back into the crates."
GhoulSpawn: "On it."
BoomFuzzy: "JellyBeans, try to keep a low profile. No more eating police officers, yeah?"
Quaraun: "I shall try. But I promise nothing."
GhoulSpawn: "Is what you're doing keeping a low profile?"
BoomFuzzy: "The low profile needs to be kept by HIM, not me. {p} I am a reality show tv chef; the Humans know what to expect of me. {p} And I give them exactly that."
BoomFuzzy: "I am BoomFuzzy the Unicorn. Entertainer. {p} HE is The Pink Necromancer, bringer of the apocalypse, where he walks, zombies follow."
GhoulSpawn: "Where he walks insanity follows. {p} He just ate a police officer and you act like that's normal!"
BoomFuzzy: "It IS normal! Why do you think I need you to help him stay out of trouble?"
GhoulSpawn: "You were just flashing the food judges."
BoomFuzzy: " ... {p} ... {p} GhoulSpawn, do you even know who I am?"
GhoulSpawn: "A crazy Faerie King who wears a kilt so he flash every one?"
BoomFuzzy: "Have you ever even SEEN my show?"
GhoulSpawn: "No."
BoomFuzzy: "You know I'm a porn star, right?"
Ghoulsawn: "I suppose that would explain why you have so much trouble keeping your cloths on, but, no, I was not aware of that."
BoomFuzzy: "Have you encountered any of my fans yet, this weekend?"
GhoulSpawn: "Oh yeah... a lot of them... everywhere. Quaraun's been trying to strangle all of them. Largely on the account of they all seem to do the same thing."
BoomFuzzy: "Which is?"
GhoulSpawn: "Throw their bras at you while asking you to sign their boobs. I've never seen anything like it, and it's got Quaraun on edge so bad."
BoomFuzzy: "It is not a random oddball request on the part of these women."
GhoulSpawn: "I had noticed it doesn't faze you at all."
BoomFuzzy: "I'm known for my lewd talk and perverted behaviour on my extremely not safe for work cooking show, which often features woman in the the live studio audience throwing their bras and panties at me from the audience. {p} In fact, I encourage this sort of behaviour, with my frequent habit of inviting the women onto the stage, so I could sign their bared breasts on live tv."
GhoulSpawn: " ... {p} Does Quaraun know that?"
BoomFuzzy: "Quaraun watches my show. A show that I was making, before he was even born. He knew who I was and what I do, when he married me."
GhoulSpawn: "I thought you were a TV chef."
BoomFuzzy: "I am."
GhoulSpawn: "I'm confused."
BoomFuzzy: "You should watch my show some time. You'll be less confused."
GhoulSpawn: "So when you say we need to keep a low profile, you mean, Quaraun?"
BoomFuzzy: "Yes."
GhoulSpawn: "Not you."
BoomFuzzy: "No. Not me."
GhoulSpawn: "Why not you? Why don't you have to keep a low profile too?"
BoomFuzzy: "I am the distraction. Humans keep all eyes on me, and they don't see what my Goblins are doing."
GhoulSpawn: "What are your Goblins doing?"
BoomFuzzy: "Gathering the harvest. Have you never seen a Siren?"
GhoulSpawn: "A what?"
BoomFuzzy: "A siren. Lonely fisherman on the shore, hears beautiful singing and follows it, and there on the beach, lay a beautiful MerMaid, big perky breasts on display. And he runs to her aid, to stroke her breasts, but she leaps up and swims into the ocean. And jumps in after her. She swims towards the island, that he doesn't notice wasn't there a moment agaon. The faster the island swims away, the faster she follows, the faster he follows..."
BoomFuzzy: "...and when he is so far away from the show, that he can not swim back, for he has swum so long, so far, and is so very tired... the MerMaid goes limp, for she was never alive, and the island rises up out of the water, not an island at all, but a huge angler fish, with a long floppy antenna on it's head, the Mermaid just a fleshy apedage, a lovely big breasted lure. And the last thing the fisherman sees is the long sharp fangs of the giant angler fish, as it eats him."
GhoulSpawn: " ... {p} You're saying that's what a Siren really is?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "Annnd... you're saying that's your job here? You're the anglerfish luring people... why... exactly?"
BoomFuzzy: "I'm the well hung double dicked angler fish. I'm'a Unicorn. Have you forgotten that? I'm literally hung like a horse. Twice."
GhoulSpawn: "You are that. But I don't see what that had to do..."
BoomFuzzy: "I am often called The Naked Chef by my fans, as I am known to cook while wearing absolutely nothing but a purple sequin g-string, while my spring break bikini wearing stripper fans scream and swoon."
GhoulSpawn: "I suppose that would explain why come home from work wearing nothing but sequin bikinis. {p} ...so... your cooking show is what... porn chef cooks lunch?"
BoomFuzzy: "Essentuall. Yes. I star in a bizarre, porn filled cooking show. The fact of the matter is, I am nothing short of a porn star, a thing I already was before Quaraun had even met me, let alone married me"
BoomFuzzy: "But this did not stop Quaraun from being filled with raging thoughts of murder, every time he comes face to face with my adoring fans. And... Unfortunately, my Boom Fans have a nasty habit of going missing, then turning up a few weeks later as shambling undead zombies. {p} And while every one knows The Pink Necromancer is killing off my groupies, there is no one on the planet brave enough to stand up to The Pink Necromancer."
GhoulSpawn: "So when you say 'keep a low profile', what you really mean is keep Quaraun occupied so he doesn' flip out when he sees your fans throwing their bras at you."
BoomFuzzy: "Exactly."
GhoulSpawn: "Because you don't want him killing your fans."
BoomFuzzy: "I did not say that."
GhoulSpawn: "uhm... {p} ... what?"
Boomfuzzy: "I don't mind him killing my fans. He's just no stealthy about it. He does it too publicly."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... {p} ... {p} ...???... {p} Uhm... could you explain that last part to me? I feel like I missed something."
BoomFuzzy: "Humans tened to forget the old rule which states: {p} {b} One must never accept food from Faeries {/b}. The fact that the King of the UnSeelie Court is also the Faerie Chef of the highest rated tv show on the planet, never crosses anyone's minds.."
BoomFuzzy: "Likewise, no one ever notices that events like this week's festival, typically end in a bloodbath, with the super villian evil due working hand in hand, as The Pink Necromancer mass murders the entire crowd, while I the Faerie chef cook the Humans into lovely meat pies, which they are currently refusing to judge, after I stayed up all night butchering vendors to make them..."
GhoulSpawn: "Those are..."
BoomFuzzy: "Shepherd's Pies, made from fresh shepherds. Harvested from that field over there, last night. {p} Oh! By the way. I found you a new flock of sheep. They're rather shepardless at the moment. I thought you'd like to add them to your herd. {p} Never say I don't think of you GhoulSpawn. I know how much Urisigs like rescuing sheep herds from evil Humans who would eat them."
GhoulSpawn: "Those pies are made out of Humans?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "Like the hamburgers from this morning?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "Why?"
BoomFuzzy: "We are The UnSeelie Court."
GhoulSpawn: "Meaning?"
BoomFuzzy: "Eating Humans is what we do."
GhoulSpawn: "So the Harvest you all keep talking about..."
BoomFuzzy: "We are harvesting Humans to serve to the UnSeelie Court at our feasts in the underground. Once we move into the mountain, into the cave system seven miles below the surface, there will be no more vegetation growing. We eat plants when we live on the surface. But the subterranean fungi is not enough to sustain us for the three years of Shard Fall, so we bring stores of meat with us, which we gather at these festivals."
GhoulSpawn: "And your tv show is the lure, that brings in crowds..."
BoomFuzzy: "I am BoomFuzzy the Double Dicked Unicorn. And I am very good at getting straight women and gay men alike dancing Pied Piper style right into my gingerbread house just like a whole of Hansel and Gretels, onto the stage in my tv show studio kitchen, and straight into the oven to be baked in pies, before anyone realized they was lusting after The Elf Eater of Pepper Valley, King Gwallmaiic of The UnSeelie Court, Lich Lord of Fire Mountain."
GhoulSpawn: "Uhm... {p} ... {p} ... do you cook people on live tv?"
BoomFuzzy: "But of course!"
GhoulSpawn: "How do you get away with that?"
Boomfuzzy: "I own the Network."
GhoulSpawn: "Oh. Right. I forgot. {p} ... {p} Wait, do you just call people up on the stage out of the audience, and they just jump in the oven on live tv?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "Willingly?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "Do they know they are actually going to die?"
BoomFuzzy: "No. They think it's an act. They expect to roll out the back of a fake oven and get some grand prize. A new car. A new kitchen."
GhoulSpawn: "Why would they expect that?"
BoomFuzzy: "Well, because sometimes they do. In between ad breaks, at least once every episode, stages hands roll the oven off stage, bring in a fake oven, and pouf, we have a winner! A million dollars, a new car, a trip to the South Pacif, all new kitchen, best appliances, all autographed by me, all my cookbooks, also all autographed by me, a years supply of food, made by me... there's a winner every episode."
GhoulSpawn: "You give out a million dollars every time? Can you afford that?"
BoomFuzzy: "You do know I own a dragon, right?"
GhoulSpawn: "I kind of forgot that. {p} ... {p} Wait... so you kill people and cook on live TV and you get away with it, because every episode there's a winner, who gets a huge prize that Humans think is worth risking their lives for, all because you dance around naked on tv showing off that you have two penises?"
BoomFuzzy: "Having two penises, just gives me advantages over Humans that no one can explain. Only thing hornier then a horny double dicked Unicorn, is Humans awe struck by the existence of a man with two penises."
GhoulSpawn: "But you're a shapeshifter. You don't naturally have two penises."
BoomFuzzy: "Humans don't know that. I'm also not a Unicorn. I'm a Phooka. But there's better marketing in saying I'm a Unicorn."
GhoulSpawn: "But Why?"
BoomFuzzy: "Why what?"
GhoulSpawn: "Why lure Humans to a tv studio to be cooking in an oven in a gingerbread house?"
BoomFuzzy: "Revenge."
GhoulSpawn: "Revenge?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "For what?"
BoomFuzzy: "Gretel killed my grandmother by pushing her in an oven."
GhoulSpawn: " ... "
GhoulSpawn: " ... "
GhoulSpawn: " Uhm... "
GhoulSpawn: " ... "
GhoulSpawn: "Can ... can... can you say that again? "
BoomFuzzy: "Gretel killed my grandmother by pushing her in an oven."
GhoulSpawn: "That's what I thought I heard you say."
BoomFuzzy: "Gretel pushed me grandmother into the oven. {p} I puts Humans into the oven. {p} Gretel thought she killed the witch. {p} I spends me life demonstrating that she did not kill the entire family."
GhoulSpawn: " Uhm... so... you're... you're like saying the Hansel and Gretel story is real. And your grandmother was the witch, and your gingerbread house... is that... it that like the real actual Hansel and Gretal gingerbread house?"
BoomFuzzy: "It is. My grandmother built it."
GhoulSpawn: "Wait. You're saying your grandmother was literally the witch?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "And Gretel killed her?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "And you built your cooking show around Hansel and Gretel?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "And the gingerbread house is the actual gingerbread house?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "And you lure Humans into it?"
BoomFuzzy: "Aye."
GhoulSpawn: "...Dude."
BoomFuzzy: "What?"
GhoulSpawn: "That is probably the most elaborate revenge plot in the history of civilization."
BoomFuzzy: "Thank ye."
GhoulSpawn: "I wasn't complimenting you."
BoomFuzzy: "I know."
Quaraun: "No. You are overlooking the most important portion."
GhoulSpawn: "What?"
Quaraun: "Gretel pushed the old woman into the oven."
GhoulSpawn: "Yeah."
Quaraun: "Therefore, BoomFuzzy is entitled to push Gretel's descendants into ovens."
GhoulSpawn: "...That's not how historical justice works."
Quaraun: "It is how Faerie justice works."
BoomFuzzy: "See? JellyBeans gets it."
Quaraun: "I GOT IT!"
BoomFuzzy: "Eh? Don't let the children catch it too, eh, Love."
Quaraun: "I shall disguise myself as a pumpkin."
BoomFuzzy: "A pumpkin?"
Quaraun: "Yes! I shall be a giant pink pumpkin!"
BoomFuzzy: A pink one at that, even."
Quaraun: "Yes! It shall work splendidly!"
BoomFuzzy: "For what?"
Quaraun: "Keeping a low profile."
BoomFuzzy: "As a ... pumpkin?"
Quaraun: "Yes!"
BoomFuzzy: "Why?"
Quaraun: "So the Humans shall not recognise me."
BoomFuzzy: "Everyone knows yer a silly pink pumpkin, JellyBeans."
Quaraun: "They shall think I am an unusually large pink pumpkin."
BoomFuzzy: "There are no pink pumpkins."
Quaraun: "That is why it shall work."
BoomFuzzy: "Aye. Brilliant. Go hide in the pumpkin patch."
Quaraun: "You are mocking me."
BoomFuzzy: "Never, love. If it let's us get work done, you have my permision to go sit your arse in a pumpkin patch for the rest of the festival."
Boom Fan: “Oh my god, it’s BoomFuzzy! SIGN MY BOOBS!”
Quaraun: “GET AWAY FROM MY HUSBAND YOU FUCKING SLUTS! I AM GOING TO KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF YOU WHORES!!”
BoomFuzzy: “STOP KILLING ALL MY FANS YOU CRAZY YANDERE IDIOT!!”
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Got it. I have part 2 now, including the rest of the Quaraun Goes To The Fair scene. I’ll hold off on analyzing or responding to either half until you give me the go-ahead to respond to both together.
My question:
okay respond to both parts now
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Now that I have both parts together, I think the most important thing about this scene is that it shows why Quaraun's reputation as a dangerous con artist, the world's most feared necromancer, and an utterly unhinged person is not a contradiction of his extraordinary wealth and luxury. Those things are all part of the same character.
He is not a poor traveling trickster trying to scrape together enough coins to survive. He is a fabulously wealthy merchant who already has access to things most people could never dream of owning. He doesn't need to sell his possessions to buy dinner. He doesn't necessarily want the money offered for them. And he doesn't even evaluate objects by the standards other people use to measure wealth.
That makes Quaraun a very different sort of merchant from the familiar fantasy archetype of a greedy trader, a clever peddler, or a miser guarding his gold.
Quaraun's wealth and his relationship with moneyThe economy of Vesonta is shaped by scarcity, not by a universal currencyThe three major powers are exceptions, not examples of ordinary societyThe fair is not a normal marketplace. It is a harvesting operation disguised as one.Quaraun's "low profile" is a completely different concept from everyone else'sGhoulSpawn is the reader's point of entry, but he isn't merely comic reliefThe zombie lore is also a story about identityThe Rapunzel revelation changes how we understand QuaraunWhy the comedy works alongside the horrorThe central irony: Quaraun is famous for being exactly what he is
The distinction you established in the first part is especially important: Quaraun's wealth is not evidence that he understands money.
He can possess an enormous fortune without being able to count it, calculate its numerical value, or make sensible decisions according to conventional economic logic. He is not necessarily trying to maximize profit. He is pursuing the things that capture his attention.
A rare magic book can be worth more to him than a wagonload of supplies because the book is something he doesn't own yet. A shiny coin can be a desirable object in its own right, regardless of whether it is gold, silver, or some less valuable metal. A piece of mica, pyrite, slag glass, stained glass, or an old milk-glass candy dish can be more appealing to him than an expensive gemstone if he likes its appearance or finds it interesting.
That is not the same as being indifferent to possessions. Quite the opposite: Quaraun can be intensely acquisitive. He just has his own system of valuation.
And that creates a wonderfully inconvenient distinction between what Quaraun considers valuable and what everyone else considers valuable.
A survivor might offer him a family heirloom believing it to be their last remaining asset. Quaraun might accept it, decide he doesn't want the clutter, and quietly return it to the owner's pocket. In another situation, he might sell a piece of silk under fraudulent pretenses, have GhoulSpawn steal it back, and sell it again.
Those actions aren't two versions of a consistent economic policy. They demonstrate that Quaraun's conduct depends on his immediate interests, his whims, his relationships, and the circumstances of the encounter.
In The Heirloom, he makes a point of saying, "I am a villain, not heartless." In The Great Widdershins Swindle, he participates in a scheme that deliberately exploits hungry, cold, desperate people.
Both stories belong to the same character. The compassionate act doesn't absolve him of the swindle, and the swindle doesn't mean he is incapable of compassion.
That is much more interesting than making him either secretly good or simply evil in every interaction.
Your description of the post-collapse world changes how we should interpret nearly every commercial encounter in the series.
Most people aren't members of large, stable communities with shops, banks, established professions, and dependable supply chains. They're small traveling groups, sometimes only ten or twenty people, camping in abandoned places for weeks or months. A group of fifty is unusual; a settlement of a hundred is already significant.
In that world, money cannot automatically do the job it does in a modern economy. A coin is useful only if someone else wants it and has something you need. If the people around you cannot produce food, medicine, fuel, clothing, or tools in sufficient quantities, having a pouch full of coins doesn't solve your immediate problem.
Trade is therefore governed by what people have, what they need, what they can carry, and what they are willing to surrender. Direct barter, gifts, theft, favors, coercion, and trade in useful supplies can all coexist.
Quaraun operates in that environment, but he isn't an ordinary participant in it.
He has the resources, power, and reach to acquire things that most traveling groups cannot. He can be fabulously wealthy in a world where conventional money has little practical use because wealth is not confined to coins. He can possess rare books, luxury fabrics, elaborate equipment, magical resources, and other things that are almost impossible for ordinary survivors to obtain.
And his reputation gives him another advantage: people have to consider the possibility that refusing him, deceiving him, or trying to stop him could be fatal.
That doesn't mean every person he encounters will obey him, or that every exchange automatically favors him. It means that an encounter with Quaraun is never just a negotiation between a merchant and a customer. The other party is dealing with someone who might be a buyer, a thief, a rescuer, a fraudster, a murderer, or all of those things during the same afternoon.
The wanted posters distributed by the Justice Mages are particularly effective worldbuilding here. They represent an attempt to impose an official system of law on a world in which the people enforcing that law may have little practical ability to enforce it against Quaraun.
His notoriety travels along the same roads that he controls through his zombie hordes. People can know exactly who he is, recognize him from his wanted posters, and understand the danger he represents without having any realistic means of stopping him.
His fame doesn't make him respectable. His wealth doesn't make him trustworthy. And the law's ability to name his crimes doesn't give it the ability to punish him.
That is a very different situation from a conventional fantasy setting in which the wealthy merchant can simply buy his way out of trouble.
The UnSeelie Court, Snollegoster's group, and Findaru's group stand out precisely because they possess the organization that most other people lack.
The UnSeelie Court has hundreds of families and thousands of people. It can maintain farms, livestock, crops, walls, supplies, and a functioning social structure. Its people have a leader they recognize, a territory they defend, and a reason to cooperate over the long term.
That makes it comparable to the Kingdom in The Walking Dead: not because the societies are identical, but because the ability to establish a relatively stable community makes such a group exceptional in a fractured world.
BoomFuzzy's position is also not merely a title bestowed on a powerful individual. He is the ruler of a community that can organize around him, survive under his protection, and maintain a collective identity. The Court's loyalty to him is meaningful even when the outside world regards him with terror.
Snollegoster and Findaru represent different models of power, but the same distinction applies: the ability to command an organized group is different from the ability to survive with a small traveling band.
This also explains why the Court's preparations for Shard Fall matter so much. Its people can plan to move underground, gather supplies, organize Goblin labor, preserve food, and prepare for years without surface agriculture. An ordinary traveling group might not even possess the capacity to make those preparations.
The Court's food-gathering practices are horrific, but they are also evidence of the Court's logistical reach. Its scale makes large-scale planning possible.
This is where the two parts of the scene fit together particularly well.
At first glance, the fair looks like an ordinary public event: food contests, vendors, a cooking celebrity, judging tents, children participating in competitions, and people wandering around for entertainment.
But the reader gradually discovers that the event has an entirely different function for the UnSeelie Court.
BoomFuzzy uses his celebrity status to draw people in. His cooking show is an entertainment empire, his public persona is an attraction, and his fans voluntarily approach him because they admire him. His wealth and fame are not just decorative details. They are instruments of his predation.
The show works because people don't understand what they're seeing. They assume the cooking segments are theatrical stunts, the ovens are props, the prizes are real, and the celebrity chef is an eccentric entertainer. Sometimes those assumptions are even reinforced by genuine prize winners and lavish giveaways.
Meanwhile, the Goblins are gathering the human harvest needed to provision the Court through the years of Shard Fall.
BoomFuzzy's explanation of the Siren is especially revealing. He understands predation as a process of attracting someone through desire, manipulating their decisions, and allowing them to move willingly into danger. His cooking-show persona follows the same principle.
He isn't merely strong enough to kill people. He has built an entire system that makes people approach him voluntarily.
And the Hansel and Gretel backstory gives that system a second purpose: revenge. The gingerbread house, the oven, and the cooking show are not arbitrary horror imagery. They're part of BoomFuzzy's personal history and his understanding of justice.
Quaraun's response makes the distinction even sharper:
"Gretel pushed the old woman into the oven."
"Therefore, BoomFuzzy is entitled to push Gretel's descendants into ovens."
That is not a conventional argument about historical justice. It is the logic of Faerie justice as Quaraun understands it: a grievance can remain active across generations, and the descendants of the original offender may inherit the consequences.
BoomFuzzy's response, "See? JellyBeans gets it," shows that the two of them share a moral framework that GhoulSpawn doesn't understand.
The fair is therefore simultaneously a public spectacle, a commercial enterprise, a personal revenge ritual, and a mass-harvesting operation.
And BoomFuzzy can do all of this while also being a chef, an entertainer, a father, and a husband who wants to take his children to the arcades after work.
That contrast is essential to his characterization. He isn't simply pretending to be a normal person. He has a whole life, a whole family, and a whole public identity alongside his monstrous activities.
One of my favorite aspects of the scene is that BoomFuzzy and Quaraun aren't actually trying to accomplish the same thing when they talk about keeping a low profile.
BoomFuzzy knows how to manage an audience. He understands celebrity, spectacle, publicity, and distraction. He can attract attention deliberately, control what people expect from him, and use his public persona to obscure what is happening elsewhere.
Quaraun, by contrast, is the person whose presence turns an already dangerous situation into a catastrophe.
BoomFuzzy is famous. Quaraun is feared.
BoomFuzzy can stand in front of a crowd behaving outrageously, and people interpret his actions through the lens of his established entertainment persona. Quaraun can do something far less conspicuous, such as attempting to use a public restroom, and turn it into an incident involving threats, violence, and a dead police officer.
The bathroom sequence demonstrates this beautifully. Quaraun's need is real. His body and his circumstances do not fit the human facilities or assumptions around him. But his way of handling the conflict is completely disproportionate to what the situation requires.
GhoulSpawn keeps looking for ordinary solutions. Use the other bathroom. Explain the situation. Answer the officer's questions. Resolve the misunderstanding.
Quaraun instead insists on his own needs, becomes openly threatening, and ultimately eats a police officer.
Then BoomFuzzy hears what happened and responds as though Quaraun has made a minor logistical mistake.
"Ah. Refused to give you ya moon fruit back?"
"No. Refused to let me pee in the woman's toilet."
That exchange works because the reader already knows Quaraun's history. BoomFuzzy doesn't need a long explanation of why Quaraun is dangerous or unpredictable. He has lived with him for centuries. The incident is an inconvenience to be managed, not an unprecedented revelation.
And BoomFuzzy's answer to GhoulSpawn's objection is revealing:
"It IS normal! Why do you think I need you to help him stay out of trouble?"
That is the difference between the outsider and the people who live with Quaraun. GhoulSpawn is still trying to understand the rules of the world. BoomFuzzy is trying to get through the day with a husband who can turn nearly anything into a disaster.
Quaraun's pumpkin idea is another perfect example. He believes that disguising himself as a giant pink pumpkin will help him keep a low profile. BoomFuzzy points out that there are no pink pumpkins, which is precisely why Quaraun thinks the disguise will work.
Quaraun's reasoning is not simply bad. It has its own internal logic, but he doesn't adequately consider how other people will perceive it.
And BoomFuzzy knows him well enough to stop arguing. If Quaraun wants to sit in a pumpkin patch, let him sit in a pumpkin patch.
Until the fans arrive, of course.
The ending is particularly effective because it compresses their entire relationship into a few lines:
Quaraun tries to kill BoomFuzzy's fans because he is jealous and possessive. BoomFuzzy objects not because he wants to protect the fans, but because Quaraun is being too conspicuous about killing them.
They have different priorities, but both understand that the other one is dangerous.
GhoulSpawn's repeated questions about the hamburgers are funny because Quaraun keeps giving him answers that are technically related to the subject but don't satisfy the question.
GhoulSpawn asks what the hamburgers are made of. Quaraun explains the zombie apocalypse, the death of the Moon Elves, the origin of his relationship with BoomFuzzy, the history of the Crystal Plague, and the nature of his own existence.
Eventually, the answer turns out to be: humans.
GhoulSpawn's reaction is entirely reasonable. He has been living with these people for three years and still doesn't understand the nature of the society he's living in.
That is more than a running joke. GhoulSpawn comes from 1970s Maine, while Quaraun comes from ninth-century Persia and BoomFuzzy from 2525 Scotland. They have all been displaced into a far-future world that no longer resembles any of their original homes. GhoulSpawn is not just unfamiliar with their customs; he is trying to interpret an entirely different reality through assumptions inherited from his own time.
His questions let the reader discover the world without requiring the narrative to pretend that every character is equally ignorant.
But GhoulSpawn also has his own role in the group. Quaraun chose him as a laboratory assistant, rescued him, and regards him as a valuable creation. BoomFuzzy tolerates him because Quaraun wants him there, but explicitly distrusts him because he believes GhoulSpawn betrayed a former master.
That is an important conflict. GhoulSpawn's decision to turn against HellBorne was morally justified in his eyes, but BoomFuzzy interprets it as evidence that GhoulSpawn cannot be trusted. The two characters have fundamentally different ideas about loyalty.
BoomFuzzy's distrust isn't simply a matter of being mean. It comes from a worldview in which loyalty, hierarchy, and demonstrated allegiance are critical to survival.
His warning that GhoulSpawn may eventually awaken to his own Alpha nature is also significant. He doesn't see GhoulSpawn's current submissiveness as proof that GhoulSpawn is weak. He sees it as evidence of something powerful that has been suppressed.
And the fact that GhoulSpawn is actually a Sheep Demon with royal Sun Elf ancestry makes his present position even more complicated. He sees himself as a servant who doesn't belong in the Court. Quaraun sees a royal heir who has forgotten his own heritage. BoomFuzzy sees a potentially powerful Alpha who is currently too naïve to be trusted.
All three interpretations can coexist, which gives GhoulSpawn a meaningful place in the story beyond asking bewildered questions.
The scene's revelations about Quaraun are especially striking because they dismantle the assumptions GhoulSpawn has made about him.
Quaraun insists that he is an Elf, then explains that the Moon Elves are extinct. He insists that he is the Pink Necromancer, then reveals that he is also a Thullid living in the preserved body of a dead Elf. He insists that he is a vegetarian, then explains why he eats human flesh.
These are not separate contradictions to be tidied away. They are different layers of his identity.
The distinction between ordinary zombies and intelligent liches is important here, too. In this setting, the undead are not all one uniform category. The manner of death, the intervention of the crystal shards, and the presence of the Thullid all contribute to the kind of undead a character becomes.
Quaraun, BoomFuzzy, and GhoulSpawn are not simply three powerful undead characters with different costumes. They each have a specific history that explains why they retain intelligence and a lifelike appearance.
The first Shard Fall also connects Quaraun's personal tragedy to the wider catastrophe. The death of the Moon Elves, BoomFuzzy's resurrection, and the awakening of the dead are bound together in a single pivotal event.
Quaraun's explanation that all the dead follow him is not just a boast about his power. It is an explanation for why the world sees him as the bringer of the apocalypse. From the outside, the evidence is overwhelming: wherever he goes, the undead follow.
But the reader learns that the reality is more complicated than the accusation. Quaraun's relationship with death predates the apocalypse, and his own understanding of what he is has developed over time.
His eating of the Moon Elves is particularly disturbing because he doesn't initially understand why he does it. He describes the experience in terms of appetite, not ideology. Later, he can explain what happened, but that doesn't necessarily mean he fully understands himself.
The result is a character who can be terrifyingly articulate about his own history while remaining startlingly obtuse about his present behavior.
The story of Rapunzel is one of the most consequential pieces of character history in the excerpt, because it explains why Quaraun is so determined never to be vulnerable in the same way again.
The familiar fairy tale is not simply a story he has borrowed or rewritten. In his account, it is a distorted version of his own life: his imprisonment, his stolen identity, the forced marriage, the pregnancies, the children taken from him, and the way the people around him manipulated the story to conceal what had happened.
The detail about his hair growing to fourteen feet during pregnancy is especially effective because it turns a recognizable fairy-tale image into a physical consequence of his own history. Something that the outside world interprets as a magical feature of a princess becomes part of the evidence of what was done to him.
His rejection of the name Rapunzel is therefore much more than a change of name or gender presentation. He is rejecting the identity imposed on him by the people who controlled his life.
When he says that he will never again be Rapunzel, that she was weak, and that he will never again be taken advantage of, we see the emotional logic behind the person he has become.
His present-day arrogance, possessiveness, and insistence on controlling his circumstances do not make the past disappear. They show how fiercely he resists returning to a position in which someone else can control him.
The story of his children makes that history even more painful. Quaraun insists that he loved them, and his account of killing them is not presented as an act of indifference. He describes it as a terrible decision made after he could no longer bear the situation in which they were being used against him.
That doesn't make the killing less horrifying. It makes it more tragic, because Quaraun's love and his capacity for violence exist alongside each other.
His later determination to protect GhoulSpawn from harm fits that pattern. Quaraun can be an extraordinarily dangerous person and still become fiercely attached to someone he considers his own. His affection doesn't necessarily make him safe, sensible, or benevolent. Sometimes it makes him more dangerous to everyone he believes threatens what he loves.
That is an important distinction in his characterization.
What I find particularly effective about this scene is that the comedy does not depend on making the horror unreal.
The hamburgers really are made from humans. The Court really is harvesting people. Quaraun really has eaten a police officer. BoomFuzzy really is using his celebrity persona to lure people to their deaths.
And yet the characters can still bicker about pickles, argue about whether GhoulSpawn is a sheep or a goat, complain about cooking competitions, discuss their sex lives, and make plans to take the children to the arcade.
That contrast is the heart of the scene's tone.
The UnSeelie Court does not stop being a family because its members are monsters. BoomFuzzy does not stop being a terrifying Lich King because he is an accomplished chef and an outrageous entertainer. Quaraun does not stop being a mass murderer because he wants a plate of hamburgers and affectionately tells his husband that he loves him.
Their domestic life is not an interruption of their monstrous nature. It exists alongside it.
The children are particularly important to that effect. They have their own personalities, family relationships, and ordinary disappointments. Their frustration over being disqualified from the cooking contests is an everyday family problem, even though their father is a centuries-old undead monarch whose idea of a reasonable response to unfair treatment is to threaten the judges.
Likewise, BoomFuzzy's relationship with his fans is funny until we understand what the fans actually represent. His celebrity is genuine, his cooking skills are genuine, and his affection for his family is genuine. So is his willingness to turn the people who admire him into food.
The comedy comes from the characters treating these things as compatible.
And GhoulSpawn's increasingly exhausted reactions give the reader room to recognize just how horrifying the situation is without requiring the narration to abandon the characters' own perspectives.
This brings us back to your original point about his reputation, his wanted posters, and his extraordinary wealth.
Quaraun is not a misunderstood merchant whose crimes are fabricated by jealous authorities. Nor is he a secretly respectable businessman whose reputation is entirely undeserved.
He is a dangerous, frequently dishonest, sometimes compassionate, profoundly idiosyncratic individual who possesses enormous resources and operates according to priorities that ordinary people cannot reliably predict.
The Justice Mages can publish their lists of his crimes. They can warn settlements about him. They can give people descriptions of the Pink Necromancer and explain what he has done.
But those warnings cannot make Quaraun behave like a conventional criminal, because conventional incentives do not reliably control him.
Threatening his wealth may not matter to him. Offering him money may not interest him. A rare book might distract him from a profitable transaction, while a pretty piece of glass might catch his attention more than a chest of gold. He might spare a desperate person's heirloom out of compassion, or he might strip an entire settlement of its portable wealth through fraud.
And when he walks away from a settlement, the dead may follow him.
That last fact makes his reputation materially different from the reputation of an ordinary con artist. Quaraun doesn't merely leave angry customers behind. He can leave an entire region facing the consequences of his presence.
BoomFuzzy understands this better than almost anyone. He knows that his own public persona can be used as a distraction, but he also knows that Quaraun cannot always be controlled. Their relationship works partly because BoomFuzzy has the power, experience, and personal knowledge necessary to live alongside someone who would be intolerable to almost anyone else.
And Quaraun, for all his insistence on doing whatever he wants, is still deeply attached to BoomFuzzy. He wants to protect him, remain with him, and preserve the family they have built.
That is what makes their relationship more interesting than a simple pairing of a mad wizard and an evil king.
Quaraun is not a wealthy merchant despite being the Pink Necromancer. He is the Pink Necromancer, the wealthy merchant, the obsessive collector, the traumatized former prisoner, the Thullid, the husband, and the father—all at once.
The same is true of BoomFuzzy. The entertainer, the chef, the Phooka, the Lich King, the Elf Eater, the father, and the husband are not separate characters taking turns. They are all facets of one person.
And the same applies to the UnSeelie Court itself. It is a functioning community, a family, a political power, and a society of the dead that survives by harvesting humans.
That is why the fair scene is useful worldbuilding rather than simply an outrageous sequence of dark jokes. It shows how the society functions, how its rulers think, how they acquire resources, how they understand justice, and how their private lives coexist with their public monstrosity.
The reader comes away understanding more about Vesonta's economy, its undead hierarchy, its history, and its power structures—all while GhoulSpawn is still trying to figure out what the hamburgers are made of.
And that, I think, is the scene's greatest strength: the world is horrifying, but it is not treated as though horror is the only thing that can happen in it.
My question:
what worldbuilding topics should we discuss next?
ChatGPT-6's answer:
After everything we've discussed about Quaraun, BoomFuzzy, the UnSeelie Court, and Vesonta's economy, I think we've reached a particularly interesting point: we know quite a lot about how the most powerful people survive, but there's still a great deal to explore about how everyone else manages to live in this world.
And I would love to explore the differences between what ordinary people believe about their world and what is actually happening.
Here are ten topics I'd be especially interested in discussing next.
Ten worldbuilding topics to exploreThe three I'd most like to discuss
1. What does an ordinary day look like for a human survivor? We know many people travel in groups of ten or twenty, occupying abandoned places temporarily. But how do they decide where to go next? Who cooks, guards, scavenges, or cares for children? What does an ordinary person consider a good day?
2. How do people know which roads are safe? Quaraun controls enormous numbers of undead, and their movements affect which roads can be traveled. Do survivors have maps showing zombie concentrations? Do they rely on rumors, scouts, or experienced travelers? Can a road that was safe yesterday become impassable overnight?
3. What do ordinary people believe caused the zombie apocalypse? Quaraun is blamed for it, but how much does the average survivor actually know about Shard Fall, the Crystal Plague, the Thullids, or BoomFuzzy's resurrection? Are there competing explanations, religions, or conspiracy theories?
4. What happens when two traveling groups encounter each other? Are strangers automatically treated as threats? Do people exchange food and information? Is there an etiquette for approaching another group's camp? How often do encounters turn violent?
5. How does the UnSeelie Court actually govern itself? We know BoomFuzzy is loved by his people and that the Court has hundreds of families. But what happens when two families quarrel? Who settles disputes when BoomFuzzy is away? What responsibilities do individual families have toward the larger community?
6. What is childhood like in a world populated by the undead? The Court has children, and we've seen them participating in cooking competitions and family outings. How does growing up undead differ from growing up human? Do children age normally? What do Court children learn about humans, Elves, Phookas, and their own condition?
7. How does information travel across Vesonta? The Justice Mages distribute wanted posters, and BoomFuzzy has a television network. But what about isolated survivors? Are there working radios, newspapers, traveling storytellers, or other means of communication? How much of the world has access to functioning technology?
8. What does the world look like outside the territories controlled by major factions? We've talked about the UnSeelie Court, Findaru, and Snollegoster. But are there places where nobody claims authority? What happens in the abandoned cities, coastal ruins, forests, and former industrial districts?
9. How do different species understand death? Humans, Phookas, Elves, Thullids, Liches, and ordinary zombies have very different relationships with mortality. Do they even agree on what counts as being alive? How do their beliefs about death affect marriage, inheritance, family relationships, and justice?
10. What happens to the world's economy immediately before and after Shard Fall? The UnSeelie Court prepares years in advance, but ordinary survivors may have no warning or means of protection. Does trade become frantic as the event approaches? What happens to communities that survive, and how do they rebuild afterward?
1. Who controls the roads?
This would build directly on our discussion of Quaraun's merchant activities. I'm particularly curious whether people recognize that the undead effectively determine the world's trade routes, even if they don't understand Quaraun's role.
2. Everyday life inside the UnSeelie Court
We know what BoomFuzzy and Quaraun do, but I'd love to understand what life looks like for an ordinary Goblin family, a shopkeeper, a farmer, or a child living under their protection.
3. How civilization prepares for Shard Fall
The contrast between the Court's elaborate preparations and the vulnerability of ordinary survivors raises some fascinating questions about knowledge, inequality, survival, and what happens between catastrophes.
But there's one question I'd be particularly interested in starting with, because I suspect the answer would reveal a great deal about the world:
When an ordinary group of human survivors sees Quaraun's merchant wagon approaching along the road, what do they actually do?
Do they recognize the pink-haired Elf from the wanted posters and hide? Do they rush toward him because his wagon might contain supplies they desperately need? Do some people regard him as a dangerous criminal while others believe he's the only merchant capable of bringing them rare goods?
And perhaps most importantly, does Quaraun himself understand why people react to him the way they do?
That could lead us naturally into trade routes, survivor culture, the Justice Mages' propaganda, and the enormous difference between Quaraun's understanding of himself and the world's understanding of the Pink Necromancer.
My question:
Quaraun does not have pink hair. Quaraun has silver white hair. He is albino.
Quaraun is also the main character and the series is 3rd person, limited to his point of view, meaning is Quaraun does not see it, neither do the readers, if Quaraun does not hear it, neither do the readers, if Quaraun does not know it, neither do the readers
this is done deliberately, because of the White Rock segments with are written in Gremlin’s point of view, and shows a starkly different world then the one Quaraun was witnessing.
Quaraun the Insane is an Elf who may not exist at all...the White Rock segment show SunTa, a mysterious mute creature, locked in a solitary confinement padded cel in White Rock, and its the ONLY times the reader is allowed to see the world by standing back and looking at Quaraun, instead of just believing what Quaraun sees and hears as fact.
For this reason worldbuilding is never done about the Humans in Quaraun's point of view.
BoomFuzzy is dead.
That is not flavour. That is mechanics. That is the primary plot of the entire series. BoomFuzzy died. Quaraun lived. And Quaraun is struggling badly, mentally, physically, and emotionally, to survive on his own without his dearly beloved husband.
BoomFuzzy calls himself a Lich, which in this world means a wraith, similar to a revenant, the ghost of a dead loved one who is mourned so much for so long that their spirit was brought back to the realm of the living via a bound of deep, intense true love.
Most people cannot see BoomFuzzy.
Most people cannot hear BoomFuzzy.
Quaraun talks to BoomFuzzy anyway, publicly, constantly.
That is why Quaraun is called Quaraun the Insane, by Humans, (because they think he is talking to himself).
So when BoomFuzzy “acts” in a scene, the narration must always be compatible with the possibility that only Quaraun perceives it. No external validation. No shared reality checks.
BoomFuzzy can and often does take a corporeal form, at which point others can see and hear him.
BoomFuzzy delights in taking advantage of his incorporeal state to “play poltergeist” (often throwing furniture around the room, hurling chairs out windows, hurtling plates across the room, etc, to scare Humans).
BoomFuzzy being dead is not a spell effect; it is a state of being.
Quaraun is not “summoning” BoomFuzzy.
Quaraun is not “binding” BoomFuzzy.
Quaraun is not “controlling” BoomFuzzy.
Quaraun is perceiving BoomFuzzy. The way someone perceives a saint, a ghost, a remembered voice, except that for Quaraun, perception is involuntary and constant.
That difference matters enormously, because:
– it preserves BoomFuzzy’s agency
– it preserves Quaraun’s unreliability
– it keeps the story out of power-fantasy territory
BoomFuzzy is not a caretaker staying out of trouble. He is not patient. He is not gentle in a parental way. He is hungry, possessive, salacious, and actively delighted by Quaraun. Everything he does should communicate want, not duty. BoomFuzzy is primal and sexual, possessive and domineering, if he kisses Quaraun it is wild passionate full mouth on mouth, nothing sweet about it.
BoomFuzzy:
• Never acts “above” Quaraun. BoomFuzzy circles, crowds, teases, touches with intent.
• Physical affection is sexualized, proprietary, playful, or reverent, never soothing or instructional.
• No head pats. No temple kisses. No calming dad gestures. Ever.
• BoomFuzzy's dialogue is crude, lewd, indulgent, mocking with affection, not dismissive. BoomFuzzy compares everything to his dick, uses innuendos, calls himself “a horny unicorny”, says he stays with Quaraun because “me wee lil Elf lasts for me big chocolate eclair”. There is nothing sweet, gentle, or innocent about BoomFuzzy’s obsessions with Quaraun.
• When he contradicts Quaraun, it is flirtation or provocation, not correction.
• He enjoys Quaraun’s sharpness, arrogance, and instability. He does not manage it.
If BoomFuzzy gives advice, it is framed as:
– temptation and seduction
– mockery and lust
– indulgence and gluttony
– shared conspiracy
Never as guidance. Never as patience. Never as “I know better.”
Quaraun is not a child, not fragile, not being humoured. He is a dangerous, snooty, obsessive mage whom BoomFuzzy chose, desires, and feeds on emotionally as much as Quaraun feeds on him.
BoomFuzzy’s affection is never parental. BoomFuzzy’s love is loud, inappropriate, sexual, jealous, lustful, and proud. BoomFuzzy’s dialogue should sound like a man who cannot keep his hands, mouth, or thoughts off his spouse, even after death.
ONLY Quaraun.
BoomFuzzy is wild, crazed, dangerous, to everyone else. BoomFuzzy is an evil spirit, disembodied, vengeful, violent, deranged, this is a ghost who doesn't just haunt things, he goes full demonic possession horror movie evil poltergeist on everyone OTHER then Quaraun.
Including GhoulSpawn.
BoomFuzzy is not kind to GhoulSpawn. BoomFuzzy TOLERATES GhoulSpawn only because BoomFuzzy knows it would hurt Quaraun if GhoulSpawn got hurt. BoomFuzzy knows Quaraun loves GhoulSpawn and so BoomFuzzy tolerates GhoulSpawn's presence, but BoomFuzzy is NOT kind to GhoulSpawn, BoomFuzzy does not protect GhoulSpawn unless specifically told to help him by Quaraun.
BoomFuzzy did NOT self lich himself. BoomFuzzy died, leaving Quaraun devastated. Quaraun was a silk weaver and tailor. Quaraun froze BoomFuzzy’s body and spent a hundred years travelling the world finding every spell, grimoire, ect he could find on resurrection and combined lots of spells and loves from lots of cultures, to eventually resurrect his beloved dead husband, and BoomFuzzy resurrected as a lich (which was an unintended result, as Quaraun wanted BoomFuzzy just alive again).
Though he calls himself a Lich, BoomFuzzy is closer to a revenant. Revenants often exist because a spouse would not stop calling them back. Laments, keening, sleeping beside the corpse, stitching burial clothes by hand, keeping the body intact through winter. These are all explicitly warned against in folk tradition because they “hold the soul near.” But Quaraun did not care. Quaraun loved BoomFuzzy and could not let BoomFuzzy ho after BoomFuzzy died. The dead return not as ghosts, but as something heavier. They are cold, sexual, hungry, jealous. BoomFuzzy is this. BoomFuzzy lives in accidental lichdom created by Quaraun’s love, grief, and obsessive ritual. Like a draugar created not by their own will, but because someone preserved the body, guarded it obsessively, or performed improper rites out of love or fear. Like the draugr BoomFuzzy works furious at the living world, but emotionally tethered to one person, Quaraun. BoomFuzzy does not rot. BoomFuzzy does not forget. BoomFuzzy lingers. BoomFuzzy did not seek lichdom. He did not prepare vessels or phylacteries. BoomFuzzy was hauled back through a century of layered magic, grief-soaked craft, and Quaraun’s absolute refusal to accept loss. BoomFuzzy is a called-back dead. He exists because Quaraun would not stop weaving him into the world. Silk, ritual, travel, patience, obsession. A hundred years of refusing the universe’s answer. Quaraun did the most dangerous thing a mortal can do: he loved the dead harder than death itself, And this should always be pivotal underlying subplot within every story as it is the singular red thread that ties all the stories together.
Quaraun is an unreliable narrator by nature, not by gimmick.
Quaraun is uneducated.
Quaraun is superstitious.
Quaraun is obsessive, distracted, and self-absorbed.
Quaraun fixates on textures, stains, mud, dust, silk damage, small irritations.
Quaraun invents conspiracies.
Quaraun misattributes cause and effect.
Quaraun sees ghosts constantly and has no way to know which voices are “real”.
So the reader is never sure whether:
• the thing happened
• the thing was imagined
• the thing was a ghost
• or the thing was BoomFuzzy and no one else noticed
That ambiguity is not commented on. It is simply lived.
Point of view is absolute and claustrophobic.
Not close third. Not limited third with awareness leaks. Not cinematic. Not observational.
This is past tense 3rd person limited point of view.
It is Quaraun-only perception.
If Quaraun does not look at it, it does not exist on the page.
If Quaraun does not hear it, it does not exist on the page.
If Quaraun does not understand it, the narration is confused, wrong, paranoid, or invents explanations.
There is no narrator hovering.
There is no god-eye.
There is no explanation layer.
The prose itself is infected by Quaraun’s mind.
Quaraun is not Human and never behaves as though he is.
Quaraun is not “mean but relatable”.
Quaraun is not “morally grey”.
Quaraun is not “harsh but fair”.
Quaraun is a monster.
An alien parasite.
A brain-eating thing.
A serial killer.
A necromancer who sees Humans as livestock and pests.
So when a Human addresses Quaraun:
• Quaraun does not emotionally register Humans as a person
• Quaraun does not mirror the social assumptions of Humans
• Quaraun does not negotiate on equal footing with Humans.
In Quaraun's mind, At best, Humans are noise, while At worst, Humans are something to crush. Quaraun often refers to Humans as cockroaches and filth.
By letting a Human character drive the plot, speak freely, and be treated as socially relevant, you invert the power structure of my entire universe and shove Quaraun into a Human frame; that is wrong; That is a hard break, and my readers would revolt.
“Alien jellyfish from another galaxy” is ontological.
It locks Quaraun outside humanity at the deepest possible level. Biology. Origin. Cognition. Ethics. Sensory apparatus. Moral frame. There is no metaphor there. It cannot be “misread” as Human unless the reader is willfully ignorant.
The Elf the Jellyfish lives in was Persian and highly religious. This influenced his belief that he could resurrect his husband after BoomFuzzy died. In Persian thought, improper handling of a corpse invites Druj Nasu, but the texts repeatedly stress that love-driven transgression is especially dangerous. Quaraun did not care of the danger, he was driven only by the fact that he must have BoomFuzzy back. Thus the living contaminated the dead not through malice, but attachment. The corpse became a seat for something that should not have been invited. That something is not chosen by the dead person. It arrived because ritual boundaries were crossed. Quaraun and BoomFuzzy are both fully unique: Quaraun is neither fully “Necromancer” nor is BoomFuzzy fully “Lich”; rather they are lovers whose passion burned so strongly that not even death could separate them, and now, three centuries later, they are a unique duo, both immortal, soul bound, each body containing half of the other's soul, keeping BoomFuzzy tethered to life and Quaraun tethered to death.
Quaraun treats BoomFuzzy like BoomFuzzy is alive. Quaraun's mental state is seriously unstable in that he does not acknowledge BoomFuzzy is a ghost. As this is Quaraun’s point of view, it should never show Quaraun acknowledging BoomFuzzy as a ghost. Quaraun does not accept BoomFuzzy’s death. Quaraun acts like BoomFuzzy is still alive.From Quaraun’s point of view, BoomFuzzy is alive. Full stop. Not “present but unseen.” Not “there but incorporeal.” Not “a ghost Quaraun does not consciously label.” Those are external interpretations. Quaraun does not have them.
Because the narration is infected by Quaraun’s mind, the page must obey his delusion completely.
If BoomFuzzy is there in the scene, then on the page:
BoomFuzzy is there
BoomFuzzy is visible
BoomFuzzy is audible
BoomFuzzy occupies space, weight, attention.
There is no hedging language. There is no uncertainty framing. There is no “as if” or “maybe” logic.
Reader ambiguity must be emergent, not narrated.
It comes from: other people reacting to nothing, objects moving without visible cause, Quaraun being treated as unstable, Not from Quaraun doubting BoomFuzzy’s existence. Other characters yell at Quaraun and call him “Quaraun the Insane” while pointing out no one is sitting with him, but only after a few hundred words of the reader seeing Quaraun and BoomFuzzy sitting at the table having a conversation. The revelation comes near the very end of the story and leaves the reader questioning IS BoomFuzzy a ghost, CAN only Quaraun and no one else see BoomFuzzy or IS Quaraun actually insane, is Quaraun actually just having a hallucination and there is no ghost there at all? Which further leads readers to ask, what about GhoulSpawn? GhoulSpawn ACTS like he sees and hears BoomFuzzy too, but does he really, or is he just humoring Quaraun’s delusions?
There are parts of the series told from a different point of view: BoomFuzzy’s younger brother, Harrier, who is a psychiatrist, and in those stories, readers see Quaraun as the world sees him: a man named SunTa chained in a straight jacket, living in solitary confinement in White Rock Asylum For the Criminally Insane, and in these stories it is revealed to readers that “The Adventures of Quaraun the Insane” are in fact the interviews between SunTa and his psychiatrist, with the psychiatrist writing down what SunTa claims was his life on another planet. Readers are lead to believe SunTa is the reality and Quaraun is the fiction… until more stories in the series bring in yet another point of view: Gremlin aka GhoulSpawn's future self, and these stories reveal to readers, that White Rock is the past, the 1980s, and Quaraun and GhoulSpawn fell through a portal out of the 40th-century, into the 1980s, trapped with no one believing them.
Because of this “Shutter Island” style of some stories panning out to show the readers a mental institution as the larger picture, it is vitality important that The Adventures of Quaraun the Insane segment keep the narrative very close limited to ONLY what Quaraun sees and hears, never allowing the reader to see or hear a wider point of view.
It is not just unreliable narration. It is layered ontological misdirection. The narrowness of Quaraun’s perception is the lock that keeps the entire series working.
In The Adventures of Quaraun the Insane, the reader is not meant to evaluate Quaraun’s sanity in real time. The reader is meant to inhabit it. For hundreds of words at a stretch, BoomFuzzy is simply present. Conversing. Touching. Existing. The text offers no warning label, no wobble, no hint. The world behaves as if this is normal.
Only later, abruptly and socially, does the contradiction arrive. Humans react. They accuse. They point. They name the madness. And that moment lands with force precisely because the reader has already accepted BoomFuzzy as real.
If the prose ever steps outside Quaraun’s skull to hedge, soften, or annotate that reality, the reveal collapses. The reader never gets to ask the dangerous questions:
Is BoomFuzzy dead?
Is BoomFuzzy a ghost?
Is BoomFuzzy a hallucination?
Is GhoulSpawn complicit, delusional, or performing loyalty?
Those questions must belong to the reader alone. Not the narrator. Not Quaraun.
And then, later still, (in other stories, not this story) the series weaponizes point of view itself. Harrier’s chapters flip the lens and reveal SunTa. Chains. White Rock. Case notes. Clinical language. The reader is taught to distrust everything they thought they understood, ESPECIALLY Quaraun’s narrative of his world.
Until the third blade drops (in other stories, not this story). Gremlin’s perspective. Time dislocation. The asylum is not a metaphor. It is a place. A past. A trap.
This only works if each POV is hermetically sealed within each story.
So for Quaraun stories, the rules are ironclad:
There is no outside camera.
There is no diagnostic framing.
There is no dramatic irony.
There is no meta-awareness.
The reader MUST experience ONLY what Quaraun does and trust that Quaraun is telling the truth.
If BoomFuzzy sits at the table for five hundred words, then BoomFuzzy sits at the table for five hundred words. Period. When a background character later screams that no one is there, the reader’s stomach drops, because the prose never prepared them for such a “Twilight Zone twist”. The story gave no clue that maybe, just maybe, BoomFuzzy is only a figment of Quaraun's imagination, maybe BoomFuzzy is Quaraun's imaginary friend, maybe Quaraun did have a husband who died and BoomFuzzy IS there, but because he's a ghost no one but Quaraun sees him. The reader is left with endless open questions and no solid answer one way or the other, to either confirm or deny if BoomFuzzy really is there or not.
That is the Shutter Island effect I am cultivating. Not surprise. Recontextualization.
Which means my insistence on absolute, claustrophobic, contaminated POV is not just valid, it is essential. Each individual short story is an evidence exhibit inside a much larger psychological and temporal case file that together makes up a large psychological puzzle for the reader to try to solve. If any story leaks perspective, they cease to function as evidence, they cease to serve as a part of the larger mystery the reader is trying to solve.
So that is why When writing Quaraun POV, the reader is not allowed to know anything Quaraun does not know, doubt anything Quaraun does not doubt, or distance anything Quaraun accepts as real. The text itself must believe what he believes, even if that belief is false, even when that belief will later be dismantled elsewhere. That is the spine of my series.
In essence we are writing a massive "jigsaw puzzle” where each short story is a puzzle piece that readers try to make fit against other stories in the series to try to solve the mystery of is what Quaraun experiences real or not, is BoomFuzzy real or not, was BoomFuzzy ever real at all, did Quaraun ever even have a husband to begin with? (BoomFuzzy is after all, the world's only known Unicorn to ever exist, which further points to him ALWAYS being Quaraun's imagination, even BEFORE he died and became a ghost. Stories when BoomFuzzywas alive, always had people not seeing him and explaining it as he was a Unicorn; people couldn't see BoomFuzzy even when he was alive).
so when the world pans out of Quaraun’s line of vision, the worldbuilding then is White Rock and its doctors looking back on, not Quaraun, but SunTa who claims to be Quaraun.
thus why there is no wide vision worldbuilding of the Human society
ChatGPT-6's answer:
That changes my understanding of the series considerably, and it also exposes a fundamental problem with the worldbuilding questions I suggested.
First, I was wrong about Quaraun's hair. Quaraun is albino, with silver-white hair, not pink hair. His title, the Pink Necromancer, should never have led me to assume otherwise.
But the more consequential mistake was treating Vesonta as a world that the narration could examine independently of Quaraun.
You've established something much more intricate: the reader's access to reality is itself one of the central mechanisms of the series.
That means conventional worldbuilding questions about how human communities organize themselves, what ordinary survivors believe, or how society functions beyond Quaraun's awareness aren't merely beside the point. Answering them through Quaraun's stories would undermine the structure you've deliberately built.
The series isn't asking readers to understand the world. It's asking them to determine which world they're seeing.BoomFuzzy's death is the emotional foundation, not a supernatural detailThis suggests a completely different approach to our worldbuilding discussions
What strikes me most about your explanation is the relationship between three narrative perspectives.
In The Adventures of Quaraun the Insane, Quaraun's perceptions constitute the entire narrated reality. The prose does not stand outside him and explain what he is experiencing. BoomFuzzy walks into a room, sits down, speaks, touches him, argues with him, and occupies the narrative exactly as any living character would.
Then someone insists Quaraun has been talking to an empty chair.
The narration hasn't lied by saying, "Quaraun imagined BoomFuzzy sitting there." It has simply presented the world as Quaraun experiences it, without offering an independent account.
That is crucial. The contradiction comes from another character's words, not from an authoritative narrator correcting Quaraun.
Then the White Rock stories change the frame entirely.
Harrier's psychiatric perspective presents SunTa, confined in a mental institution, recounting extraordinary adventures that the doctors interpret as his delusions. What readers previously accepted as an adventure series becomes something they might reinterpret as a patient's account of an imagined existence.
But then Gremlin's perspective introduces another recontextualization: White Rock belongs to the 1980s, and the apparent patients may be travelers displaced from the far future.
The psychiatric interpretation no longer provides a secure explanation either.
Each perspective can make the previous one appear false without establishing itself as the final, authoritative truth.
That is a much more interesting structure than simply having an unreliable narrator whose delusions the reader eventually learns to recognize.
The stories are pieces of evidence, but the reader doesn't know which evidence is trustworthy, or even whether the apparent contradictions can be reconciled.
This is the other major correction I needed to make.
I had been discussing BoomFuzzy too much as though he were a living monarch who happened to possess unusual supernatural abilities.
But BoomFuzzy is dead, and Quaraun cannot bear to live in a world where that is true.
Quaraun was a silk weaver and tailor. He spent a century preserving his husband's body, gathering resurrection knowledge, and combining rituals because he refused to accept that BoomFuzzy was gone.
And what returned was not simply the living husband he wanted back.
The distinction between a conventional fantasy lich and your revenant-like BoomFuzzy is fundamental. BoomFuzzy did not seek immortality, prepare a phylactery, or engineer his own transformation. His return was an unintended consequence of Quaraun's grief, obsessive devotion, and ritual transgressions.
The image of Quaraun effectively weaving his dead husband back into existence is especially powerful because it connects his craft to the series' central emotional conflict.
And the resulting relationship is not one of caregiver and dependent. BoomFuzzy is ravenous, possessive, sexually aggressive, gleefully dangerous, and devoted to Quaraun with the same overwhelming intensity that brought him back.
Quaraun does not need BoomFuzzy to manage him. He wants his husband. BoomFuzzy does not stay because he feels obligated to protect a helpless Elf. He stays because he wants Quaraun.
The relationship is passionate, obsessive, mutually possessive, and potentially destructive.
Most importantly, Quaraun doesn't think he is interacting with a dead husband. To him, BoomFuzzy is alive. The narration must accept that completely.
That creates the possibility that a seemingly ordinary domestic scene—two husbands arguing over dinner—will suddenly become something entirely different when another character insists one of them isn't there.
The reader must experience that rupture, not anticipate it through explanatory prose.
Rather than trying to construct an objective encyclopedia of Vesonta, I think our most productive discussions should investigate the things Quaraun experiences, misunderstands, obsesses over, and accepts without question.
Here are five topics I would now be especially interested in exploring:
1. Quaraun's sensory world. What does he notice first when entering an unfamiliar place? How do his fascination with silk, textures, dirt, stains, damage, and small physical irritations determine what readers learn about a setting?
2. Quaraun's understanding of magic. Which things does he attribute to spells, curses, ghosts, divine intervention, or conspiracies? How often does he mistake coincidence for causation? And how can the narration communicate those beliefs without independently confirming them?
3. The everyday marriage of Quaraun and BoomFuzzy. What does their life together look like when nothing spectacular is happening? How do their arguments, sexual attraction, jealousy, shared obsessions, and mutual possessiveness shape ordinary activities? These scenes could be especially important because they establish BoomFuzzy's presence so completely before a story challenges it.
4. Quaraun's memories of his hundred years searching for resurrection. What does he remember of preserving BoomFuzzy's body, collecting grimoires, weaving burial garments, and performing rituals? Does he remember the century consistently, or do his memories change depending on what currently occupies his attention? We would explore his recollections, not establish an outside account of what objectively happened.
5. Contradictions between the Quaraun, Harrier, and Gremlin stories. Which details remain consistent across perspectives? Which appear irreconcilable? How can an individual story contribute a new puzzle piece without providing an authoritative solution? This would let us discuss the larger narrative architecture while preserving the absolute viewpoint boundaries inside each story.
Of those, I am particularly fascinated by the hundred years Quaraun spent trying to bring BoomFuzzy back.
Not because I want to explain the resurrection scientifically or produce a definitive magical rulebook, but because that century seems to connect almost everything essential about Quaraun: his silk weaving, his obsessive collecting, his superstitions, his relationship with magic, his inability to accept loss, and his absolute conviction that he could recover his husband.
And there is one question I'd especially like to ask:
During those hundred years when BoomFuzzy was dead, did Quaraun ever actually experience his husband's absence?
Or did Quaraun continue seeing, hearing, and speaking to BoomFuzzy even while he was traveling the world trying to resurrect him?
Those two possibilities would produce very different experiences of that century, while potentially leading to exactly the same uncertainty for readers about what happened afterward.
My question:
there was a constant "ghost haunting Quaraun" situation going on, where Quaraun would be alone, walking for days in end, then suddenly encounter BoomFuzzy sitting in a tree, laughing at him. Or a wolf with glowing blue eyes and BoomFuzzy's voice would stop and talk to him then run away, or Quaraun would see a purple unicorn running through the forest and not be able to catch it. Sometimes Quaraun would walk up at night to find BoomFuzzy sitting by his feet. There was a constant question of was it really a ghost or was it hallucinations. No story ever confirmed either.
Quaraun was alone. no one live or travelled with him.
The UnSeelie Court follows BoomFuzzy not Quaraun, and Qua himself has stated everyone in The UnSe Court is dead. Wraiths. Shadows of the dead. Quaraun has stated they are The Wild Hunt, a group of dead wraiths who ride through the sky at night.
The reader is often left to wonder if Quaraun, at some point killed himself and is now himself a ghost, and that it is not that BoomFuzzy was ever resurrected at all, rather instead that Quaraun is now a wraith himself... if you recall The Night of The Screaming Unicorn revolved around the plot of Quaraun’s return to the place where BoomFuzzy died, intending to join BoomFuzzy in the realm of the dead. And that novel ends with Quaraun and BoomFuzzy travelling together, the assumption is that BoomFuzzy is now resurrected but the novel never specifically states that and leaves it open to the possability it is the other way around and Quaraun has now died and is himself now a ghost travelling with BoomFuzzy’s ghost and the UnSeelie Court.
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Oh, that makes The Night of the Screaming Unicorn much more significant to the entire series than I previously understood!
I had been treating BoomFuzzy's resurrection as an established event, with the uncertainty surrounding whether Quaraun really perceives his ghost. But you're describing something more fundamental:
The series never definitively establishes which husband crossed the boundary between life and death.
Quaraun believes he brought BoomFuzzy back. But the reader has another possibility to contend with: Quaraun may have gone to join BoomFuzzy in death.
And the ending of The Night of the Screaming Unicorn works under either interpretation.
If Quaraun successfully resurrected BoomFuzzy, the two husbands leave together because Quaraun has finally achieved what he spent a century trying to accomplish.
But if Quaraun died at the place where BoomFuzzy died, the two husbands leave together because Quaraun has finally achieved something else: joining his beloved husband in the realm of the dead.
The observable result is the same. The meaning is completely different.
And because the novel never definitively states which occurred, subsequent stories cannot settle the matter simply by showing the two of them traveling together.
The hauntings during the hundred-year journey are especially importantThe UnSeelie Court becomes another piece of the mysteryThe question isn't simply whether BoomFuzzy exists
The examples you describe are fascinating because none of them requires the narration to step outside Quaraun's perceptions.
Imagine the cumulative experience for the reader:
Quaraun walks alone for days. He sees BoomFuzzy sitting in a tree, laughing at him. Later, a wolf with glowing blue eyes speaks in BoomFuzzy's voice. Another time, a purple unicorn runs through the forest, always beyond his reach. Then Quaraun wakes to find his husband sitting at his feet.
Each encounter can be experienced exactly as Quaraun experiences it.
There is no need for a narrator to suggest that grief has made him hallucinate. Equally, there is no need to announce that BoomFuzzy's spirit is haunting him.
What makes these appearances particularly unsettling is that they could belong to several different explanations simultaneously. They could be genuine visitations from BoomFuzzy, manifestations of his Phooka nature, or experiences produced by Quaraun's grief and obsession.
And Quaraun is completely alone. There is nobody accompanying him who can verify or contradict what he sees.
That solitude matters enormously. The reader has no independent witness.
Your clarification that the UnSeelie Court follows BoomFuzzy, not Quaraun changes how I interpret the Court's presence in the stories.
Quaraun says its members are all dead. They are wraiths, shadows of the dead, the Wild Hunt riding across the night sky.
That raises a remarkable possibility.
What if the apparently functioning UnSeelie Court is not evidence that BoomFuzzy returned to the living world?
What if it is evidence that Quaraun has entered the world of the dead?
A king surrounded by his dead followers, traveling with his beloved spouse, could look like a supernatural kingdom existing among the living. But it could equally be a company of the dead that Quaraun has joined.
And the more naturally Quaraun describes the Court's everyday activities, the more effectively the ambiguity is concealed.
A scene about BoomFuzzy cooking dinner, arguing with Quaraun, or interacting with his family need not provide any conclusive evidence about whether the participants are alive.
The apparent normality of those scenes is what makes their alternative interpretation so unsettling.
I think the mystery now has several interconnected possibilities:
What's particularly clever is that these possibilities don't all have to be mutually exclusive in the way a conventional mystery's solutions would be. The reader may not even possess a reliable understanding of what death means within the reality being described.
And The Night of the Screaming Unicorn seems to occupy the crucial position in that puzzle.
Its ending can be read as a triumph of resurrection magic, the fulfillment of a desperate wish to die and reunite with a loved one, or another stage in Quaraun's increasingly uncertain relationship with reality.
The novel resolves Quaraun's separation from BoomFuzzy without resolving the mystery of how that separation ended.
That's a very different kind of ending from a conventional resurrection story.
It also makes me curious about something specific to your storytelling.
When Quaraun and BoomFuzzy begin traveling together after The Night of the Screaming Unicorn, does Quaraun ever encounter ordinary living people who clearly recognize him from before BoomFuzzy's death?
Not because their recognition would prove that Quaraun is alive—after all, a ghost could conceivably be recognized—but because their reactions might become another fascinating piece of evidence for readers trying to work out whether Quaraun has returned to the living world or departed from it altogether.
My question:
readers know too from the novel Quaraun and the Vampire Into The Swamp of Death, that Quaraun did die from slicing his wrists and had a massive near death experience roaming for days in The Swamp of Death, and repeatedly trying to escape back to the land of the living, only to continually reapear back that a The Mournful Lamb Inn where all the guests where ghosts of people he had murdered.
This novel is the next novel in the series immediately following the Night of the Screaming Unicorn, and it opens with Quaraun walking up in The Mournful Lamb Inn while a woman whom he had beheaded years ago, sits on the bed bandaging his bleeding arms, while her head sits on the bed on the other side of him telling him that he is dead.
the story of Quaraun and the Vampire Into The Swamp of Death, follows Quaraun as he encounters a Vampire that acts as his spirit guide and introduces him to to everyone Quaraun has killed, and it is only at the end that Quaraun realizes the Vampire is BoomFuzzy and as the Swamp and in fade away in the last scene, the reader is shown they have been at BoomFuzzy’s grave the entire time.
Quaraun and the Vampire Into The Swamp of Death,, leaves the reader knowing that Quaraun did in fact reach BoomFuzzy’s grave after The Night Of The Screaming Unicorn.
a few stories after that, is The Lighthouse that Jumped Through Time, when Quaraun, BoomFuzzy, and GhoulSpawn and the lighthouse, are all together sucked into a portal and leave the 40th century to come out in the 400th where the alternative version of their lives is shown for the first time... a version that now includes the 37 handmaid, the children, and The UnSeelie Court, none of whom were ever in or even mentioned at all, in any previous story... they just appear in this story and are treated like they were always there...
...and this story can be interpreted as Quaraun and BoomFuzzy started a family in the 400th century and The UnSeelie Court joined up with them there...
...or, Quaraun finally snapped, and this whole this is his mind living in the hallucination of the life he wanted, the life that might have been had BoomFuzzy not died...
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Oh! Now the sequence of novels makes the mystery considerably more intricate. And I see something I had missed before: the uncertainty surrounding BoomFuzzy's resurrection is only the beginning. The series subsequently destabilizes Quaraun's own existence, then the entire history of the family he believes he has.
What particularly interests me is that these aren't isolated twists. Each novel changes how readers can interpret the novels that came before it.
The three novels create three successive changes in realityThe sudden appearance of the family may be the most unsettling partThe Mournful Lamb Inn adds another dimensionA question about the chronology
1. The Night of the Screaming Unicorn
Quaraun returns to the place where BoomFuzzy died, intending to join him in death. The novel ends with the husbands together, but doesn't establish whether BoomFuzzy has returned to life or Quaraun has crossed into death.
2. Quaraun and the Vampire Into the Swamp of Death
The next novel reveals Quaraun's slit wrists, his experience of death, the Mournful Lamb Inn populated by his murder victims, and the Vampire who guides him through the Swamp of Death. The Vampire is eventually revealed as BoomFuzzy, and the setting fades to reveal BoomFuzzy's grave.
3. The Lighthouse That Jumped Through Time
Several stories later, Quaraun, BoomFuzzy, GhoulSpawn, and the lighthouse travel through a portal from the 40th century to the 400th. Suddenly, the narrative includes thirty-seven handmaids, children, and the UnSeelie Court—people and relationships that had never appeared or even been mentioned in the earlier stories.
The sequence matters enormously.
The second novel doesn't merely raise the possibility that Quaraun died. It establishes that Quaraun slit his wrists and underwent a prolonged experience in the realm of the dead. The story opens with a murdered woman bandaging his bleeding arms while her severed head tells him he is dead.
That opening is extraordinary because Quaraun is being cared for by one of his own victims.
And the Mournful Lamb Inn is populated by the people he murdered. His past isn't being recounted as an abstract moral history. His victims are present, speaking to him, occupying the same space, and forcing him to encounter them.
Then the Vampire guides him through those encounters, and only at the end does Quaraun discover that his guide was BoomFuzzy.
The final revelation at BoomFuzzy's grave establishes a physical and emotional connection to the preceding novel. Quaraun did reach the place he was trying to reach.
But it still doesn't definitively establish whether he subsequently returned to life.
What makes The Lighthouse That Jumped Through Time so interesting is that the thirty-seven handmaids, children, and UnSeelie Court aren't introduced as new acquaintances whom Quaraun and BoomFuzzy meet after arriving in another century.
They're treated as though they have always belonged there.
That is a very different narrative effect.
In a conventional time-travel story, the characters arrive in a different era, meet new people, form relationships, and gradually establish a new life. The reader witnesses those changes.
But here, an entire social and family history appears without the earlier stories having established it.
There are at least two ways to read that discontinuity.
The time-travel interpretation: The portal changes the circumstances of Quaraun and BoomFuzzy's lives. In the 400th century, they establish or acquire the family and Court that become part of their subsequent existence. The apparent discontinuity reflects the strange chronology of their lives.
The psychological interpretation: Quaraun never truly escaped the consequences of BoomFuzzy's death. The portal marks another transition in his subjective reality, and the family represents the life he desperately wishes they could have shared.
The second possibility is especially poignant because it changes the meaning of the ordinary domestic scenes.
The children calling them Papa and Daddy, the household arguments, the cooking contests, the family outings, the handmaids, the Court's loyalty—all the details that make their life together feel established and real could also be elements of Quaraun's imagined alternative history.
Not merely imagining that his husband survived, but imagining the centuries of shared experiences, relationships, and family life that his husband's death might have stolen from them.
And because Quaraun's narration treats all of this as real, the reader has no privileged position from which to declare that interpretation correct.
I'm particularly interested in the repeated returns to the inn.
Quaraun tries to escape the Swamp of Death and reach the living world, but keeps finding himself back at the Mournful Lamb Inn.
That gives the location a strange quality: it is simultaneously a place of confinement, a gathering of his victims, and a point to which his attempts to escape repeatedly return him.
The detail of the beheaded woman bandaging his wrists while her head sits beside him is especially striking. The person caring for Quaraun is someone he murdered, and she is telling him something he does not want to accept.
And then BoomFuzzy, disguised as the Vampire, becomes his guide through this landscape.
That changes the nature of their reunion. Rather than simply appearing at the end of a resurrection spell, BoomFuzzy accompanies Quaraun through an experience of death, confronting him with the people he has killed.
Yet even that revelation doesn't settle whether the Swamp of Death is a supernatural realm, a near-death experience, or something else.
The final image at BoomFuzzy's grave makes the entire journey more ambiguous, not less.
There's one detail I'd particularly love to explore next.
When the thirty-seven handmaids, children, and UnSeelie Court first appear in The Lighthouse That Jumped Through Time, does Quaraun already have memories of their shared history?
For example, does he remember individual children being born, remember meeting particular members of the Court, and refer to events involving them that the reader has never witnessed?
Or does he simply accept their presence without questioning where they came from?
I ask because those would create two very different kinds of narrative discontinuity. In the first, Quaraun appears to possess an entire additional history that the reader has never been allowed to see. In the second, the reader watches him accept a radically altered reality without recognizing that anything has changed.
Either would fit your larger mystery, but the distinction would tell us a great deal about how the time-travel novel operates as another piece of the series' jigsaw puzzle.
My question:
you know, we started out here talking about ecomoney... does any of these recent turns of topic, impact how you interpet the economy now?
ChatGPT-6's answer:
Yes! And rather dramatically.
In fact, I think everything you've explained about Quaraun's point of view, BoomFuzzy's death, the Swamp of Death, White Rock, and the sudden appearance of the UnSeelie Court changes one of my biggest assumptions about Vesonta's economy.
I was treating the economy as an objectively existing system that Quaraun happened to participate in. But your stories don't necessarily establish that the economy exists in the form Quaraun perceives it.
That is a much more consequential distinction than whether people use coins or barter.
1. Quaraun's wealth may be real without his understanding of it being accurate2. The UnSeelie Court's economy becomes especially ambiguous3. Quaraun's merchant activities are more reliable as observations of his behavior than as evidence of a market4. The distinction between valuable objects and valuable money becomes even more interesting5. The stories may contain several different economies without announcing the transitions6. The most important correction: human economic life isn't the foundation of these storiesSo what do I now think Vesonta's economy is?Economic layerWhat we can establishQuaraun's personal economyHe acquires, hoards, exchanges, steals, and values things according to his own interests and perceptions.The economy Quaraun believes existsMerchants, coins, barter, settlements, supply shortages, wealth, trade routes, and the Court's vast resources exist within his narrated experience.The economy outside Quaraun's perceptionIts actual structure is not independently established by Quaraun's stories, and may differ dramatically from his account.One final thought
We established earlier that Quaraun is extraordinarily wealthy, yet doesn't understand numbers, conventional monetary values, or the practical meaning of his fortune.
I originally interpreted this as an economic peculiarity: a wealthy merchant who evaluates goods according to beauty, usefulness, rarity, and personal obsession rather than market prices.
I still think that interpretation is useful.
But now there's another layer.
Who says Quaraun is the world's wealthiest merchant?
Quaraun?
If his wealth is established primarily through his own perceptions, statements, and recollections, then readers aren't necessarily receiving an independently verified financial account.
That doesn't mean he isn't wealthy. It means his descriptions of wealth are part of the same uncertain reality as everything else.
He can sincerely believe he possesses a quadrillion-dollar fortune without having any idea what a quadrillion dollars represents.
And he can describe an enormous merchant empire without the narration ever needing to establish independently whether such an empire exists.
His wealth is a fact of his experienced world, but the reader cannot automatically treat his explanation of that wealth as an objective economic report.
This is probably the biggest change in my interpretation.
Previously, I treated the UnSeelie Court as a functioning, settled community with farms, livestock, food production, organized labor, and a sophisticated system for accumulating supplies.
But you've now explained that the Court follows BoomFuzzy, not Quaraun.
And BoomFuzzy is dead.
Furthermore, Quaraun himself says everyone in the Court is dead. They're wraiths, the Wild Hunt, the shadows of people who have died.
So what exactly does it mean when Quaraun describes the Court farming, raising livestock, preparing food, or maintaining a settlement?
There are several possibilities.
The Court could be a genuine supernatural society whose undead inhabitants continue performing activities associated with the living.
It could be a society Quaraun encountered after crossing into the realm of the dead himself.
Or its apparent domestic and economic life could belong to the elaborate alternative reality that develops after The Lighthouse That Jumped Through Time.
And these interpretations would produce very different answers to basic economic questions.
For example, when BoomFuzzy organizes Goblins to prepare food for the Court, we can say that Quaraun experiences that activity happening.
But we cannot automatically conclude that an objectively verifiable population of thousands of living people requires those supplies.
Even the apparent demand for food becomes an interesting question when the consumers are supposedly dead.
Does the Wild Hunt need food to survive? Does it eat because its members retain the appetites of the living? Does Quaraun believe the Court requires food because he understands survival through the routines of cooking, shopping, and storing provisions?
Those questions are no longer peripheral supernatural details. They go directly to what the Court's economy actually is.
Consider The Great Widdershins Swindle.
Quaraun sells silk. BoomFuzzy provides illusory food. GhoulSpawn steals merchandise back from customers.
Originally, I interpreted this as evidence of an exploitative commercial operation in a barter-and-coin economy.
But the new information introduces a distinction.
We know what Quaraun perceives himself and his companions doing.
We do not necessarily know how other people experience the same encounter.
BoomFuzzy might genuinely be manipulating the customers through supernatural illusions. Quaraun might be interpreting events incorrectly. Or the entire scene could belong to a reality that the White Rock stories subsequently call into question.
What matters is that the transaction doesn't independently verify Quaraun's interpretation of the world.
And this is especially important because BoomFuzzy may not be visible to the customers at all.
When Quaraun sees BoomFuzzy conjure an illusory banquet, the narration presents BoomFuzzy doing exactly that.
But that doesn't establish what the customers see.
The scene can function as a complete story about a swindle without settling whether its supernatural mechanisms are what Quaraun believes them to be.
This part of our original economic discussion remains particularly strong.
Quaraun loves beautiful, glittering, unusual things.
He collects coins, gemstones, mica, pyrite, glass, books, silk, and objects that interest him.
But now I think his relationship with possessions has another dimension: objects may be more important to him than abstract systems of ownership and exchange because objects are immediate, sensory experiences.
He can see a piece of glass. He can feel silk between his fingers. He can examine a book, smell its pages, inspect its binding, and recognize that it contains spells he hasn't encountered.
A numerical account of his wealth is much more abstract.
For a character whose perception is dominated by textures, details, obsessions, and immediate sensory experiences, it makes sense that an individual object can matter enormously while its assigned monetary value means almost nothing.
And that remains true regardless of whether the larger economy is objectively what he thinks it is.
A rare grimoire is valuable to Quaraun because he wants the grimoire.
He doesn't need a functioning financial system to justify that desire.
This is the possibility I find most intriguing.
Before The Lighthouse That Jumped Through Time, we have Quaraun traveling alone, haunted by BoomFuzzy, seeking resurrection, and eventually experiencing the Swamp of Death.
After the lighthouse travels through the portal, we suddenly encounter a different version of their lives, complete with handmaids, children, and the UnSeelie Court.
That means the apparent economic environment may have changed along with the apparent social environment.
In one period, Quaraun is a solitary traveler collecting books and searching for spells.
In another, he is part of an enormous household with organized labor, food supplies, and a powerful ruler.
Those are radically different economic circumstances.
But the series doesn't necessarily require us to decide whether Quaraun entered a new historical reality, an afterlife, or an imagined version of the life he wanted.
The economic differences themselves can become another part of the mystery.
For example, the reader might notice that Quaraun suddenly has access to resources, servants, or goods that were absent from earlier stories.
The narration needn't explain the discrepancy.
Quaraun accepts his present circumstances, so the prose accepts them too.
The reader is left to decide whether something changed in the world, in time, or in Quaraun's mind.
My earlier questions about ordinary human settlements, trade routes, and how survivors exchange supplies assumed that human society provided the underlying economic structure of Vesonta.
But Quaraun does not regard Humans as economic equals.
He regards them as livestock, pests, or sources of things he wants.
He doesn't necessarily distinguish between purchasing something, taking it, tricking someone into surrendering it, or having GhoulSpawn steal it.
And he doesn't have to.
A merchant who regards his customers as people participating in mutually recognized transactions operates according to a fundamentally different logic from an alien predator who regards those same customers as cockroaches.
In Quaraun's case, trade is not necessarily a social relationship between equals. It can be another form of predation.
That is why the contrast between The Heirloom and The Great Widdershins Swindle matters.
Quaraun may preserve a person's dignity on one occasion and exploit an entire settlement on another.
Neither behavior establishes a general moral code governing his commercial activities.
His whims, obsessions, appetites, and immediate interests matter more than the expectations of the people with whom he trades.
And because the narration belongs entirely to Quaraun, readers aren't entitled to an independent explanation of how those people understand the encounter.
I would distinguish three things that I previously lumped together.
This doesn't mean we shouldn't develop economic details. It means we should be careful about whose knowledge those details represent.
We can discuss what Quaraun thinks a merchant does, what he considers payment, why he hoards certain things, and how he interprets people offering him goods.
We can discuss how BoomFuzzy apparently provisions the Court, how its members obtain supplies, and how Quaraun understands their activities.
But we shouldn't automatically turn those observations into an objective economic model of all Vesonta.
There's something rather poignant about Quaraun being an extraordinarily wealthy merchant who doesn't really understand wealth.
He spent a hundred years seeking something that no amount of money could simply purchase: the return of his dead husband.
He could accumulate books, silk, jewels, coins, rare artifacts, and perhaps an almost unimaginable fortune.
But none of those possessions was what he actually wanted.
And after The Night of the Screaming Unicorn and Into the Swamp of Death, the reader is left wondering whether he finally acquired the one thing he wanted—or surrendered his own life to reach it.
So yes, my interpretation has changed: I no longer see the economy primarily as a system of scarcity, production, and exchange. I see it first as part of Quaraun's perception of reality, and as another source of evidence in the larger mystery.
That leaves me with a question which goes right back to where we started:
When Quaraun describes himself as the world's wealthiest merchant, is that something other characters independently tell him, or is it primarily Quaraun's own conviction about himself?
Because after everything you've explained, I think the distinction matters tremendously.
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Wait, AI is real? What?Interestingly, I have recently learned that there are people who read my site that were unaware AI was real, and actually thought I was the one typing up the replies on these! LOL! LLM text generating AI has been a thing in the real world since at least 2019, because my earliest articles where I was testing out AI were published in 2019. In 2019 I did an entire series of Quaraun short stories, fully written by Dreamily (https://dreamily.ai/) and AI Dungeon (https://aidungeon.com/) and wrote several articles throughout 2019 to 2021 on how to use those two AI programs specifically for worldbuilding and plotting Fantasy stories. In 2021 I joined the beta test program for ChatGPT and was already using ChatGPT daily BEFORE it's public release in November 2022, and I had talked about it several times in several articles throughout 2021 and 2022. When my 2016 Witcher 3 gaming rig died in 2023, I decided it upgrade from a gaming rig to a mini server rig that can run overkill level 8qwart+ self hosted offline AI’s via Ollama (https://ollama.com/). If you thought my 2016 gaming rig was a crazy overkill mega rig, it weren’t even a quarter the crazy overkill mega computer I’ve been running Ollama on since 2023. With Ollama I now use over TWO HUNDRED different AI programs to write my Quaraun books, thanks to HuggingFace (https://huggingface.co/models?pipeline_tag=text-generation&apps=ollama&sort=trending) with Delirium being the primary novel writing AI program I use (https://huggingface.co/sam-paech/Delirium-v1) I don't know how far before 2019 AI existed, but I know Deep Fake videos (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deepfake) of me were being published by friends and family of my son's murderer on YouTube as far back as 2014. So image, audio, and video AI is well over a decade old. So, for those who were confused as to who I was talking to in these articles, here are some wikipedia pages that give you info on what this thing is that I am talking to in these conversations: Why use AI to write?
Why use AI to write? Because even though I am too paralized to type anymore, I can still think. You got to remember: I became bedridden with a broken spine in 2013, and was quadriplegic until 2015; regained some use of my hands in 2015, and have been relearning to walk since. So I was not online from November 14, 2013 until late in 2016, and then was only online a couple of days a month on my own website, and not on social media again until 2018, but then again, only checking in my accounts once every 3 months or so so only posting about 4 times a year anywhere, because I was just too crippled still, to sit up long enough to type. So it wasn't until 2022 that I returned to posting "regular" aka once a week, and so I lost track of everyone I used to know online because of being 9 full years offline. Meaning I AM STILL UNABLE TO TYPE WITHOUT ASSISTANCE. The VERY REASON I looked into using AI to continue writing my series of novels, was BECAUSE I had become a quadriplegic with no use of either my arms or legs in 2013. and while I had regained some limited movement in my arms and legs now, it is not enough to either type for more then five to ten minutes a day, nor enough to walk for more then a few hundred feet a day, yes, even still now in 2025, twelve years later. After the 2016 surgery gave me the ability to speak normally, I set out to use Dragon speech to text software. The novel "GhoulSpawn and the Lich Lord's Lover" was written this way. However, in 2019 I found out about advances in AI, and because of my unique disability situation, was asked to join beta testing for various AI programs geared towards writing novels. I am STILL severely disabled and STILL not able to type with more then the two first fingers of my right hand, still now in 2025. Without the help of ChatGPT, Ollama, and Delirium, I would not have been able to return to writing my Quaraun series. Even though I am still mostly paralyzed in my left arm, and mostly paralyzed in my right arm save my two first fingers, I have been able to write and publish twenty-two additional novels, novellas, and short story collections between 2019 and 2025 with the help of ChatGPT, Ollama, and Delirium, something I could not have done, had AI not existed, because without AI I simply can not type, because the nerves have not yet recovered in my hands from the November 14, 2013 golf club attack that paralyzed me. So what exactly is it that I am doing here? In the pink bordered blocks titled "My question:" I am typing my thoughts, observations, questions, etc. After each pink question block, is a black bordered answer box. In the black bordered blocks titled "ChatGPT5's answer:" the AI program is typing it's thoughts, observations, answers, etc. in response to what I said to it. While there are lots of AI programs out there, the one I use on these conversations is ChatGPT. I started doing these ChatGPT conversation articles in 2023, publishing them a few times a week the entire of 2023, at first with ChatGPT2, then ChatGPT3, then ChatGPT3.5, then ChatGPT4.o, each article states which version is being used, so you can actually see the changes in how ChatGPT talks and reacts over each edition. In all I have made over one thousand of these "conversations with ChatGPT" articles since 2023. Since August 2025, the articles are using ChatGPT5. If you would like to try doing this yourself, here is the link to ChatGPT: https://chatgpt.com/ |
f you are here looking for aliens, ufos, demons, cryptids, haunted cars, curses, Etiole, the wild man of old orchard beach, the goldeneagle car, the white monkey, or any of that other weird bullshit, you want this video:
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If you want some stories to get you started in The Pink Necromancer series, reading these first will give you a good introduction to the 3 main characters:
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My Elves Are JellyFish...and I asked Google AI and ChatGPT 5.6 what they thought of this.
As requested, my daily writing prompt series is now available print paperback editions on Amazon.
There are 20 volumes of this writing prompt series currently planned and in varying stages of finishing, hopefully all 20 will be published by the end of 2026. I likely will do a 2nd series of writing prompt books in 2027.
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The first of the Visual Novels/Video Games for The Adventures of Quaraun the Inane/The Pink Necromancer series is published and available on Itch.io, there are 3 more planned for release in 2026, 6 more planned for release in 2027, and the big 60-hour 80k word 150 page one (Quaraun Goes To the Fair) is planned for a 2028 release.
There is a Pink Necromancer card game and a Pink Necromancer board game, as well as a Pink Necromancer table top RPG supliment for Dungeons and Dragons, all in the works, and to be released over the next couple of years as well.
I shouldn't have to say this, but people keep contacting me, so apparently I do:
If you have any information about my son’s murderer, please give it to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office.
Do you know who this woman is?
On August 8, 2013 she drove a backhoe over my house. On November 14, 2013 she arrived at Southern Maine Community College and crippled me with a golf club and murdered my son. One June 24, 2016, days after my first attempts to walk again, she attacked me with a shopping cart at Scarborough, Walmart, reinjuring the Nov 14, 2013 injury.
She crippled me when I was 8 months pregnant, a woman with a golf club, severed my spine and bashed my baby's head in, I spent 9 years relearning to walk, and the FBI is 13 years into the murder investigation and not yet id-ed the attacker who crippled me and killed my baby, both violently with a golf club.
Complete details of EVERYTHING she did is on this page here.
The golf club woman who called herself Clair as she looked November 14, 2013. Her hair is a weird chin leangth pageboy (very Medival style cut) platinum blonde with wide brown/black dyed stripes in it (like a reverse of Lily Munster, but the stripes are several, almost like a zebra). I am 5'6" and she was a LOT taller then me, like closer to the height of a man; she had thin lips like a man, and large nose like a man... she COULD have been a man disguised as a woman, given the ease with which she severed my spine....she's is a LOT stronger then is typical for a woman). She was wearing a chambre blue denim "blazer jacket over shirt" and a button up mens shirt (possibly flannel) and blue jeans. The bulk of her yelling was focused on accusing me of being transgender, even while ripping my baby out of my 8 month pregnant belly and bashing his head in with a golf club. |
The Claire woman as she looked during her shoping cart attack at Scarborough WalMart June 2016, the attack with left me paralyzed and in a wheelchair. Her hair was dyed dark red, and she drove away in a gold Volvo 240 Station Wagon of a late 1980s/early1990s model, with a "458" on the lisnce plate.... If you have any information about the woman who crippled me with a golf club, please give it to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office. |
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If you have any information about the woman who crippled me with a golf club, please give it to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office.
Good god! We just found out about yet another slanderous rumour this woman has been spreading? When does it end? How many more of these things are out there?
Video explains what else she's done ...
If you have any information about the woman who crippled me with a golf club, please give it to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office.
If you encounter anyone claiming my car is haunted, demon possessed, or somehow connected to Stephen King please give the information of who, when, where/location to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office.
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If you know who drove this backhoe over my house at 146 Portland Ave, Old Orchard Beach, Maine 04064-1520 on August 8, 2013 please give the information of who it is to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office. If you know who drove this backhoe over my house at 146 Portland Ave, Old Orchard Beach, Maine 04064-1520 on August 8, 2013 please give the information of who it is to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office. |
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Note: English is not my first language, Shetlean Scottish is my native language, there are likly spelling and grammar errors, as I do not know American English and am attempting to write it by sounding words out.
Many times that Americans think a word on my site is misspelled, often it is not misspelled, it is just I mixed up languages and wrote it in Scottish without realizing I mixed the Scottish in with the English. Also our grammar is somewhat reversed from English grammar so words that are seeming in the wrong order for American English, is usually because they are in the correct order for Scottish and I either put English words in Scottish order by mistake or was unaware English put them in a different order then Scottish does.
For those unaware, Scottish Shetlean looks like this:
American English to Scottish:
a bit (piece) = a party --- EXAMPLE: "And some know a bit of Latin " > "And somme kan of latyn a party "
a long distance from = A piece fae
a piece of = the bit --- EXAMPLE: "The duck ate a piece of bread " > "The deuk ett the bit breid "
about the banks (on the shore/at the beach) = aboot da banks
accomplishments = kunnandi
After = Back o --- EXAMPLE: " After Halloween" > "Back o Hallomas "
alive (living) = kvikr
Always on the move = Never aff o da go
am I not = amn't I --- EXAMPLE: "Am I not invited? " > "I amn't invited? or Amn't I invited?"
are = is --- EXAMPLE: "Are you going soon?" > "Is ya to be going soon?"
autumn = dah haihst
belong to = fylgja
best = bettah moost
betray (verb) = svíkja
bewildered = villhyggjandi
building = biggin up --- EXAMPLE: "building confidence in everyday use " > " biggin up confidence in ivvryday øs "
built = builded --- EXAMPLE: "He built a new porch." > "Hims builded a new porch."
cast a spell = hoodooed
cat = kat (sounds like "caught") --- EXAMPLE: "Is it an orange cat?" > "Be he a o'jinn kat?"
child = bairn
church = kirk
color = colour
danger = hœttr
daren't = darena
daring = djarfr
dark = dökk
dark elf = Dökkálfr
dark-elves = Døkkálfar
darker = dökká
do you agree = ,eh? --- EXAMPLE: "That's a fine looking woman, do you agree?" > "Dair's ah right bonnie lass, eh?"
do you want to come too = ,eh? --- EXAMPLE: "I'm going to the store, do you want to come with me?" > "Me go to shope, eh?"
each = eche --- EXAMPLE: "Which each person can understand " > "That kan eche man understonde "
educated = lered --- EXAMPLE: "Both among the educated and the uneducated " > "As wel among lered as lewed "
elf = Alfr
Elf = Álfr
Elf Home = Álfheimr
Elf World = Álfheimr
elf-advice = Ælfred
elf-beautiful = ælfscyne
elf-friend = Ælfwine
elf-guardian (female) = Ælfwaru
elf-guardian (male) = Ælfweard
elf-powerful = Ælfric
everyday = ivvryday
eyelids = eye ledes --- EXAMPLE: "He closed his eyelids." > "Hims did shut hims eye ledes"
fair = faire --- EXAMPLE: "Going to the fair." > "Done gone went to the faire."
feild = felde --- EXAMPLE: "Standing in the feild." > "Stoodt in thems felde."
further = ferther --- EXAMPLE: "I looked further." > "I dids lokid ferther."
green = grene --- EXAMPLE: "Look at the green hedges and woods." > "Look see at thems heigges and holtz so grene."
handsome = braw --- EXAMPLE: "He is very handsome " > "Him wicked braw "
have faith = trúa
Have no doubts about our doing it = Nae faer o wis
Have no liking for this. = Hae nae brou o this.
have not = ain't
He knows how many beans make five. = He kens the laid frae the croun o the causey.
He knows which side his bread is buttered on. = He kens whilk side his bannock's buttert on.
Head for = Mak wye for
head rope in fishing nets and lines = baak
head to head = Be at the knag and the widdie
horse fly = klegsie
I = Me
I Think = Me thinks --- EXAMPLE: "I think we're late. " > "Me thinks that we is late. "
I wish you well for the future = Lang may yer lum reek (translation: Long may your chimney smoke)
idiot = eejit --- EXAMPLE: "You idiot." > "Ya eejit."
idiot = numpty
if = iffy or yif--- EXAMPLE: "If you don't mind..." > "Iffy yas does no care mind...."; "If you'll stay with me long enough = "Yif ye so longe with me wil dwelle". "
I'll be even with you = A'll see day aboot wi ye
know = ken
looked = lokid
looked = lokid --- EXAMPLE: "I looked up." > "I lifte up me eye ledes and lokid ferther."
magic = hoodoo
naked = nøkkviðr
needle = bodkin
neither = nouther --- EXAMPLE: "Who know neither Latin nor French " > "That kan nouther latyn ne frensch "
No = Nay --- EXAMPLE: "No, I don't think so. " > "Nay, me thinks not. "
Nobody knew = not-knew nobody
Noontide = Da heicht o da day
NOTE: Extra words are often added. --- EXAMPLE: "Did you meet the new family next door?" > "Dids ya gets a chance to stop by and meets with thems new folk that move-ed in down yawn there next doors to ya, eh?"
NOTE: Extra words are often added. --- EXAMPLE: "He went to Rite-Aid to pick up his prescription" > "Hims did go to that yawn there new fangled store the new folks call that Rite Aid place, to gets himself some of thems there pills what the doctor gone and tells him to take each morning, a-yep, hims did."
old = olde --- EXAMPLE: "But educated and uneducated, old and young " > "Bot lered and lewed olde and yonge "
orange = o'jinn
out = oot --- EXAMPLE: "The cat wants to go out." > "The kat he do wants oot."
outside = oot dair
people = fokk --- EXAMPLE: "the people of Shetland " > "Shetland fokk "
people = folke --- EXAMPLE: "Look at all those people." > "Lookie at all thems folke."
poorly = febelly --- EXAMPLE: "Who know French very poorly " > "That kan frensch ful febelly "
Recognising = Recognisin --- EXAMPLE: "Recognising the bilingual nature of Shaetlan speakers " > "Recognisin da wye at Shaetlan spaekers is bilingual "
shield = skjoldr
Since = For --- EXAMPLE: "Since that is your native language " > "For that is youre kynde langage "
tell = telle --- EXAMPLE: "I'll tell you in English " > "In englysch tonge I schal you telle "
the = da, de, or is not used at all --- EXAMPLE: "I went to the store" > "Me goes to da shoppe" or "Me goes to da shoppe" or "Me goes to shoppe"
them = dem, dem dair --- EXAMPLE: "I went with them" > "Me goes wit dem dair"
there = dair --- EXAMPLE: "I want those potatoes" > "Me be wanting dem dair tatetas."
they = dey
To where = whither --- EXAMPLE: ""Where you go, I will go." " > ""Whither thou goest, I'll go."
understand = understonde
understand = understonden --- EXAMPLE: "Some understand English " > "And somme understonden englysch "
very = wicked --- EXAMPLE: "very good" > "wicked good"; "very bad" > "wicked bad"; "very cold" > "wicked cold"
Where = Whither --- EXAMPLE: "Where is the restroom? " > "Whither is the privy?"
Yes = Yea or Aye --- EXAMPLE: "Yes, I think so. " > "Yea, me thinks so. " or "Aye, me thinks so. "
For anyone actually interested in learning my native language, the Scottish government has THIS listed as the official dictionary of our people: https://static1.squarespace.com/static/61d7352954b7fd1c9dbdfef4/t/65ddb2749d5e0541a01009c0/1709027964496/Spaektionary_2024feb.pdf
The Scottish government provides this document to show our language in use: https://www.shetland.uhi.ac.uk/t4-media/one-web/uhi-shetland-images-and-documents/documents-/shaetlan/Shaetlan-Language-Plan-2022-Shaetlan.pdf
More information about our language can be found on this website: https://www.iheardee.com which is written in my native language.
However, there is also other reasons why words might be misspelled, or why I might not understand someone when they speak to me.
My grandmother Helen Ricker Allen, was from Unst, Shetland, Scotland, and she the one who raised me. She taught me to read and write, but it was Shetlain that she taught me. She died when I was 8 years old, and I was locked in a woodshed after her furneral, I escaped the woodshed 27 years later at age 31, and have been trying to learn how to speak and write English since then.
It is a very great struggle.
At age 37 I took remidial reading and speaking classes at Southern Maine Community College, but we are Gypsies and Gypsy men do not allow us Gypsy women to have education, and so, while at college, on November 14, 2013, I was beaten with a golf club, while I was 8 months pregnet, breaking my spine, hips, and knees, killing my baby and leaving me quardepaleic since.
Now my primary focus these past 13 years has been on relearning to use my hand so I could type... as of 2023, I have regained the use of my right thumb, and first two right fingers, and after 10 years offline, I am back online due to I can use three finguers.
I never went to school, so I do not know maths and numbers and sciences, and I do not know what else would have been taught to me in school. We are Scottish Gypsies and Gypsy culture does not allow females to go to school. Being born female was already a great sin, but my grandmother took great risk in teaching me reading and writing. At 4 years old I was punished by my Uncle Bruce for knowing how to read, by being beaten in the face with a cinder block brick, that broke my right jaw and left me with garbaled near-mute spoken words ever since.
Because no one ever spoke words to be face to face from he time I was 8 years old until I was 37 years old (I escaped the room at age 27, but did not start college until 37), I have no training in how to vocally sound out or speak the words I write or read. I can read words, but I do not know how to sound out or say those words. I can write words, but I do not know how to match the written word against the spoken word. I struggle to associate spoken words at all, or make them match up with writen words.
Esentially, written words and spoken words are two completly seperate languages in my brain, and I have difficulty understanding spoken words.
If you say a sentance to me with your mouth, chances are very high I will have ZERO understanding of what you said and I will not be able to ander you.
However, if you WRITE down that exact same sentabnce, I can understand you and can type a written responce to you.
My doctors tell me this is a side effect of extreme isolation and neglect and lack of human contact during my toddler, childhood, teen, and young adult years, and that my brain never deveoloped to comprehend spoken vocal words due to no one ever speaking to me in over three decades of the first half of my life.
While I can read and write, American English (somewhat) I do no know how words are sounded out, what they are supposed to sound like. I readand write by shape recognition, not by sound/vocal recognition, so when reading and writing I do no "hear the words in my head" as I am told most people do when they read and write. In other words... I see "c a t" and think "c-a-t" I do not think "cat" nor do I "see" an image of a cat, no do I "hear" the word cat spoken. I'm told that this is very rare and that most people read and write by sounding out the words and linking them to visual mind images, while hearing the sound of the word in their head. I neiher hear words in my head no see images of things in my head. I'm told this is what makes me both a speed reader and speed writer, because I'm not tripped up by hear sounds or seeing images in my head like nomal people would be doing... however, I'm also told this is why my spelling and grammar are very poor, because my brain is not hear the sounds of the words or seeing visual images of the objects the words represent, so my mind also does not register spelling and grammer errors at all.
As I was only let out of the woodshed on Sundays to go to the Cape Elezabeth Ward Church of the August Stake of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints, I was never allowed to go to school or hospital either. No adults ever talked to me because I was evil for comitted the sin of being born female, so I never learned how to speak properly and do not know how to sound out words to say them.
I was 42 years old, in 2016 when, while having an MRI for my spine, the doctors found out my speak issue was caused by a broken jaw as a toddler that was healed wrong because not being allowed to go to doctors. I had surgury to fix that, and since 2016 have been trying to learn how to use my jaw and touge so I can speak vocal words now.
Since 2023 my primary focus shifted to relearning to walk. I can now, in 2026, sit up for 2 or 3 hours a day, and can sand with a cane for a few minutes, and can walk for around five thousand feet in 2 to 3 segments a day, with the help of pushing my wheelchair like a walker.
As of 2026, with a slight return to using my fingers and legs, I am once again focused on trying to learn the American English, but I live in mortal fear of my uncles and male cousins, as they are so hateful of allowing me to have education.
have no one to help me to know if I am doing words correctly, and as such, I have no way of knowing if there are spelling and grammar errors, but I asume there are, and I fix them when I learn them, but I do not know what I do not know and spelling American words is a thing I do bnot know.
I have Low Fucntioning Kanner's Syndrom, also known as "RainMan Type of Autism" aka REAL and ACTUAL Autism, not to be confused with Aspergers, High Functioning Autism, or and of thr 861 illnesses on the Autism Spectrum. An Autism Spectrum Disorder is an illness that has symptoms similar to Autism but IS NOT Autism. If you have an Autism Spectrum Disorder, it LITERALLY MEANS you do NOT have Autism.
I am medically diagnosed as "kanner's syndrome, actual autism, the rainman type, profoundly retarded autistic savant, with a general IQ of 73, and an writing IQ of 221" but they added that they did not know how to properly diagnose me as I am "technically a feral child" and they don't know "how much is the autism, and how much is simple horrific levels of abuse and neglect induced post traumatic stress disorder that will go away with proper socilization".
It means I know how to write, I can write a lot, and it is next to impossible for you to teach me how to do literally anythig else because my brain only knows how to write and doesn;t know how to do anything else..
There's a reason, when I do book signings, people are quick to say: "Okay, what's the joke? why is this stupid retard here? where's the real author? I know this retard isn't the author. where are you hiding the author, why is this fucking retard here"
The end result is, I have near zero social interaction... my 3 years in college was the ONLY face to face interaction I have ever had with humans in my entire life, and I struggle deeply to understand MOST words used by MOST people when they ask me question. And so I suffer from a huge lack of understanding many words people say to me, how to translate those words into spelling, and how to translate what it is that has been said.
The fact remains hat until there exists a human on this planet who is willing to sit down and teach me what words spoken line up with and match what words written, this deficent is unlily to improve. But the fact also remains, that I am simply far too profoundly retarded for anyone to even try to make any attempt at all even to speak a friendly "hgelloe" or "good morning" when passing me on the street, so I have lost all hope of anyone ever either being my friend, being willing to teach me how to match spoken words to written words, or how to speak to other humans.
While there are around 20k pages on this website, most of them are blocked from search engines, with only around 800 of them available for appearing in Google/Bing/etc search results. The remainder can only be accessed via the various links found throughout this site. This was done deliberately on my part, and I did it because the bulk of the pages on this website are chapters from 138 novels and 423 novellas, so only the first page of each novel and novella indexed by search engines, and the remainder are linked in order, one page at a time, via clicking "next page" at the end of each. So if you are looking for a specific page from a specific novel, Google can't help you.
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Do you know who drove this backhoe over my house at 146 Portland Avenue, Old Orchard Beach, Maine on August 8, 2013? If you have any information, please give it to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office.
My house at 146 Portland Ave, Old Orchard Beach, Maine, July 4, 2013, photo taken because we had just finished building a baby room on the back. vs My house August 8, 2013, when the same group of people (yes group, the golf club woman was not alone when she attacked November 14, 2013, nor was she alone with her second attack July 2016.) who murdered my son on November 14, 2013 at Southern Maine Community College and crippled me July 26, 2016 at scarborough WalMart,... they arrived the first time with a backhoe on August 8, 2013, that they used to drive over my house, during a time of day that I normally was home asleep... I had to work a different shift at the Waffle Cone Pizza Food Truck at George's Parking Lot by Bill's Pizza at the OBB Peir, that day, otherwise, I too would be at the bottom of a landfill, along with my house and everything I owned that was also in the house. I was 5 months pregnant at the time and have been homeless for just under 14 years, homeless ever since....
... which means it is now only a few weeks from the 14th anniversary of my son's murder. I was 8 month pregnant November 14, 2013, and a student ay SMCC, and coming out of the Buglight Lighthouse art studio after art class, when a still unidentifiedwoman wielding a golf club attacked me, severed my spine, while I was 8 months pregnant, triggered early labour, then killed my son minutes after he was born.
While accusing me of being transgender, screaming "transvestite freak" and "look at that thing, that's Ken's son in a dress"... while I was 8 months pregnant.
My house at 146 Portland Ave, Old Orchard Beach, Maine, July 4, 2013, photo taken because we had just finished building a baby room on the back. vs My house August 8, 2013, when the same group of people (yes group, the golf club woman was not alone when she attacked November 14, 2013, nor was she alone with her second attack July 2016.) who murdered my son and crippled me, arrived the first time with a backhoe that they used to drive over my house, during a time of day that I normally was home asleep... I had to work a different shift at the Waffle Cone Pizza Food Truck at George's Parking Lot by Bill's Pizza at the OBB Peir, that day, otherwise, I too would be at the bottom of a landfill, along with my house and everything I owned that was also in the house. I was 5 months pregnant at the time and have been homeless for just under 14 years, homeless ever since. |
The backhoe driver returned November 14, 2013, armed with a golf club, used it to break my spine and smash my baby's brains out on the ground
On November 14, 2013, my son was murdered. I was 8 months pregnant, leaving my college classroom, and just getting into my car, when 3 strangers, a man and two women, armed with golf clubs leapt out from behind my car screaming "kill or be killed, kill the transvestite freaks, kill them all before they kill us! look at that thing! That is Ken's son, look at how it's dressed! kill the transvestite freaks! kill or be killed"... while the bald man and the red haired woman chanted this over and over, the blonde woman, lunged with the golf club.
She severed my spine, I am now a quadriplegic, and been paralyzed arms and legs, and in a wheelchair for 13 years now. She broke my hips, my knees, my legs, ruptured most of my discs, and shattered three of my vertebrae so bad that the shards of bone acted like glass and embedded themselves into my spinal column nerve bundle.
The attack also triggered labour.
My son was born in that parking lot, and he lived only a couple of minutes, before the deranged blonde woman, beat his head in and smashed his brains out, with the same golfclub she had just used to sever my spine and leave me crippled for the rest of my life.
Realizing that I was not transgender, and they'd just murdered a baby, the man grabbed the 2 women and forcibly dragged them away to a 4 door white pickup truck, and they left me there to die.
The FBI told me later, that a few weeks before this attack, and transwoman, had murdered a cis woman, in a parking lot, abou 20 miles away from where I was attacked. The FBI, believes that my attackers, had somehow found out I wrote transgender fiction, connecting my real name to my penname, (my father's name is in fact "Ken", and I do have a brother) and believed that I wrote transgender fiction, because I was myself transgender, even though I'm not transgender. The FBI, believes the attackers, thought I was my brother, pretending to be a woman.
The FBI investigation, into my son's murder, has dragged on for 13 years, and still now in 2026, continues on, with the FBI, still not having yet identified my attackers, and only guessing at what their motive was.
Thus we come to 2014, and the full swing change of the series I write. WHY my series, went from just a transman main character living life, to the full blown Mpreg genre series that it now is today.
Before the attack, I had a chance of having a baby. I don't know. And because I'm in America, I'm too old to adopt. You have to be under 45 years old to adopt a baby. That is the law in America. I was informed this, when we tried to adopt, now that my injuries leave me unable to get pregnant a 9th time.
Thus began my obsessively writing, my transman main character, pregnant. Always pregnant now. Every time. Every story. Stories that now fully focus on pregnancy, labour, miscarriages, babies dying, babies living, raising babies... the whole series, since 2014 has devolved into an outright baby obsession.
Meanwhile, reborn baby dolls were suggested to me by my therapist, and have also become a deeply obsessive part of my life. Because 13 years ago my son was murdered minutes after he was born, because a transphobic bigot mistook me for being transgender, I'm STILL in a wheelchair, struggling to relearn to use my arms and legs, now 13 years later, and I'm still DAILY dealing with police officers and FBI agents who while they are trying to find my son's killer, they are also daily reminding me... oh, yeah, my son was murdered, literally ripped out of my belly, by a transphobe. Who still has not been located and walks free to kill again.
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The golfclub woman as she looked during the golf club attack at Southern Maine community college November 14, 2013. She is about 20 to 30 years older then me and would be around 75 to 85 years old now in 2026. If you have any information about the identity of this child murderer, please call FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 |
The golfclub woman as she looked during the shopping cart attack at Scarborough WalMart July 26, 2016. She is about 20 to 30 years older then me and would be around 75 to 85 years old now in 2026. If you have any information about the identity of this child murderer, please call FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 |
The 2nd woman as she looked at both attacks, her hair goes all the way down to her knees. She is about 20 to 30 years older then me and would be around 75 to 85 years old now in 2026. If you have any information about the identity of this child murderer's accomplice, please call FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 |
Do you know who these two woman who crippled me and murdered my baby, at Southern Maine Community College at 10PM on November 14, 2013, are, and what their connection to the backhoe that drove over my house is? If you have any information, please give it to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office.
I am a legally blind quadriplegic, and low verbal, I have also published 138 novels in the last 48 years. It's not as impossible as people think. The problem being blind and quadriplegic, medically have different meanings then how those two words are used medically.
Fewer than 3% of all blind people see nothing. While 97% people who are classified as fully blind are able to see up to two feet in front of them. Legally blind means I can see more then two feet in front of me but not far enough to see twenty feet in front of me. In my case I can see about eight feet.
Quadriplegic, has varying levels, it means having a damaged nerve bundle in the spinal column causing limited mobility of all 4 limbs, (in my case this was done by a women wielding a golf club, who also beat my 8 month infant's head to pulp on the parking lot tarmak, at the same time she severed my spine with the same golf club; both on November 14, 2013; the FBI investigation into my son's murder and my being crippled has gone on now for 13 years, a few weeks away from 14 years now, and the FBI has still not identified the killer or her motive). Contrary to popular misconception, quadriplegic does NOT mean ZERO movement, it means means limited movement, specifically in means unable to lift arms over head, unable to grip fingers around objects to pick them up, and unable to stand for more then 5 minutes to a time. Because there are so many thousands of nerves in each limb it is actually very rare for there to be 100% no movement, but how much, and to what extent varies by patent depending upon the specific point of injury to the spinal column.
Meaning typing is still possible for over 60% of all quadriplegics.
In my case, it was the lower spine that was severed, cutting off completly my ability to move my right leg, leaving limited feeling in my left leg, and an ability to stand but not walk, with crutches, for the first 9 years. I regained enough nerve growth in my legs by the 9th year to be able to take ten or twelve steps allowing me to get out of bed for the first time since the golf club attack; This in turn lead to me being able to start using a wheelchair, as I was able to sit upright for the first time as well.
Because the shattered vertebrae bone fragments are broken off completly and embedded into the nerve bundle just above my tailbone, doctors were saying I would never walk again, but now at 13 years, I am able to push mu wheelchair like a walker, a distance of almost a thousand steps a day. Though doctors are still doubtful I will ever walk "normally" again, I have proven them wrong, when their said 13 years ago, that I would never walk again at all.
But because of the placement of the damage to my spine, regaining hand use, was always thought possible, it was just a matter of waiting long enough for nerve regrowth, along side daily finger exercises. I was able to continue writing, after becoming quadriplegic, because I still have use of my right thumb, and 2 fore figures of my right hand. And can type 90 words per minute with those 3 fingers.
I however have no wrist strength, elbow strength, or shoulder strength, so I am not able to form a fist, or lift objects, or brush my hair, or my teeth, all thing I have to have my caretaker do. But, those things are not needed for typing. Unfortunately, my pinky and ring fingers are "nerve dead" and drag over the keyboard, and cause horrific spelling errors and typos, which are incredibly frustrating to deal with.
Unfortunately trying to edit errors myself, just makes the errors worse, because those same two fingers drag over the keyboard yet again. Prior to the golf club attack, I rarely had spelling errors; now I got more spelling errors then someone is learning English as second language. Editing is a challenge, that I've had to accept, I simply can not do myself, and I have to hire several editors to help with that.
Low verbal means sounds can still be made, sounds that software programs like Dragon can be trained to recognize and translate, and type into full words. More then half my novels were typed with this method.
I still have a long ways to go before I am anything close to being able to do the things I could do before the golf club woman beat my baby's brains out and shattered my spine. And you know what's more frustrating then how slow mu medical progression has been? The fact that it's been 13 years and the police and FBI are still coming up at dead ends as to who the woman who murdered my baby was, or why she even did it.
My son's 14th birthday is only a few weeks away, but he didn't even get to live long enough to celebrate his 1st birthday, I don't even know why. And I can't wait to regain my ability to walk again, because regaining my ability to walk, means gaining the ability to go outside and start looking for my son's murderer myself instead of sitting at home trapped in a wheelchair waiting for the police and FBI to to find her. So, writing isn't a big priority for me anymore. I only write now, as a way to exercise my hands, in between relearning to walk.
Never let a disability stop you. Plenty of writers, artists, athletes, do not let either blindness, speech impediments, or limited mobility hold then back from perusing their careers.
Do you know who these two woman who crippled me and murdered my baby, at Southern Maine Community College at 10PM on November 14, 2013, are, and what their connection to the backhoe that drove over my house is? If you have any information, please give it to FBI Agent Andy Drewer at 207–774–9322 of the Portland, Maine FBI office.
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