EelKat Wendy C Allen - Dark Fantasy Author

UPDATE March 17, 2021: Another death. Waiting for a coffin to be delivered. Funeral the 21st. Unlikely to be streaming for a few weeks.

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Update: March 27, 2021: It's not even been a week since the funeral, and now there is another death and another funeral.

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UPDATE April 5, 2021: There are still no streams, as, we've now a another funeral to prepare for.

And that is now 3 deaths in our family, in the past 2 weeks.


13 deaths since March 2020.


This one hits harder than the others. Pippi died today.

April 10, 2015, 12 children were kidnapped.

May 15, 2015, the heads of 10 of them were nailed to my door.

August 24, 2020, one was found still alive. he was just 4 years old when she was kidnapped, but she remembered us, even though 5 years had passed.

August 25, 2020, Pippi came home, but her condition was not well. She had been tortured the entirety of the 5 years she had been held hostage. She was missing limbs and covered with scars, had broken many years not set, and suffered serious damage to many of her internal organs. That she was alive at all, in her condition, was a miracle. Doctors had little hope of her survival and she was sent home with Hospice care.

This is why there were no/to few streams from May 2020 until now.

May 2020, after 4 years of not hearing from them at all, the FBI returned with a lead, which led to Pip's discovery a few weeks later in August.

Because of the nature of the situation, I could not talk about it, to tell you why streams had stopped.

The kidnappers, were enraged that we had recovered Pip, and that is when the attacks started up again on my home and family September 2020.

Pip's condition continued to grow worse, and she died April 5, 2021.

She was only 10 years old.

This is what it means, to not be white in America.

White men, won't even give a child the chance to grew up.

This is what white people do, to none white families like mine.

We are Gypsies with Jewish blood, for that alone we are hunted like animals.

What the men of Old Orchard Beach, Maine, did to my family, will never be forgotten or forgiven.

If you have any information on the kidnappers or the murders...

FBI Agent Andy Drewer out of the Portland, Maine FBI office is in charge of the of the April 10, 2015 kidnapping of my 12 children by 14 Ku Klux Klan men who invaded our home and the subsequent May 15, 2015 murder of 10 of the 12 whom had their heads nailed to my front door. If you have information about the case, give it to him not me. He can be reached @ +1-(207)-774-9322 

NOTE: Chat is set to emote only on my Twitch channel and my personal contact information has been removed from my website and every place else, due to the HUNDREDS OF THOUSANDS of false reports of "information", along with vile hateful memes about the murder of my family being sent to me by trolls who think mocking the murder of my family is funny.

FBI Agent Andy Drewer out of the Portland, Maine FBI office is in charge of the of the April 10, 2015 kidnapping of my 12 children by 14 Ku Klux Klan men who invaded our home and the subsequent May 15, 2015 murder of 10 of the 12 whom had their heads nailed to my front door. If you have information about the case, give it to him not me. He can be reached @ +1-(207)-774-9322 


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Novel Writing Tips: Writing physical descriptions of characters' faces


By EelKat Wendy C Allen


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any advice for physical description of characters. particularly faces

any advice for physical description of characters. particularly faces from writing


>>for example this girl a model i found while searching for some one who would look similar to one of my characters , i tried looking for information on face shapes but i can't tell if this is heart or oval. https://i.imgur.com/zN5Rudw.jpg

Her face is neither heart nor oval, it's oblong. You would learn stuff like that in a portrait drawing class (at a community college).

I would describe her thusly:

"The kid was a young girl with an angelic child-like face. Wide innocent brown eyes. Heavily freckled nose. A California bleach blonde whose dark eyebrows give away her true hair colour. Large pouty lips, and a whisper of blush against milky porcelain skin. Her long hair flowing like a waterfall over her bare shoulders."

>>i'm mainly confused on how one would describe faces.

I'd also more likely say things things in character dialogue, not in description.

So a character would say: "Here, give this not to that kid over there."

"Which kid?"

"The young girl."

"Which young girl, there are several of them there."

"The one with the angelic face, puppy dog brown eyes, freckled nose, and golden hair flowing down her shoulders like a waterfall. She's hot. I want to get to know her."

"Her? Are you kidding me? She's what, like twelve!"

"She's an angel. Look at that porcelain skin."

"she's fake."

"what do you mean?"

"Look at her hair. Bleached blonder then a California surfer."

"Could be real..."

"No with those black eyebrows."

The conversation, describes her, without any need for descriptions.

The terms "kid" and "young girl" and "child-like face" and "wide innocent eyes" clue the reader in on the fact that she's a child, possibly as old as a teenager, maybe, but certainly not an adult or a woman.

Comparing her unnatural hair colour to her natural brow colour also implies youth (most women bleach their brows as well, so as not to hint to their dyed hair, a teen generally would not think to do that; woman who don't bleach their brows do it to try to look like a child.)

Skin, hair, and eye colours, shape of lips, and style of hair is all that is described.

If she was tall or short I would mention it, but if she was average height I probably wouldn't mention her height.

Unless she was very overweight or very underweight, I wouldn't mention her body size, and even than I'd only mention it through other character's dialogue and not in a description.

For example, I'd show her insecurities about her weight, by having a character call her:

"Piggy" (if overweight) or "Twiggy" (if underweight) and then focus on her reaction to these words.

If she was a strong personality, I'd show her standing up for herself against the bully. If she had a low self esteem, I would show her running to her room and crying, etc. Followed by her either binge eating or binge dieting or other reaction, which would show her upset about how others see her weight. But I'd never say how much she weighed.

A girl who used to be fat but lost the weight, might still be bullied.

"You used to be Piggy and now you are Twiggy."

And if she had a strong personality, I'd have her yell back:

"Yeah, but both Piggy and Twiggy were glamorous fashion models and you're just jealous that I look like 2 models and you look like none."

Doing something like this avoids boring descriptions, gives the reader a general idea of body size, and more importantly, shows the reader her personality and how she handles herself around bullies.

I find it is better to pepper character dialogue with descriptive details, rather then bog the reader down with long descriptive narratives.

In the Quaraun series you see the descriptions of most characters being very vague allowing the readers to see what they want to see. By doing this, you let the reader identify with the character, by letting them think the character has the same body type as them (the reader.)

In the case of Quaraun and Unicorn, their heights are both said, because it is important to the plot.

Both Quaraun and Unicorn are very short. Quaraun is five feet six inches, while Unicorn is five feet one inch. This makes Unicorn nearly a foot shorter than the average adult male, and a full head shorter than Quaraun, who is also shorter than the average adult male. Both are bullied because of their lack of height, the bullying becomes central to the plot.

On the other hand, it is never said how tall GhoulSpawn is, only that he he quite a bit taller than both Quaraun and Unicorn, and often is said to be taller than Humans they encounter. This means he is likely to be around six feet tall.

In the case of GhoulSpawn it is enough to know that he is taller than his companions. His height is not important to the plot, other than for his simply being taller than Quaraun.

In most stories you see no mention of how much the three wizards weigh.

However in The Vulgar Alchemist, Unicorn becomes serious wounded, resulting in infection, leading to him nearly dying.  At the same time he becomes very depressed and refuses to eat (something he does frequently, when upset, but in this case he goes extreme with it).

In this particular story, Unicorn nearly starves to death, losing most of his body fat. Quaraun leaves, thinking he's left Unicorn in the care of 2 good friends. Not aware that they do not like Unicorn and neglect his health.

When Quaraun returns he finds, Unicorn on his death bed and the dying Phooka is described as having lost most of his body fat and muscle, being reduced to a near skeleton.

There are instances when Quaraun's weight is described, but minimally.

Early in the series, Quaraun is described as "thin", "skinny", or "boney". These descriptions are said by Unicorn during conversations.

He says things like: "Me skinny lil, Elf" or "Ya needs to eat more. Put some fat on thems bones."

Unicorn is a chef, and starts making a lot of fattening food, with the goal of fatten Quaraun up. He starts drugging the Elf's food to get him addicted to it.

As a result of Unicorn's method of overfeeding Quaraun, you see Quaraun described in later novels as "chubby". You also see Unicorn slapping Quaraun, pinching him, and "squeezing his belly fat".

You see over the course of the series, Quaraun go from a young, very underweight adolescent, to an old heavier set wizard, with him slowly gaining more weight the older he gets, but this never described in the narrative and only Unicorn's dialogue to tell the reader this.

Their faces, are never described though.

Quaraun is described as:

  • albino
  • whiter then snow
  • pure white hair
  • hair that reached to the ground
  • Rapunzal hair
  • silken hair
  • wide blue eyes
  • clear blue eyes
  • ice blue eyes
  • pink pupiled eyes
  • a young innocent face
  • soft feminine features
  • often mistaken for a female
  • small framed body
  • curvy body
  • wearing fake eyelashes made of feathers

No mentions of the shape of his face is ever made. There is really no reason for it.


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